10-19-2008, 01:02 PM | #1 |
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A Life Without Sorrow
I wrote this in English class 2 years ago, so the spelling/grammar might not be top notch (i'm french also)
A Life Without Sorrow We all live this life together, whether it be unfair or not. Some of the greatest moments are seen, some of pain and sorrow. For some life is but a dream. They sometimes try to escape from reality. Those who were cowards in life, not brave enough to live life truly. Without dreams how can one reach for the stars above? Without love how can you feel the passion to live? Without challenges life wouldn't be worth fighting for. As unfair as it seems, everything happens for a reason. If one doesn't feel pain or sadness, one cannot discover the joys of a happy ending. Joy is the calm after the storm. Through hard times life is never forgiving. Challenges make life interesting, adds spice to existence. It's such a triumphant feeling to discover happiness again. A life without sorrow would have no place for the climax of joy -Christophe Goulet-LeBlanc Last edited by kommisar[os]; 10-19-2008 at 04:41 PM.. |
10-19-2008, 02:27 PM | #2 |
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Re: A Life Without Sorrow
the only error i saw is weather which should be whether
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10-19-2008, 04:41 PM | #3 |
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Re: A Life Without Sorrow
i keep messing those two up haha thanks
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10-23-2008, 12:49 PM | #4 |
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I like it. It's like, I was just getting yelled at by my mom and I read that. It's upbeat and makes you happy, but only if you can understand it. I'd like to see more of your works if you have them.
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10-23-2008, 01:30 PM | #5 |
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Re: A Life Without Sorrow
It's a bunch of sayings put in paragraph form, but I like that each saying makes sense.
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