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Old 08-30-2007, 08:48 PM   #1
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Post a few of my published poems

My knees begin to shake whenever you're in sight. My mind filled with wonder, my heart filled with fright. Why did this happen? When did this start?How do I listen to my mind without breaking my heart? I'm confused, Don't know what to do. I can't think of anything except you. Should I just get over it or should I give it time? I don't know what to do because my heart controls my mind.

In the darkness I sit, absorbing it all in. Letting the pain surge through every inch of my body, Succumbing to it's sting. And I laugh to myself because I truly believed you loved me...

I'm gonna draw a picture, a picture with a twist, I'll draw it with a razor blade, I'll draw it on my wrist, as I draw this picture a fountain will appear, and as this fountain flows, washing away my sorrow, washing away my fear, my troubles will disappear.

I use my eyes to look into your beautiful soul. I use my ears to listen to your problems, hopes and fears. I use my voice to tell you how much I love you and how much you mean to me. I use my mouth to kiss your beautiful lips. I use my hands to outline your beautiful body. Every piece of myself I devote to you forever.



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Old 08-30-2007, 11:27 PM   #2
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Default Re: a few of my published poems

None of these poems are yours.
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Old 08-31-2007, 11:33 AM   #3
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Default Re: a few of my published poems

Viva la Google, bitch.

Not like this is anything I'd want to steal, that is. I've heard better poems from unlikely poets in my English I class.
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