04-16-2005, 11:38 AM
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DJ Pyroshock - Axon
Just finished this yesterday, I had started it about 2 months ago and just stopped making it for awhile, but decided a couple days ago to open it up and finish it. C&C please.
http://info.conroe.isd.tenet.edu/~chambtay/AxonV2.mp3 Please vote "hot" for it on my SoundClick site.
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04-16-2005, 12:58 PM
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RE: DJ Pyroshock - Axon
You're not having those horrible volume/compression problems like the other song, so thats good.
The intro sounds nice, some background stings or pads would sound good with it. The song is a little empty on the low end, a heavier bd and deeper bass I think would cure this, and mabye some more percussion to help move the song. nice song all in all
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04-16-2005, 03:08 PM
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Double post - delete this one
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04-16-2005, 03:09 PM
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Ok, I added a different bd, an octave lower bass along with the regular bass, and an octave lower on the trance part instrument with the regular one, plus some pads and a quiet synth cello at the intro.
http://info.conroe.isd.tenet.edu/~chambtay/AxonV2.mp3
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04-16-2005, 04:23 PM
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I think a brighter string would work better, and mabye bring the volume up gradually as opposed to just starting off at full volume.
sounds good
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04-19-2005, 05:33 PM
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*bump*
Please vote hot on SoundClick.
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