The Parrots Beak - Page 2

**TheRapingDragon** · 06-23-2006, 03:28 PM

Hey, what does everyone think of my totally original not stolen poem here:

Lucy Slightly Off-White

Often had I heard of Lucy Slightly Off-White:
And, when I crossed the playground,
I chanced to see by the sunlight
The lonely girl sound.

No mate, no comrade Lucy knew;
She danced on wide swings,
--The sweetest thing that ever grew
Beside a human that sings

You yet may spy the foal at play,
The rabbit upon the green;
But the sweet face of Lucy Slightly Off-White
Will never more be seen.

Please give me a book deal.

falconsfan14 · 07-12-2006, 08:28 AM

What in the **** if wrong with you kid? Youre ripping off someone elses story, lying about your age, and also lying that its your original work. Youre using lines from old crappy songs. Are you retarded? Did you think nobody would notice that you ripped someone elses work off? You must be mistaking us for stupid. I suggest you get the hell off of our forum, and never come back. Dont even get on the internet ever again.

**TheRapingDragon** · 07-13-2006, 06:48 AM

Month old bump much? The "kid" is long gone.

looking4you · 07-15-2006, 11:28 AM

looking4you · 07-15-2006, 11:29 AM

hello im new to this chat room anyone like fantisy novels?

jewpinthethird · 07-15-2006, 05:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by looking4you

hello im new to this chat room anyone like fantisy novels?

Like anything written by Michael Moore and Ann Coulter? Or like the stuff about wizards and dragons? To which one should respond "there's a difference?"

View Poll Results: How was it?
Terrible, don't write ever again!	8	66.67%
This was an okay play	2	16.67%
too long	1	8.33%
not funny	3	25.00%
This was a wonderful play. I enjoyed it!	1	8.33%
Splendid! You should write more!	2	16.67%
Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 12. You may not vote on this poll

06-23-2006, 03:28 PM	#21
TheRapingDragon A car crash mind Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 36 Posts: 9,788	Re: The Parrots Beak Hey, what does everyone think of my totally original not stolen poem here: Lucy Slightly Off-White Often had I heard of Lucy Slightly Off-White: And, when I crossed the playground, I chanced to see by the sunlight The lonely girl sound. No mate, no comrade Lucy knew; She danced on wide swings, --The sweetest thing that ever grew Beside a human that sings You yet may spy the foal at play, The rabbit upon the green; But the sweet face of Lucy Slightly Off-White Will never more be seen. Please give me a book deal.

07-12-2006, 08:28 AM	#22
falconsfan14 Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: GiRRRRRRR!!! Age: 34 Posts: 2,183	Re: The Parrots Beak What in the **** if wrong with you kid? Youre ripping off someone elses story, lying about your age, and also lying that its your original work. Youre using lines from old crappy songs. Are you retarded? Did you think nobody would notice that you ripped someone elses work off? You must be mistaking us for stupid. I suggest you get the hell off of our forum, and never come back. Dont even get on the internet ever again.

07-13-2006, 06:48 AM	#23
TheRapingDragon A car crash mind Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 36 Posts: 9,788	Re: The Parrots Beak Month old bump much? The "kid" is long gone.

07-15-2006, 11:28 AM	#24
looking4you FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 3	Re: The Parrots Beak hi

07-15-2006, 11:29 AM	#25
looking4you FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 3	Re: The Parrots Beak hello im new to this chat room anyone like fantisy novels?

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