FFR Community Pack 3 - Page 10

Korygon · 10-26-2010, 01:20 PM

Im bored so judge time.

(DDRBaller)
City Lights: - once the bass drum kicks in, you step it on some measures and not others. feels really inconsistent.
m10 and m14 - why are these jacks??
you totally ignore the hi-hat when it comes in.
m17 - the freezes here go to different notes when its the same sound playing. also starting here you step nothing but the main melody, and put freezes to everything. completely unneeded.
Honestly I'm stopping here with this one. Pretty much the entire file needs to be redone. REJECTED

Kz: In the beginning, why do some notes have double holds, some single holds?
then everything goes to just the up/right arrows, and the file stops. file isnt even close to being finished. REJECTED

The pokemon wap song - 90% of the notes in this song have no correlation with the music what-soever. REJECTED

Winter - the 24ths should be 16ths, only half of the 16ths should be there, 16th jump jack stream is retarded, etc etc REJECTED (though this is the closest you have to a non-trolling submission gj)

Assfixia0 - Do Back Burn
File is really generic. The entire file is pretty much just 3 sections that repeat the same pattern over and over again. Not really a great song for stepping. REJECTED

Sighrenicks - Healing Vision
- I don't find the need for the mines you placed in the beginning slow parts.
- when the song speeds up, I like the single mines, but the mine groupings you placed just dont seem to work very well.
Other than that, there are some sounds throughout the song that really should have been stepped. Go back through the file and listen for them. After you take care of these couple things, file will be pretty good. FIXES NEEDED

Virus - Metropolis pt 1
10...minute...song.....2.....charts
KOMMI YOU GET TO JUDGE THIS IM NOT TOUCHING IT

**Gundam-Dude** · 10-26-2010, 05:05 PM

(DDRBaller123) City Lights (Rough Twilight Club Mix)
Layering and pattern choices are way too inconsistent. Not a very interesting song to step to begin with. いいえ

(Detrimentalist+0) Disconnected HaZaRD
Personaly pet peeve of mine but I noticed a lot of [3][4][3] mini-trills being used which bugs me; I find them much more awkward to hit than [4][3][4]. And in general a lot of one handed mini-trill patterns which I find awkward at this speed. Pattern nitpicks aside, solid file. はい

(asphyxzero) Do Back Burn
Thought that maybe some mini-freezes to layer the vocal samples would've added some variation. Wasn't fond of some of the jumpjack patterns used but overall solid file despite being repetitive and lackluster. はい

(Cyrenics) Healing Vision Remix
Layering in the beginning measures is very quirky. You're transitioning between layering too suddenly which makes this awkward for me to follow on a first playthrough. And the times you do layer the piano, you're erroneously missing some note placements which would also keep it flowing much better. Where you decided to stop stepping was pretty strange as well and overall there wasn't any sort of climax to the file itself since you cut it off early. Layering was decent but there wasn't enough interesting elements in this that makes it replayable let alone enjoyable. いいえ

(wc) Intermission
Short but solid. Nothing really notable about this file but I see no reason to reject it other than the replayability factor being low. はい

(DDRBaller123) Kz
Nice freeze abuse did you get it from a garage sale. Layering is all over the place and doesn't flow at all. Also incomplete. いいえ

(Dimentio) Lunatic Gaze
You hit my pet peeve of piano holds hnnngh why. Thought more of the percussion could've been layered with jumps for variation. A few 192nds didn't seem all that necessary either but overall solid file. Flows well and is fairly enjoyable despite my pet peeves. はい

(Virus) Metropolis Pt.1
GLoVE did a much better job despite his being a cut version. Absolutely no reason to accept a file that's longer and inconsistent. いいえ

(DDRBaller123) Pokemon Ieru Ka Neo
Vocal steps weren't accurate at all. Layering is all over the place and this was not enjoyable to playthrough at all. いいえ

(Scylaax) Only my Railgun
Starts off pretty strong but you should've kept consistently layering the *ding* noises with the mini-freezes. The vocal jumps that form jumpjacks were alright but often times were a bit awkward to hit. There are a few erroneously missing 16th notes but I'm guessing you left some of them out on purpose. M28 rainbow notes were quirky and didn't feel right for me, but I know what you were trying to do here. The first part of the guitar solo part also felt quirky for me. Finally, the cut you made at the end I found really awkward/sudden. Overall, layering is alright but it's all over the place and too inconsistent at times which bugs me. Everyone that's tried to step this song has had some sort of issue figuring out the layering since there's a lot going on in the song but it has tons of potential to be a good file. Personally, this did not appeal to me much since I would personally take different approach to layering. File's either a hit or miss so I can't quite decide on a verdict for this yet. 未決

(Wineandbread) Rambling Feather
Polyrhythm layering at M6+ flows a little weird but they aren't that awkward for me to hit. M9+ though some hold placements would've fit well here. Also in these kind of break measures you could add a few notes to layer the stuff going in the background on top of what you already have to fill up the empty gaps and add variation which would also make it flow better. Picked up on a few jumps/hands that could've been layered in (won't really go into detail unless requested). Pretty much what kommi and kory mentioned about the jump jacks which are awkward to hit, but I do realize what you were trying to do with the layering in those spots. Overall, solid and enjoyable file. Doesn't have many blatant errors so I'm willing to pass this off as is. If you feel like fixing the file up, take the judges notes into consideration. はい

(Scylaax) Snakeman Stage
Might have gone a bit overboard with the freeze usages but they fit well with the song. Some awkward stream patterns during the 24ths, 32nds and polyrhythms but overall solid and replayable file. Good for scoring as well. はい

(Scylaax) Tornadoman Stage
I can see some slight kil influence to the layering choices but still has that technical scylaax style mixed into it. Unique layering choices that flowed well and overall enjoyable to playthrough. はい

(DDRBaller123) Winter V2
Played this way back in Xoon 5 and there is no real difference to this, rofl. Just simply not playable. いいえ

Wineandbread · 10-26-2010, 05:29 PM

I will go fix my file in the near future. T.Hanks for comments :')

I'm just gonna make the jumpjack into single holds derp

Damn flowflow

**kommisar** · 10-26-2010, 06:41 PM

FLOW FLOW NIG

will be adding a solo only file to this pack. haven't done solo since march hehu

Korygon · 10-26-2010, 07:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Korygon

Virus - Metropolis pt 1
10...minute...song.....2.....charts
KOMMI YOU GET TO JUDGE THIS IM NOT TOUCHING IT

UPDATING MY REVIEW OF THIS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NE5yjRFpV8k

PS it took everything I had to do this B)

tbh the file isn't THAT bad for a 10 minute file. I'm changing to an accept. I don't think kommi is gonna go for it, but yeah.

who_cares973 · 10-26-2010, 07:35 PM

intermission is very replayable. think about all the times you've taken breaks from playing sm. now instead of taking breaks you can play intermission

AsphyxZero · 10-26-2010, 07:46 PM

Yo, I'll add some mini-freezes and change up jump jack positions if you guys want me too !!

**Patashu** · 10-26-2010, 07:50 PM

imo I think virus's metropolis should be accepted. one it's not at all like glove's metropolis, two if you're going to play a ten minute file how many choices do you have anyway, three it's indexable woot

Korygon · 10-26-2010, 07:52 PM

I'd like it better if it wasn't for that jumpspam part, but it has its charm

also torrent that would be lovely

**Patashu** · 10-26-2010, 08:02 PM

yeah jumpspam part needs tweaking

AsphyxZero · 10-26-2010, 08:14 PM

Aite, sm sent. Only a few jumpjacks were edited (I did notice I missed a sound during the very beginning so I edited that in as well). Mini-freezes in obvious places as well as some KOOL places in the beginning to make it a bit less boring.

ps Patashu, I have a song that I'm working on. Wanna collab?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGCCqMSArP0

**Patashu** · 10-26-2010, 08:19 PM

maybe later

AsphyxZero · 10-26-2010, 08:20 PM

Aite.

**kommisar** · 10-26-2010, 08:39 PM

i'll give metropolis some thought

Korygon · 10-26-2010, 09:21 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIpqvIqNzLQ

I think we should accept this file too. DDRBaller is a master step artist

**Patashu** · 10-26-2010, 09:37 PM

the jacks and 24ths add scoring value

**kommisar** · 10-26-2010, 09:51 PM

it's like a bad midare file

yeah I just made that comparison.

Detrimentalist · 10-26-2010, 09:57 PM

My cock started rising just looking at those legit graphics.

**TC_Cyrenics** · 10-26-2010, 10:55 PM

Hey Kory.

Do every file from here on out on video.

EDIT: Sent a pride file for you Kory.

Korygon · 10-26-2010, 10:58 PM

Nah. I only did those because they were blatantly not getting accepted. I didnt expect the dream theater file to be that good, but thats besides the point. If I get another file that's THAT retarded, I might do a vid.

10-26-2010, 01:20 PM	#181
Korygon FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 138	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 Im bored so judge time. (DDRBaller) City Lights: - once the bass drum kicks in, you step it on some measures and not others. feels really inconsistent. m10 and m14 - why are these jacks?? you totally ignore the hi-hat when it comes in. m17 - the freezes here go to different notes when its the same sound playing. also starting here you step nothing but the main melody, and put freezes to everything. completely unneeded. Honestly I'm stopping here with this one. Pretty much the entire file needs to be redone. REJECTED Kz: In the beginning, why do some notes have double holds, some single holds? then everything goes to just the up/right arrows, and the file stops. file isnt even close to being finished. REJECTED The pokemon wap song - 90% of the notes in this song have no correlation with the music what-soever. REJECTED Winter - the 24ths should be 16ths, only half of the 16ths should be there, 16th jump jack stream is retarded, etc etc REJECTED (though this is the closest you have to a non-trolling submission gj) Assfixia0 - Do Back Burn File is really generic. The entire file is pretty much just 3 sections that repeat the same pattern over and over again. Not really a great song for stepping. REJECTED Sighrenicks - Healing Vision - I don't find the need for the mines you placed in the beginning slow parts. - when the song speeds up, I like the single mines, but the mine groupings you placed just dont seem to work very well. Other than that, there are some sounds throughout the song that really should have been stepped. Go back through the file and listen for them. After you take care of these couple things, file will be pretty good. FIXES NEEDED Virus - Metropolis pt 1 10...minute...song.....2.....charts KOMMI YOU GET TO JUDGE THIS IM NOT TOUCHING IT

10-26-2010, 05:05 PM	#182
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 (DDRBaller123) City Lights (Rough Twilight Club Mix) Layering and pattern choices are way too inconsistent. Not a very interesting song to step to begin with. いいえ (Detrimentalist+0) Disconnected HaZaRD Personaly pet peeve of mine but I noticed a lot of [3][4][3] mini-trills being used which bugs me; I find them much more awkward to hit than [4][3][4]. And in general a lot of one handed mini-trill patterns which I find awkward at this speed. Pattern nitpicks aside, solid file. はい (asphyxzero) Do Back Burn Thought that maybe some mini-freezes to layer the vocal samples would've added some variation. Wasn't fond of some of the jumpjack patterns used but overall solid file despite being repetitive and lackluster. はい (Cyrenics) Healing Vision Remix Layering in the beginning measures is very quirky. You're transitioning between layering too suddenly which makes this awkward for me to follow on a first playthrough. And the times you do layer the piano, you're erroneously missing some note placements which would also keep it flowing much better. Where you decided to stop stepping was pretty strange as well and overall there wasn't any sort of climax to the file itself since you cut it off early. Layering was decent but there wasn't enough interesting elements in this that makes it replayable let alone enjoyable. いいえ (wc) Intermission Short but solid. Nothing really notable about this file but I see no reason to reject it other than the replayability factor being low. はい (DDRBaller123) Kz Nice freeze abuse did you get it from a garage sale. Layering is all over the place and doesn't flow at all. Also incomplete. いいえ (Dimentio) Lunatic Gaze You hit my pet peeve of piano holds hnnngh why. Thought more of the percussion could've been layered with jumps for variation. A few 192nds didn't seem all that necessary either but overall solid file. Flows well and is fairly enjoyable despite my pet peeves. はい (Virus) Metropolis Pt.1 GLoVE did a much better job despite his being a cut version. Absolutely no reason to accept a file that's longer and inconsistent. いいえ (DDRBaller123) Pokemon Ieru Ka Neo Vocal steps weren't accurate at all. Layering is all over the place and this was not enjoyable to playthrough at all. いいえ (Scylaax) Only my Railgun Starts off pretty strong but you should've kept consistently layering the ding noises with the mini-freezes. The vocal jumps that form jumpjacks were alright but often times were a bit awkward to hit. There are a few erroneously missing 16th notes but I'm guessing you left some of them out on purpose. M28 rainbow notes were quirky and didn't feel right for me, but I know what you were trying to do here. The first part of the guitar solo part also felt quirky for me. Finally, the cut you made at the end I found really awkward/sudden. Overall, layering is alright but it's all over the place and too inconsistent at times which bugs me. Everyone that's tried to step this song has had some sort of issue figuring out the layering since there's a lot going on in the song but it has tons of potential to be a good file. Personally, this did not appeal to me much since I would personally take different approach to layering. File's either a hit or miss so I can't quite decide on a verdict for this yet. 未決 (Wineandbread) Rambling Feather Polyrhythm layering at M6+ flows a little weird but they aren't that awkward for me to hit. M9+ though some hold placements would've fit well here. Also in these kind of break measures you could add a few notes to layer the stuff going in the background on top of what you already have to fill up the empty gaps and add variation which would also make it flow better. Picked up on a few jumps/hands that could've been layered in (won't really go into detail unless requested). Pretty much what kommi and kory mentioned about the jump jacks which are awkward to hit, but I do realize what you were trying to do with the layering in those spots. Overall, solid and enjoyable file. Doesn't have many blatant errors so I'm willing to pass this off as is. If you feel like fixing the file up, take the judges notes into consideration. はい (Scylaax) Snakeman Stage Might have gone a bit overboard with the freeze usages but they fit well with the song. Some awkward stream patterns during the 24ths, 32nds and polyrhythms but overall solid and replayable file. Good for scoring as well. はい (Scylaax) Tornadoman Stage I can see some slight kil influence to the layering choices but still has that technical scylaax style mixed into it. Unique layering choices that flowed well and overall enjoyable to playthrough. はい (DDRBaller123) Winter V2 Played this way back in Xoon 5 and there is no real difference to this, rofl. Just simply not playable. いいえ __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

10-26-2010, 06:41 PM	#184
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 FLOW FLOW NIG will be adding a solo only file to this pack. haven't done solo since march hehu __________________

10-26-2010, 07:35 PM	#186
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 35 Posts: 15,407	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 intermission is very replayable. think about all the times you've taken breaks from playing sm. now instead of taking breaks you can play intermission __________________

10-26-2010, 07:46 PM	#187
AsphyxZero Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Las Vegas Age: 33 Posts: 1,823	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 Yo, I'll add some mini-freezes and change up jump jack positions if you guys want me too !!

10-26-2010, 07:50 PM	#188
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 imo I think virus's metropolis should be accepted. one it's not at all like glove's metropolis, two if you're going to play a ten minute file how many choices do you have anyway, three it's indexable woot __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

10-26-2010, 07:52 PM	#189
Korygon FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 138	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 I'd like it better if it wasn't for that jumpspam part, but it has its charm also torrent that would be lovely

10-26-2010, 08:02 PM	#190
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 yeah jumpspam part needs tweaking __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

10-26-2010, 08:14 PM	#191
AsphyxZero Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Las Vegas Age: 33 Posts: 1,823	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 Aite, sm sent. Only a few jumpjacks were edited (I did notice I missed a sound during the very beginning so I edited that in as well). Mini-freezes in obvious places as well as some KOOL places in the beginning to make it a bit less boring. ps Patashu, I have a song that I'm working on. Wanna collab? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGCCqMSArP0 Last edited by AsphyxZero; 10-26-2010 at 08:16 PM..

10-26-2010, 08:19 PM	#192
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 maybe later __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

10-26-2010, 08:20 PM	#193
AsphyxZero Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Las Vegas Age: 33 Posts: 1,823	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 Aite.

10-26-2010, 08:39 PM	#194
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 i'll give metropolis some thought __________________

10-26-2010, 09:21 PM	#195
Korygon FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 138	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIpqvIqNzLQ I think we should accept this file too. DDRBaller is a master step artist

10-26-2010, 09:37 PM	#196
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 the jacks and 24ths add scoring value __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

10-26-2010, 09:51 PM	#197
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 it's like a bad midare file yeah I just made that comparison. __________________

10-26-2010, 09:57 PM	#198
Detrimentalist FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Coshocton, OH Posts: 73	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 My cock started rising just looking at those legit graphics.

10-26-2010, 10:58 PM	#200
Korygon FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 138	Re: FFR Community Pack 3 Nah. I only did those because they were blatantly not getting accepted. I didnt expect the dream theater file to be that good, but thats besides the point. If I get another file that's THAT retarded, I might do a vid.

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