Just a note on song:

Cursebred · 07-25-2008, 09:43 PM

Guys,

It is a demo. I mean think logically, a demo in an "at-home" studio. You expect it to sound perfect?

And if you don't like metal, don't bother listening.

And that is how it's done...

LLaMaSaUceYup · 07-25-2008, 09:44 PM

Uhhhmmm??? Okay. I wont.

You didn't have to go and make a thread about it.

People were giving you a hard time because someone made a thread about a metal band.
Then you tried to steal the thread away, well that's pretty much how it looked.

Now your making a thread to promote your demo.

**Gibson63** · 07-25-2008, 09:53 PM

well ... i know whats a demo... just fix the sound of the guitar, get a new singer/change mic/ tell him to scream properly, and everythings gonna be fine.. ( im not saying its bad... i dont want to insult what ur doing..im just saying what im thinking) the drums are fine , its pretty good overall..

EDIT: actually..the guitar is okay at the begining.. but at :14... wtf? idk.. the tune maybe or the amp..idk.. but seriously idk if its you singing...but change your method....

EDIT2 : and don't tell me : D00d! Its Death Metal!! thats the way its supose to scream... actually... not really.. idk if its the mic.... it looks like hes hurting his throat while screaming..

Verruckter · 07-25-2008, 10:07 PM

It's just bad. Even the riffs are bad. They're generic, boring, out of tune, ouf of sync, the song has no directionnal structure, it's going nowhere.

Don't even get me started on the screaming. Seriously, this thread wasn't necessary.

Also, "at-home"? I've heard home recordings sound a thousand times better than this. Don't you guys have standards?

Cursebred · 07-25-2008, 11:01 PM

I. Give. Up.

Verruckter · 07-25-2008, 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cursebred

I. Give. Up.

Actually don't. Don't take this harsh criticism as a roadblock. Instead, listen to it, use the advice. Practice more, more, more, practice your growls, your guitar, your drums, bass, synth,etc, but also practice composition. You think your favorite band's best song was composed the day they started composing? You're still young (as far as I can tell), don't give up yet. Come back in one year, and listen to the song you have up right now. I guarantee you'll have the exact same opinion as the one we have right now.

Seriously, I know I sound like an asshole, but I'm just giving my honest opinion. Your song IS bad. But that's OK, it's perfectly normal and you don't have to worry about it. Recording this early was a bad idea. Take your time!

Cursebred · 07-25-2008, 11:13 PM

Well I DID want to track progress over the years. But actually, seriously. Try using constructive like you did this time.

PLEASE.

Verruckter · 07-25-2008, 11:21 PM

Stop QQing over every comment. Metal crowds are the worst kind of crowds you'll find. You'll find much worse than us.

Cursebred · 07-25-2008, 11:27 PM

Read my new thread. It has all the information you need. It is in the "Media" forum as well. I'm sorry for this...

Soul Slayer · 07-26-2008, 07:11 PM

Ahh! Too many threads!

07-25-2008, 09:44 PM	#2
LLaMaSaUceYup FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Phoenix, Arizona. Age: 31 Posts: 3,759	Re: Just a note on song: Uhhhmmm??? Okay. I wont. You didn't have to go and make a thread about it. People were giving you a hard time because someone made a thread about a metal band. Then you tried to steal the thread away, well that's pretty much how it looked. Now your making a thread to promote your demo. Last edited by LLaMaSaUceYup; 07-25-2008 at 09:47 PM..

07-25-2008, 09:53 PM	#3
Gibson63 FFR Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Canada,Quebec Age: 32 Posts: 1,319	Re: Just a note on song: well ... i know whats a demo... just fix the sound of the guitar, get a new singer/change mic/ tell him to scream properly, and everythings gonna be fine.. ( im not saying its bad... i dont want to insult what ur doing..im just saying what im thinking) the drums are fine , its pretty good overall.. EDIT: actually..the guitar is okay at the begining.. but at :14... wtf? idk.. the tune maybe or the amp..idk.. but seriously idk if its you singing...but change your method.... EDIT2 : and don't tell me : D00d! Its Death Metal!! thats the way its supose to scream... actually... not really.. idk if its the mic.... it looks like hes hurting his throat while screaming.. __________________ Last edited by Gibson63; 07-25-2008 at 09:59 PM..

07-25-2008, 10:07 PM	#4
Verruckter FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Canada, with the cool people! Posts: 2,707	Re: Just a note on song: It's just bad. Even the riffs are bad. They're generic, boring, out of tune, ouf of sync, the song has no directionnal structure, it's going nowhere. Don't even get me started on the screaming. Seriously, this thread wasn't necessary. Also, "at-home"? I've heard home recordings sound a thousand times better than this. Don't you guys have standards? __________________ Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged Image removed for size violation.

07-25-2008, 11:21 PM	#8
Verruckter FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Canada, with the cool people! Posts: 2,707	Re: Just a note on song: Stop QQing over every comment. Metal crowds are the worst kind of crowds you'll find. You'll find much worse than us. __________________ Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged Image removed for size violation.

07-26-2008, 07:11 PM	#10
Soul Slayer FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Do you need to know? Age: 30 Posts: 54	Re: Just a note on song: Ahh! Too many threads!

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