a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^

**Moogy** · 07-4-2007, 07:54 PM

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil

John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons.
"This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!"
So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons
"I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the demons" he shouted
The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.

skauert · 07-4-2007, 07:57 PM

i wrote one too

GUNDAM WING - Final Battle

Heero was having rough day at school and his muffin for lunch did not taste the good. "No I am uhngry and this is not good" and threw the muffin and hit a guy.

"Hey the " guy said. It was having bad day.

"Sorry" and so Heero went to his gundam and he flew away to be by himself at the north pole.

"HAHAHAHAHA" said Zechs who was waiting there for him "I have returned and I will kill the erath with gundam powar!"

They fought and Heero won. But Zechs detonatationed his gundam and the north pole blew up.

"No!!!!!!!!!!!!" Heero was mad at all the penguins die.

Zechs got the ship and flew to space. Heero's gundam was not good for space the he went spoking with talk to the gundam inventor who fixed it.

"Now I can fly to space combat" and they fought in space where tehy battled with beam swords antil both mobile suits were all damaged and none could move. This was the end of combat and Duo found them and rescued Heero.

"No I cannot be left to die" Zechs said and he was stuck there in space.

"Thank you" Heero and Duo went to Earth where they had peace.

MAYBE THE END . . . . ?

EDIT: nvm i stole it from moogy. all credit goes to him. you can clearly see how the writing styles are similar,,,

ToxicShadow · 07-4-2007, 08:11 PM

omg dat was awezom i canot w8 4 chapt 2 ^^_^;;;;;;;;;;;

kli5326 · 07-4-2007, 09:34 PM

me2 :3

DIGIMON 2: RETURN OF DIGIMON
By kli5326

CHAPTER ONE:
The robot fight

It was been two yeers since teh scintist destoryed the road. Digimon now lerned to eb mor epowarfull to fight the evli!
So he bilt robot body becus the wrold was in danger of a evil digimon.
"You cans not be stopped!" Digimon sayd "You arr my twin borthr!"
"Thats rite. Not even you can stop me!!!!" So they foughted an Digimon's robot suit powerd its laser shoot and blew up teh evil Digimon.

Auther's note: In chapter 2, the evil Digimon is not reely dead. It swa a trick!!

CHAPTER 2:
Surprise attack

Digimon was ta hom eatnig breffist. He ate a omelette and toast with english muffins and he had bagels and Cap'n Crunch.
He was also eating orange juice a muffin and sausage and a bacon piece but he also ate just bread.
Hsi gilrfrend was kiss him "Good morning" say.
But evil Digimon came out fridge and shotted "H-a-a-a-a-a-a-a! I will kill you Digimon!"
Ther was no time for robot so he went right for the fight.
They punched the ceiling and flew to fighting in space.
"I am created by the evil scintist" he sayd!!!!! "I will destoy all the roads and no one can go on them!"
"No! Then people are tarpped and tehy will be stuck!"
"Ha-ha-ha I do not care but you will die now"
They foughts for a long time until they were tired form the fight and Digimon killed him with lethal blow.
"Impossible! I! Cannot be stopped!" Then explosion.
When good Digimon came back he wanted find his girfrend but she leaved. It was too late.
"Sarah! You moved to Englind too soon and I did't say bye!"
But she was gon.

THE END
Dedicaited to Moogy

JurseyRider734 · 07-4-2007, 10:29 PM

yours all suck really badly why would you even post that **** its embarassing

heres how you write a fanfic:

I love you.

Never stop believing that

I’ll miss you, my everything.

There is someplace you cannot go,

A place I must face alone.

Great power dwells here,

And great darkness.

Here is where I first fell.

Do not follow.

You cannot follow.

It would mean your end.

This is my fight,

And mine alone.

Tell the others

I will miss them.

But it is you I shall miss most.

My everything,

The man I love.

Will you wait for me?

Cry for me?

Grieve for me?

Will you hold fast until I am gone?

I am Revan.

I will return to you.

I swear it.

He turned the holo off. With a guttural roar, he flung it at the wall. It bounced harmlessly off.

“Daddy?” Their two-year-old daughter stood in the door. “Where’s Mommy?” Her small hands reached up. He picked her up.

“I don’t know sweetie.” He cradled her gently. “I don’t know.” With his daughter nestled in his arms, the unshakeable Canderous Ordo began to weep. To weep for his Revan.

by me

dedicated to kil--my love, my passion, my world

Wintergreen · 07-6-2007, 12:08 AM

JurseyRider: You fail.

**Chromer** · 07-6-2007, 01:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wintergreen

JurseyRider: You fail.

You fail for not knowing it was a fanfic about KOTOR you nub.

JurseyRider734 · 07-6-2007, 01:20 PM

star wars lol

SethSquall · 07-6-2007, 02:11 PM

Quote:

"No! I must kill the demons" he shouted
The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.

Laugh out loud.

_Ashuku · 07-6-2007, 10:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moogy

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil

he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS"

.

LOL

Omeganitros · 07-7-2007, 12:31 AM

k so liek
i was in arkayd
and ooooooooooooooomgfgmofmg
dis kid wuz liek
shhshh lemmetellit!
he wuz all
shshhshhhh lemmetellit!!1
k so newayz
like i seyin
he wuz all
OMFG SHH LEMMETELLIT OGMFOGFGON1!1
k so he wuz liek seyin
OMFG PACMAN PACAMNAFDFJLDJF
and i wuz liek
wut
soz i play gaem
iz all koo~
yeh cuz guy
naem pac
OLOL FUNNEH NAME
k neway
name pac
LOOL NAEM IS MAKSIN MEH LAFFIN BOI HAHAHhAhshHA
NEWAY
guy naem wuz pac
i moved stik k
NOT HIS STIX NONO
DAT BE DA SIX K WASH UR MOUF OUT W/SOPE
neway
movesing da stix
allsofsudden
d00d was liek OMFG I IS GOHST
I EETS U
but den i wuz all
NO CUZ I PAC MAN AND I CALL 4 DOT
so dot wuz eat
and no wiat
word wong
wrong
lolo wong liek wong kong ping chinese loplz
k neway
i wuz eet dot
he wuz all OMFG DONNA EETS MEH NOOOOOOOooooO
i wuz liek NOS
he wuz liek ok
so i ate it
wuz tasteh wasteh

so neway
goshto wuz liek OMFG U EET DOT NOW I RUNZ
so he runzed
i was liek OMFG U FAST I CANNA CATCH UP
TICKS MEH OFFA CUZ GOHST 2 FAST
OMFG Y GHOST HAVEA2BE FATS
NOFARE
is remind meh
o nm
neway
i wanna 2 maeks pac man ova
no ova as in ovareis LOL CHICK PARTS LOLOL
neway
i was all
OMG SUPER SONIK
so i used s00pa4 bo0tzes
2 go VROOSHM
and guy
i meen gohst
he wus liek
HAI I SHOADOW K SO I SKATE FASTA
I R ULTIMATE
but no he rly not he faek olol
so i wuz liek NO U RLY NOT U FAEK OLOL
liek i seds 2 u
adn den
adn den
adn den
i 4got
lolo reminds meh of d00d were mah kar
LOLO FUNNEH MOVEH
FUNNEH FUNNEH TEH HAHAS
k neway
i 4got
but das y pacman r s00x
cuz lata levls
gohsts 2 hard
se cuz liek
point of gaem
2 get laid by mss pacman
i dunno y she mrz pacMAN tho
cuz liek
shulds be pacWOMAN
u no
ya u no
neway
piont of gaem 2 get teh hot pacwoman sexes
but NOOOOOOO
sez da ghostz
I NO WANTS U TO GET HED IN BEDD LOLOLO
but i wus liek
DADADADA DADA
PUPPEHHHHHHH POWAAAAAA
and so dey wer all
OMG LEVEL 255555555555555555555555555555555555557355555bajilliin
were dey moev liek supar sajaiosjdfin gokoo
yeh he fast
so liek
i nos get laid
I WANNA 2 GET LAID
*** ARKAYD WUZ RIPS MEH OFF
CUZ I SUPOS 2 GET LAYD
I PAY FULL QUATRAR
AND DEY RIPZ ME OF
TEH S00X
k neway
donna pay pacman
i mean play
well pay 2 if u think bouts it
cuz pacman all i taeks u moneh u gets 2 laid
neWAY
no play/pay paxman
cuz u nos get laid
kthxbai

by Mwerp from the time of dinosaurs

Omeganitros · 07-20-2007, 06:59 PM

flamingspinach · 07-22-2007, 12:55 AM

what why has nobody replied this is pretty awesome

Drule · 07-22-2007, 03:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Omeganitros

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You are a fantastic person.

Pumble · 07-22-2007, 08:03 PM

hahahahahahaha this is the best thing you've ever done

Omeganitros · 07-29-2007, 02:00 AM

Last time on: DOOM: Repercussions of Evil

The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.

DOOM: REPERCUSSIONS PART 2

John was cry, he didn’t want to be a zombie, he wished he listended to his daddy all the years ago.

The cyberdemons around him gotted used to him and thought he was on there side so they left him alone and went away. John got so mad at them though and he got his palsma rifle again and shotted the radio cuz he was mad at them and shot at the demons.

“ARGH RGGGHARAH” the new zobmie John was mad.

The demons were mad taht he shotted them and yell at john so they gather ‘round him and sing and chant “RAWRAHRAHRAH” the ysay things that have to do with the devil and his wife lucifer. “NOOOOoooooooo” John cried in zombie speak, he didn’t wanna go to hell or whatever they wanted to dew.

“YESsss.” they shout back and john was surrounded with red flashly lights

“NO PLEASE NO I DONt WANT HELL” John cried.

And John went to hell

Somewhere on earth Mr. Stalvern cried too for he know that his son really was kill by demons.

07-4-2007, 07:54 PM	#1
Moogy 嗚呼 Join Date: Aug 2003 Age: 34 Posts: 10,303	a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ DOOM: Repercussions of Evil John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway. John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy." Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS" There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons. "This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!" So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall. "HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons "I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill. "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted The radio said "No, John. You are the demons" And then John was a zombie. __________________ Plz visit my blog ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

07-4-2007, 07:57 PM	#2
skauert FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 4	Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ i wrote one too GUNDAM WING - Final Battle Heero was having rough day at school and his muffin for lunch did not taste the good. "No I am uhngry and this is not good" and threw the muffin and hit a guy. "Hey the " guy said. It was having bad day. "Sorry" and so Heero went to his gundam and he flew away to be by himself at the north pole. "HAHAHAHAHA" said Zechs who was waiting there for him "I have returned and I will kill the erath with gundam powar!" They fought and Heero won. But Zechs detonatationed his gundam and the north pole blew up. "No!!!!!!!!!!!!" Heero was mad at all the penguins die. Zechs got the ship and flew to space. Heero's gundam was not good for space the he went spoking with talk to the gundam inventor who fixed it. "Now I can fly to space combat" and they fought in space where tehy battled with beam swords antil both mobile suits were all damaged and none could move. This was the end of combat and Duo found them and rescued Heero. "No I cannot be left to die" Zechs said and he was stuck there in space. "Thank you" Heero and Duo went to Earth where they had peace. MAYBE THE END . . . . ? EDIT: nvm i stole it from moogy. all credit goes to him. you can clearly see how the writing styles are similar,,, Last edited by skauert; 07-4-2007 at 08:05 PM..

07-4-2007, 08:11 PM	#3
ToxicShadow FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 107	Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ omg dat was awezom i canot w8 4 chapt 2 ^^_^;;;;;;;;;;; Last edited by ToxicShadow; 07-4-2007 at 08:20 PM.. Reason: ;;;;;;;;;;;;

07-4-2007, 09:34 PM	#4
kli5326 Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 1	Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ me2 :3 DIGIMON 2: RETURN OF DIGIMON By kli5326 CHAPTER ONE: The robot fight It was been two yeers since teh scintist destoryed the road. Digimon now lerned to eb mor epowarfull to fight the evli! So he bilt robot body becus the wrold was in danger of a evil digimon. "You cans not be stopped!" Digimon sayd "You arr my twin borthr!" "Thats rite. Not even you can stop me!!!!" So they foughted an Digimon's robot suit powerd its laser shoot and blew up teh evil Digimon. Auther's note: In chapter 2, the evil Digimon is not reely dead. It swa a trick!! CHAPTER 2: Surprise attack Digimon was ta hom eatnig breffist. He ate a omelette and toast with english muffins and he had bagels and Cap'n Crunch. He was also eating orange juice a muffin and sausage and a bacon piece but he also ate just bread. Hsi gilrfrend was kiss him "Good morning" say. But evil Digimon came out fridge and shotted "H-a-a-a-a-a-a-a! I will kill you Digimon!" Ther was no time for robot so he went right for the fight. They punched the ceiling and flew to fighting in space. "I am created by the evil scintist" he sayd!!!!! "I will destoy all the roads and no one can go on them!" "No! Then people are tarpped and tehy will be stuck!" "Ha-ha-ha I do not care but you will die now" They foughts for a long time until they were tired form the fight and Digimon killed him with lethal blow. "Impossible! I! Cannot be stopped!" Then explosion. When good Digimon came back he wanted find his girfrend but she leaved. It was too late. "Sarah! You moved to Englind too soon and I did't say bye!" But she was gon. THE END Dedicaited to Moogy

07-6-2007, 12:08 AM	#6
Wintergreen gamehussy Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 64	Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ JurseyRider: You fail. __________________ Life is short. Eat dessert first! - Jacques Torres

07-7-2007, 12:31 AM	#11
Omeganitros auauauau Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Hee-Haw! Age: 35 Posts: 8,897	Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ k so liek i was in arkayd and ooooooooooooooomgfgmofmg dis kid wuz liek shhshh lemmetellit! he wuz all shshhshhhh lemmetellit!!1 k so newayz like i seyin he wuz all OMFG SHH LEMMETELLIT OGMFOGFGON1!1 k so he wuz liek seyin OMFG PACMAN PACAMNAFDFJLDJF and i wuz liek wut soz i play gaem iz all koo~ yeh cuz guy naem pac OLOL FUNNEH NAME k neway name pac LOOL NAEM IS MAKSIN MEH LAFFIN BOI HAHAHhAhshHA NEWAY guy naem wuz pac i moved stik k NOT HIS STIX NONO DAT BE DA SIX K WASH UR MOUF OUT W/SOPE neway movesing da stix allsofsudden d00d was liek OMFG I IS GOHST I EETS U but den i wuz all NO CUZ I PAC MAN AND I CALL 4 DOT so dot wuz eat and no wiat word wong wrong lolo wong liek wong kong ping chinese loplz k neway i wuz eet dot he wuz all OMFG DONNA EETS MEH NOOOOOOOooooO i wuz liek NOS he wuz liek ok so i ate it wuz tasteh wasteh so neway goshto wuz liek OMFG U EET DOT NOW I RUNZ so he runzed i was liek OMFG U FAST I CANNA CATCH UP TICKS MEH OFFA CUZ GOHST 2 FAST OMFG Y GHOST HAVEA2BE FATS NOFARE is remind meh o nm neway i wanna 2 maeks pac man ova no ova as in ovareis LOL CHICK PARTS LOLOL neway i was all OMG SUPER SONIK so i used s00pa4 bo0tzes 2 go VROOSHM and guy i meen gohst he wus liek HAI I SHOADOW K SO I SKATE FASTA I R ULTIMATE but no he rly not he faek olol so i wuz liek NO U RLY NOT U FAEK OLOL liek i seds 2 u adn den adn den adn den i 4got lolo reminds meh of d00d were mah kar LOLO FUNNEH MOVEH FUNNEH FUNNEH TEH HAHAS k neway i 4got but das y pacman r s00x cuz lata levls gohsts 2 hard se cuz liek point of gaem 2 get laid by mss pacman i dunno y she mrz pacMAN tho cuz liek shulds be pacWOMAN u no ya u no neway piont of gaem 2 get teh hot pacwoman sexes but NOOOOOOO sez da ghostz I NO WANTS U TO GET HED IN BEDD LOLOLO but i wus liek DADADADA DADA PUPPEHHHHHHH POWAAAAAA and so dey wer all OMG LEVEL 255555555555555555555555555555555555557355555bajilliin were dey moev liek supar sajaiosjdfin gokoo yeh he fast so liek i nos get laid I WANNA 2 GET LAID *** ARKAYD WUZ RIPS MEH OFF CUZ I SUPOS 2 GET LAYD I PAY FULL QUATRAR AND DEY RIPZ ME OF TEH S00X k neway donna pay pacman i mean play well pay 2 if u think bouts it cuz pacman all i taeks u moneh u gets 2 laid neWAY no play/pay paxman cuz u nos get laid kthxbai by Mwerp from the time of dinosaurs

07-20-2007, 06:59 PM	#12
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07-22-2007, 12:55 AM	#13
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07-22-2007, 08:03 PM	#15
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07-29-2007, 02:00 AM	#16
Omeganitros auauauau Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Hee-Haw! Age: 35 Posts: 8,897	Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^ Last time on: DOOM: Repercussions of Evil The radio said "No, John. You are the demons" And then John was a zombie. DOOM: REPERCUSSIONS PART 2 John was cry, he didn’t want to be a zombie, he wished he listended to his daddy all the years ago. The cyberdemons around him gotted used to him and thought he was on there side so they left him alone and went away. John got so mad at them though and he got his palsma rifle again and shotted the radio cuz he was mad at them and shot at the demons. “ARGH RGGGHARAH” the new zobmie John was mad. The demons were mad taht he shotted them and yell at john so they gather ‘round him and sing and chant “RAWRAHRAHRAH” the ysay things that have to do with the devil and his wife lucifer. “NOOOOoooooooo” John cried in zombie speak, he didn’t wanna go to hell or whatever they wanted to dew. “YESsss.” they shout back and john was surrounded with red flashly lights “NO PLEASE NO I DONt WANT HELL” John cried. And John went to hell Somewhere on earth Mr. Stalvern cried too for he know that his son really was kill by demons.

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