[Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

[Zythus]

Well, I think it would be interesting to ask of your critique and thoughts and attempts on some of my poems from my notebooks. I don't title my poems, but instead, I just state the importance of idea, which is for you to guess.

This was on my banner for a while, but I'm changing banners, so take a crack at what you think this poem is talking about, hint, its an object (Yes, thats a very big hint actually)
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Reflection of the night soul,
The emissary of clarity,
Ceremonious wane of midnight brilliance,
preluding the dawning blue.
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First one to guess the object being described gets 100 credits! Yes, I agree its pretty crappy reward, but I'm a bit starved on credits D:

Your comments are welcomed along with your opinions. Its freestyle so I guess you can't pin me down saying I failed and violated some poetic form XD

[GamerShadow]

The moon.

That was my first impression. Well, the poem is short, but it's pretty good, in my opinion. I'm no poet, so I really can't say much in terms of whether it is good or not.

[Zythus]

Nooo waiii =o

Expected however, the banner practically gave it away as a freebie.
You have earned 100 credits or 2 and a half plays of FCing {Rose}
Congratz.

[GamerShadow]

Thanks. It was a random educated guess based on key words. I have never seen your banner. =P

[Zythus]

=P Thanks for making me feel worse. LOL
Honestly, I think poems with a bit more abstrusity is worth more than a poem of simplicity with all the key points handed to you on a platter, which it would seem, I have somewhat done so here.

Thanks for the feed back. I guess you can call them couplets? I don't believe in the long poems that stretch from China to Canada, I mean, unless you have more than one key for that single topic you are talking about, what the hell, don't waste your time. My cents anyways...