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Old 07-28-2006, 12:45 AM   #1
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Default just thought i'd randomly post my POEM

"Goodbye"
Theres never a right time to say goodbye,
As time slows down at this very instant;
Memory, hatred, and love replay in my mind,
Leading to this moment in which my love makes it descent.
Walking out the door, only imagining whats on the other side,
True never-ending war of love and hate profoundly collide,
Leaving me stranded in this life-changing moment,
Suffering is my heart, shattered in piles of torment.
In the end, our values and minds repair themselves,
Dust collects on our emotions left on unspoken shelves,
Allowing the words to escape my mouth, "goodbye,"
For one precious moment, my heart is the object I defy.
-Steven martinez (me)

real name on internet ftw.

But yeah i wrote that myself when i was randomly feeling emo or something. Ha. comments or whatever are welcome...go for it.
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Old 09-4-2006, 01:38 PM   #2
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Old 09-4-2006, 02:01 PM   #3
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I think you need a hug, from a smileyface mascot.
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Old 09-4-2006, 09:01 PM   #4
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Awesome. Absolutely awesome. You should write some more. I love reading good poetry/stories. ^^
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