12-6-2004, 07:40 PM | #1 |
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My First Manga
Ok This was something I did during Japanese 1. The drawing isn't my best because I didn't have much time to do it. Still check it out. It's called
"Watermelon Fight."
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12-6-2004, 08:03 PM | #2 |
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RE: My First Manga
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12-9-2004, 07:52 AM | #3 | |
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RE: My First Manga
I like the flame effect.
PS: In frame 7, you wrote his name as "Shindji" instead of "Shinji". Ji is Shi with ten ten.
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12-11-2004, 03:43 AM | #4 |
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RE: My First Manga
Actually I referenced Shinji from my Japanese textbook I use in school and it said Ji was Chi with ten ten. Unless the Japanese are idiots
or the Americans misprinted, I'm not sure.
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12-11-2004, 03:19 PM | #5 |
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I'm completely sure Ji is Shi with ten-ten... <3 for another Japanese 1 student..Though since we have block scheduleing, I'll be taking Japanese 2 after Christmas break.
That looks great, though..
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12-11-2004, 07:13 PM | #6 | |
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12-13-2004, 01:02 PM | #7 |
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Do I smell weekly Manga strip? All in favor say yay! or Nay!
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12-31-2004, 02:25 PM | #8 |
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no writing here...
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12-31-2004, 08:08 PM | #9 |
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nice style ya got there
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12-31-2004, 08:11 PM | #10 |
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Next time use a ruler and better writing and it might be good.
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01-2-2005, 12:20 AM | #11 |
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I cant tell which character is which...try mixing up their hair styles a bit...or something. Or give one an eye-patch.
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01-7-2005, 11:28 PM | #12 |
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I went all the way to the corner to start reading and I was dissapointed
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01-12-2005, 10:28 PM | #13 |
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Next time, do it outside of class, maybe try some color, and set it up so that it is skinny
to fit on the webpage without scrolling sideways. For a final suggestion: use hair that sticks up or out more. Then, use more intriguing plot. watermelons can't hold the attention of most people.
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01-14-2005, 08:25 PM | #14 |
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Wow. I seriously don't need to hear anything from you, considering you just joined a few months ago.
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01-14-2005, 09:49 PM | #15 |
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i joined 7 days before you, can i say it sucks?
actually you just need to put more effort into your drawings. And storyline. And concept.
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01-15-2005, 11:21 PM | #16 |
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You people just skipped over the sentences before the actual picture didn't you? Done in class. During school. For Fun. Is that too hard to comprehend?
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01-16-2005, 06:19 PM | #17 | |
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