Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 16

**dood gone krazee** · 11-6-2009, 10:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by stargroup

ok I have stepmania now

time to test dese files

dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuun

Have fun with goblin heh

**The5thMoon** · 11-6-2009, 10:44 AM

Icicles Graphix

Flying Colours Gfx

stargroup · 11-6-2009, 11:12 AM

actually meh screw it

tsuka's got it covered

operationstrawbarry · 11-6-2009, 01:07 PM

Damn. If my Babylon Skorcher was rejected because of song choice or personal song choice (nothing I can do about that), I dont have anything else to step for this pack maybe. I had a couple of raggacore/breakcore songs lined up to step thats in similer intensity than Skorcher.

Edit: I actually might have 1 more for this, although skeptical.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-6-2009, 01:21 PM

did I start a trend in 512 x 160 banners ?___?

Also Flying Colours' graphics are too bright and exuberant for the song

p.s. will review stuff later tonight

**The5thMoon** · 11-6-2009, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

did I start a trend in 512 x 160 banners ?___?

Also Flying Colours' graphics are too bright and exuberant for the song

p.s. will review stuff later tonight

Oh I didn't know that, I haven't heard the song :c

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Quake Gfx

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-6-2009, 02:15 PM

(Yesssss) Chromatic Chimera
**** yesssss. Enjoyed this quite a bit. Accepted

(Yesssss) Flying Colours
I had a feeling that you had a singles chart for this laying around. Great file. Not as amazing as the Solo chart but still good. Accepted

(Ninzaburo) Crystal Wind
Didn't like the Overlayering concept. File was generic overall. Rejected.

(SKG_Scintill) Keelhauled
Once the vocals kicked in, I lost interest and quit out. Technicality for the most part was alright but overall it lacked replay value and the file quality for this pack. Rejected

(Synexi) The Dark Blowhole
Title needs to be fixed. File has an old school feel to it which is nice to still see nowadays. File is well composed however there are some minor inconsistencies and errors with it that need to be fixed (see Tsuka's notes). I could see this having a potential spot in the pack once it's fixed up. Rejected.

(Roar176) She is my Wife
Well structured as expected from Roar however this file didn't have too much to offer. Personally found it kinda generic. As Moches mentioned, it can be layered a bit more. Disliked the jacks even if they are technically correct. Rejected

(Saphiro) Phase 7
Generic and boring as ****. Quit out. Rejected

(Ninzaburo) Chaosmaid
8th left jacks are gay as ****. It is pretty left hand biased as mentioned by Tsuka. Pretty overlayered with the jump+handstream. Nothing noteworthy from this file. Rejected

(OperationStrawbarry) Babylon Skorcher
Song choice is questionable. I don't see any breakcore song getting into this pack. Pretty generic overall. Some inconsistencies with freezes and layering as Moches layered. Rejected

Tsuka wins for best pack banner. This is official.

Dr Tran · 11-6-2009, 03:07 PM

submitted crunk de gaulle to this instead =x

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-6-2009, 03:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Dr Tran

submitted crunk de gaulle to this instead =x

This makes me happy.

N.T.M. · 11-6-2009, 03:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

did I start a trend in 512 x 160 banners ?___?

Also Flying Colours' graphics are too bright and exuberant for the song

p.s. will review stuff later tonight

imo all banners should be 500x156. Much better quality and it's resized without any distortion since it's proportional dimensions.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-6-2009, 03:29 PM

418 x 164 (ITG banner dimensions) work just as well. 512 x 160 is rather large and when it resizes, it does distort some applied filters, brushes and especially scanlines.

Yesssss · 11-6-2009, 03:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

Also Flying Colours' graphics are too bright and exuberant for the song

I remember trying to make graphics (as far as I could 'make' graphics) to that. It's hard to figure out how to make it dark and colorful.

You can listen to the song here: http://blog.lunarmusic.net/wallofsound

**WTFBrandon** · 11-6-2009, 03:54 PM

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Originally Posted by operationstrawbarry

Sent a file. Dont worry, I cut the song.

Hope its good.

do you hve msn

**The5thMoon** · 11-6-2009, 04:01 PM

Hmm I tried making it darker but still a lil colorful

moches · 11-6-2009, 04:49 PM

all of The5thMoon's graphics are fabulous, but Quake could use a bit more artistic font (see the graphics for id in ODIpack2 for an example.) the image itself compliments the song quite nicely though.

Icicles is orgasmic.
I think the first background you made for Flying Colours is better actually but this one's pretty good too.
Very nice work.

moches · 11-6-2009, 10:54 PM

double post for reviews

love ward v2- while better than v1, it isn't different enough for me to accept. needs to be radically rebuilt/different if it's going to be in two consecutive Xoon packs. n/a

crunk de gaulle- awesome, awesome file that is innovative and fun as hell accept

dragoonhead · 11-7-2009, 07:12 AM

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Originally Posted by moches

all of The5thMoon's graphics are fabulous

Or not
Typos are ugly,worst than mine and graphics are like......bad:/

moches · 11-7-2009, 09:33 AM

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Originally Posted by dragoonhead

Or not
Typos are ugly,worst than mine and graphics are like......bad:/

I'll agree that Quake is pretty bad, but Icicles/Flying Colours are great.
You should try your hand at graphicmaking for this pack; most of the stuff you make is top-notch now.

ninzaburo · 11-7-2009, 10:26 AM

Whoa, my Chaos Maid was rejected.

Oh well... I'll send two more files later, this is my last try.

Kraezymann · 11-7-2009, 11:07 AM

What would people think of another old school sim? Like "Like a Man" from xoon4? Or are ya'll trying to keep this new and hip and with the times? I was kind of suprised that people enjoyed it in the first place, so if its acceptable I'd like to try again.

11-6-2009, 10:44 AM	#302
The5thMoon • self-fulfilled prophecy • Join Date: May 2006 Location: Minnesota Posts: 2,132	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Icicles Graphix Flying Colours Gfx __________________ Last edited by The5thMoon; 11-6-2009 at 11:58 AM..

11-6-2009, 11:12 AM	#303
stargroup FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 974	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open actually meh screw it tsuka's got it covered __________________ (´･ω･`)

11-6-2009, 01:07 PM	#304
operationstrawbarry FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Taipei Taiwan Age: 37 Posts: 802	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Damn. If my Babylon Skorcher was rejected because of song choice or personal song choice (nothing I can do about that), I dont have anything else to step for this pack maybe. I had a couple of raggacore/breakcore songs lined up to step thats in similer intensity than Skorcher. Edit: I actually might have 1 more for this, although skeptical. Last edited by operationstrawbarry; 11-6-2009 at 01:17 PM..

11-6-2009, 01:21 PM	#305
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open did I start a trend in 512 x 160 banners ?___? Also Flying Colours' graphics are too bright and exuberant for the song p.s. will review stuff later tonight __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-6-2009, 02:15 PM	#307
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open (Yesssss) Chromatic Chimera ** yesssss. Enjoyed this quite a bit. Accepted (Yesssss) Flying Colours I had a feeling that you had a singles chart for this laying around. Great file. Not as amazing as the Solo chart but still good. Accepted (Ninzaburo) Crystal Wind Didn't like the Overlayering concept. File was generic overall. Rejected. (SKG_Scintill) Keelhauled Once the vocals kicked in, I lost interest and quit out. Technicality for the most part was alright but overall it lacked replay value and the file quality for this pack. Rejected (Synexi) The Dark Blowhole Title needs to be fixed. File has an old school feel to it which is nice to still see nowadays. File is well composed however there are some minor inconsistencies and errors with it that need to be fixed (see Tsuka's notes). I could see this having a potential spot in the pack once it's fixed up. Rejected. (Roar176) She is my Wife Well structured as expected from Roar however this file didn't have too much to offer. Personally found it kinda generic. As Moches mentioned, it can be layered a bit more. Disliked the jacks even if they are technically correct. Rejected (Saphiro) Phase 7 Generic and boring as . Quit out. Rejected (Ninzaburo) Chaosmaid 8th left jacks are gay as . It is pretty left hand biased as mentioned by Tsuka. Pretty overlayered with the jump+handstream. Nothing noteworthy from this file. Rejected (OperationStrawbarry) Babylon Skorcher Song choice is questionable. I don't see any breakcore song getting into this pack. Pretty generic overall. Some inconsistencies with freezes and layering as Moches layered. Rejected Tsuka wins for best pack banner. This is official. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles** (4key & 6key)

11-6-2009, 03:07 PM	#308
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open submitted crunk de gaulle to this instead =x

11-6-2009, 03:29 PM	#311
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open 418 x 164 (ITG banner dimensions) work just as well. 512 x 160 is rather large and when it resizes, it does distort some applied filters, brushes and especially scanlines. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-6-2009, 04:01 PM	#314
The5thMoon • self-fulfilled prophecy • Join Date: May 2006 Location: Minnesota Posts: 2,132	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Hmm I tried making it darker but still a lil colorful __________________

11-6-2009, 04:49 PM	#315
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 28 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open all of The5thMoon's graphics are fabulous, but Quake could use a bit more artistic font (see the graphics for id in ODIpack2 for an example.) the image itself compliments the song quite nicely though. Icicles is orgasmic. I think the first background you made for Flying Colours is better actually but this one's pretty good too. Very nice work.

11-6-2009, 10:54 PM	#316
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 28 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open double post for reviews love ward v2- while better than v1, it isn't different enough for me to accept. needs to be radically rebuilt/different if it's going to be in two consecutive Xoon packs. n/a crunk de gaulle- awesome, awesome file that is innovative and fun as hell accept

11-7-2009, 10:26 AM	#319
ninzaburo FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Japan Posts: 48	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Whoa, my Chaos Maid was rejected. Oh well... I'll send two more files later, this is my last try. __________________ 一期一会

11-7-2009, 11:07 AM	#320
Kraezymann Forum User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Saskatchewan, Canada Age: 35 Posts: 1,640	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open What would people think of another old school sim? Like "Like a Man" from xoon4? Or are ya'll trying to keep this new and hip and with the times? I was kind of suprised that people enjoyed it in the first place, so if its acceptable I'd like to try again. __________________ Twitch \| Stepping Stones 2! \| Stepping Stones 3! \| Stepping Stones 4! Submit to this -

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