A Very Short Movie I Made

**hoochan** · 02-15-2009, 09:18 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=prWuaYFV770

I had to do this for a class. I originally had a lot more going into it but time screwed me over. Tell me what you think, I guess.

**dandandamdandan1111** · 02-15-2009, 09:39 AM

**Phynx** · 02-15-2009, 10:19 AM

Meh, the directors line seems to have been crossed a few times, composition COULD have been better but it's acceptable for high school standards. Also in terms of plot presentation... I'm kinda lost, is this about the kid disappearing after he gets knocked down?

EDIT - What was the running for lol, I missed dialogue at the beginning if their was supposed to be any.

NFD · 02-15-2009, 02:52 PM

Everybody likes The Who.

Syhto · 02-15-2009, 07:41 PM

I think there was a lot of running involved

Xx{neon}xX · 02-15-2009, 08:31 PM

i was just surprised your water fountain worked none in my school do :/

CapnSkyOsiris · 02-16-2009, 10:13 AM

My college was new and the water tasted like pipes.

If you were going for camera angles and shots, then it's alright...but yea otherwise I totally don't get it.

OrganisM · 02-23-2009, 04:31 AM

Maybe it makes more sense on drugs. Brb, taking drugs.

Sh4d0wD3v1L · 02-23-2009, 09:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syhto

I think there was a lot of running involved

"And I ran......I ran so far away....."

Verruckter · 03-12-2009, 06:39 PM

Running has never looked less convincing.

02-15-2009, 09:18 AM	#1
hoochan woah shrooms Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 3,840	A Very Short Movie I Made http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=prWuaYFV770 I had to do this for a class. I originally had a lot more going into it but time screwed me over. Tell me what you think, I guess.

02-15-2009, 09:39 AM	#2
dandandamdandan1111 the baker man Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: merryland Age: 30 Posts: 2,176	Re: A Very Short Movie I Made what

02-15-2009, 10:19 AM	#3
Phynx I'm Forever Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Twin Falls, Idaho Age: 34 Posts: 2,999	Re: A Very Short Movie I Made Meh, the directors line seems to have been crossed a few times, composition COULD have been better but it's acceptable for high school standards. Also in terms of plot presentation... I'm kinda lost, is this about the kid disappearing after he gets knocked down? EDIT - What was the running for lol, I missed dialogue at the beginning if their was supposed to be any. __________________ Guardin' of the Scared Shrine

02-15-2009, 02:52 PM	#4
NFD FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico Age: 31 Posts: 4,715	Re: A Very Short Movie I Made Everybody likes The Who. __________________

02-16-2009, 10:13 AM	#7
CapnSkyOsiris FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Neverland Posts: 344	Re: A Very Short Movie I Made My college was new and the water tasted like pipes. If you were going for camera angles and shots, then it's alright...but yea otherwise I totally don't get it. __________________

02-23-2009, 04:31 AM	#8
OrganisM FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Nesoi, Olympus System Posts: 2,644	Re: A Very Short Movie I Made Maybe it makes more sense on drugs. Brb, taking drugs. __________________ . Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]: "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee, because the venom gets into the blood stream which spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body... changing your genetic structure into a bee's. Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way." Originally Posted by MrRubix[link]: "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?" Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]: "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."

03-12-2009, 06:39 PM	#10
Verruckter FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Canada, with the cool people! Posts: 2,707	Re: A Very Short Movie I Made Running has never looked less convincing. __________________ Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged Image removed for size violation.

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