Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 29

**Ghakimx** · 12-1-2009, 03:04 PM

i hope my file got through the male.

Edit: MAIL, NOT MALE, DAMIT.

moches · 12-1-2009, 04:46 PM

Improve your MA.

**Gundam-Dude** · 12-1-2009, 05:24 PM

(alexdestructions vs Bynary Fission) 888
32nd patterns and jacks were god awful. Quit out. Rejected

(Diokatsu) Tender Kiss
Decent attempt for you but still not quite there yet. Rejected

(CBR) Don't Say Lazy - DJ Hirojack Mix - V2
Pretty generic due to song choice. Freezes are abused and overused. Not pack worthy. Rejected.

(Huzure) Heart of Witch
Kommisar already made a good file for this. Decent attempt at keyboard stepping though. Rejected

(Dimentio) Jumper V2
Good Vibrajack file (already accepted the previous version over there) but I honestly don't see myself accepting this here. There was really nothing too notable or replayable to me aside from the jacks and layering. I'd say send this update to Vibrajack. Rejected

(Moches) Programmed Sun
Yeah, I'm going to have to agree that Programmed World was definitely a lot better. Well composed and cool BPM gimmicks though so I'll say Maybe for now. I'll have to think about this.

(Ghakimx) Final Step
There's freeze abuse (a lot of unnecessary freezes that just clutter up the file). Some parts are better than Iamme's file while others weren't. Trill at Measure 70 was aids. File kinda surprised me though. You're a lot better at stepping than I was initially expecting so I see potential coming from you. Good for any other pack, but for this pack, you're gonna have to work on this more. Rejected.

cedolad · 12-1-2009, 06:15 PM

sent in file.

**Ghakimx** · 12-1-2009, 09:25 PM

:O
:O
:O
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:D
:D
:D
:D

Never have I been so happy from a review of a rejected file.

cedolad · 12-1-2009, 09:27 PM

Damn it Ghakimx. You got me excited. I thought I got a review for one of my files >:/

**Ghakimx** · 12-1-2009, 09:30 PM

HAHAHAHAH. Suxor.

**jimerax** · 12-1-2009, 09:40 PM

Final Step is one of songs that definitely needs an awesome restep.

**Ghakimx** · 12-1-2009, 09:42 PM

yeah, behanjc's version was balls, to be honest.

Huzure · 12-1-2009, 09:44 PM

Send 4 simfiles

Chaos Energy : Keyboard LV.14 (On Edit)

Speed of Light : Keyboard LV.12

Lawn Wake XI : Keyboard LV.13

Fuchinkan Candy (Remake) : Keyboard LV.12

My extra banner

**DigitalS3r4ph** · 12-2-2009, 01:00 AM

It took me less than an hour to create the steps and graphics for a song and get it submitted and accepted to this pack.

(Referring to 4 pages ago where everyone was talking about how it takes them years to create a simfile.)

Choofers · 12-2-2009, 03:41 AM

I'm sure we could all do the same but, alas, you make YOUR OWN graphics.

**Ghakimx** · 12-2-2009, 04:13 AM

Kommi said we dun have to, but if its good enough, then it would be accepted or something.

**NekoGon** · 12-2-2009, 06:27 AM

huzure owns

**Bynary Fission** · 12-3-2009, 01:11 PM

Submitted Goddess Bound with a few fixes.

Also, any word on Himalaya? I haven't seen any reviews on the file in over a week.

EDIT: Submitted Tritsch-Tratsch Polka as well. It's stepped in a more progressive manner than my other files, so I'm curious to see how it turned out.

operationstrawbarry · 12-3-2009, 05:23 PM

I think I just checked out ur chaos energy on youtube hazure (if thats it). Its actually not bad from what I saw, there is a section in the beginning which you couldn't added more to. Some other things to. Steps and patterns could definatly be better though. Generic patterns wont help you getting this accepted, however, there isn't much else to do about it though.

Why am I saying this? this is one of my favorite songs LOL. Unfortunatly, the song is way to generic and doesn't make much interesting steps, but the steps from what I saw seems correct granted interesting steps and some missing sounds that should of been added would make it better.

Huzure · 12-5-2009, 02:20 AM

but now I delete old chaos energy video on youtube.

**kommisar** · 12-5-2009, 10:30 AM

can i penetrate your avatar

alexdestructions · 12-5-2009, 10:53 PM

sending 888 for one more time

fixed patterns

**kommisar** · 12-5-2009, 11:00 PM

hey remember that rushjet file you made

i still have that

12-1-2009, 03:04 PM	#561
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open i hope my file got through the male. Edit: MAIL, NOT MALE, DAMIT. __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak.

12-1-2009, 04:46 PM	#562
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 28 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Improve your MA.

12-1-2009, 05:24 PM	#563
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open (alexdestructions vs Bynary Fission) 888 32nd patterns and jacks were god awful. Quit out. Rejected (Diokatsu) Tender Kiss Decent attempt for you but still not quite there yet. Rejected (CBR) Don't Say Lazy - DJ Hirojack Mix - V2 Pretty generic due to song choice. Freezes are abused and overused. Not pack worthy. Rejected. (Huzure) Heart of Witch Kommisar already made a good file for this. Decent attempt at keyboard stepping though. Rejected (Dimentio) Jumper V2 Good Vibrajack file (already accepted the previous version over there) but I honestly don't see myself accepting this here. There was really nothing too notable or replayable to me aside from the jacks and layering. I'd say send this update to Vibrajack. Rejected (Moches) Programmed Sun Yeah, I'm going to have to agree that Programmed World was definitely a lot better. Well composed and cool BPM gimmicks though so I'll say Maybe for now. I'll have to think about this. (Ghakimx) Final Step There's freeze abuse (a lot of unnecessary freezes that just clutter up the file). Some parts are better than Iamme's file while others weren't. Trill at Measure 70 was aids. File kinda surprised me though. You're a lot better at stepping than I was initially expecting so I see potential coming from you. Good for any other pack, but for this pack, you're gonna have to work on this more. Rejected. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

12-1-2009, 06:15 PM	#564
cedolad moonchild~ Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: . Age: 30 Posts: 6,879	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open sent in file. __________________

12-1-2009, 09:25 PM	#565
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open :O :O :O :O :D :D :D :D Never have I been so happy from a review of a rejected file. __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak.

12-1-2009, 09:27 PM	#566
cedolad moonchild~ Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: . Age: 30 Posts: 6,879	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Damn it Ghakimx. You got me excited. I thought I got a review for one of my files >:/ __________________

12-1-2009, 09:30 PM	#567
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open HAHAHAHAH. Suxor. __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak.

12-1-2009, 09:40 PM	#568
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Final Step is one of songs that definitely needs an awesome restep.

12-1-2009, 09:42 PM	#569
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open yeah, behanjc's version was balls, to be honest. __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak.

12-1-2009, 09:44 PM	#570
Huzure FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok,Thailand Age: 31 Posts: 30	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Send 4 simfiles Chaos Energy : Keyboard LV.14 (On Edit) Speed of Light : Keyboard LV.12 Lawn Wake XI : Keyboard LV.13 Fuchinkan Candy (Remake) : Keyboard LV.12 My extra banner __________________ Last edited by Huzure; 12-1-2009 at 11:14 PM..

12-2-2009, 01:00 AM	#571
DigitalS3r4ph I'm Tsuka Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Hyperbolic Simfile Chamber Age: 36 Posts: 981	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open It took me less than an hour to create the steps and graphics for a song and get it submitted and accepted to this pack. (Referring to 4 pages ago where everyone was talking about how it takes them years to create a simfile.) __________________ PM me if you find the secret.

12-2-2009, 03:41 AM	#572
Choofers FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2008 Age: 33 Posts: 6,205	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I'm sure we could all do the same but, alas, you make YOUR OWN graphics. __________________

12-2-2009, 04:13 AM	#573
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Kommi said we dun have to, but if its good enough, then it would be accepted or something. __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak. Last edited by Ghakimx; 12-2-2009 at 04:15 AM..

12-2-2009, 06:27 AM	#574
NekoGon щ(ﾟДﾟщ) Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Malaysia Age: 33 Posts: 2,709	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open huzure owns __________________

12-3-2009, 01:11 PM	#575
Bynary Fission Retired One-Hander Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Seattle, Washington Age: 31 Posts: 2,425	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Submitted Goddess Bound with a few fixes. Also, any word on Himalaya? I haven't seen any reviews on the file in over a week. EDIT: Submitted Tritsch-Tratsch Polka as well. It's stepped in a more progressive manner than my other files, so I'm curious to see how it turned out. __________________ Newest Track (04/19/2024): Tell Us Who You Are [8-bit Chiptune] https://soundcloud.com/bynary-fission/tell-us-who-you-are-battle-tower-royale-character-creation-screen Last edited by Bynary Fission; 12-3-2009 at 03:59 PM..

12-3-2009, 05:23 PM	#576
operationstrawbarry FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Taipei Taiwan Age: 37 Posts: 802	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I think I just checked out ur chaos energy on youtube hazure (if thats it). Its actually not bad from what I saw, there is a section in the beginning which you couldn't added more to. Some other things to. Steps and patterns could definatly be better though. Generic patterns wont help you getting this accepted, however, there isn't much else to do about it though. Why am I saying this? this is one of my favorite songs LOL. Unfortunatly, the song is way to generic and doesn't make much interesting steps, but the steps from what I saw seems correct granted interesting steps and some missing sounds that should of been added would make it better. Last edited by operationstrawbarry; 12-3-2009 at 05:26 PM..

12-5-2009, 02:20 AM	#577
Huzure FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok,Thailand Age: 31 Posts: 30	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open but now I delete old chaos energy video on youtube. __________________

12-5-2009, 10:30 AM	#578
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open can i penetrate your avatar __________________

12-5-2009, 11:00 PM	#580
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open hey remember that rushjet file you made i still have that __________________

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