04-27-2009, 08:33 PM
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got incredibly bored so made this
Life Sucks
Life once began with light then turned into a bunch of crap you think you're riding somewhere bright and you turn around realizing your back to the same wrap think its better? think again ur life sucks the life you thought you had is gone the life you want to live is something you should chuck the life you want is over and done women suck forget them once it starts it ends once it ends it doesnt come back to them once it ends it starts again life is a wrap a long long circle a bunch of crap forget about the oracle you thought would happen life sucks k waiting for flames |
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04-27-2009, 08:36 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
It's average.
Sounds like a 13 year old kid was doing poetry in english class and decided he could get attention if he said his life sucks. But yeah, it's average.
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04-27-2009, 08:37 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
by the way i made this in 5 minutes : D thanks for the input
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04-27-2009, 10:32 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
omgosh so depressing, i almost cried.
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04-27-2009, 11:19 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
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04-28-2009, 09:07 AM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
hur hur hur you said crap
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04-28-2009, 10:33 AM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
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04-28-2009, 10:54 AM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
i think that just made me give up on life
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04-28-2009, 11:43 AM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
so what you're saying is....life is an everlasting turd that wraps around in a circle
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
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04-28-2009, 04:03 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
dude ur right!!! honestly i dont think i had any meanings intended in this poem lmfao
ps my english class is starting a poetry unit o boi |
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04-28-2009, 04:24 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
I hated the poetry unit. Made me want to
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04-28-2009, 04:56 PM
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Re: got incredibly bored so made this
It's good. It could use a little work, punctuation, and maybe a few different word choices. Just to make the flow a little better.
I'm offened though. Women aren't the only reason relationships suck. What about ignorant men who don't care whether their girlfriend has feeling, or the men that beat their women, and the men who knock women up and never show their face again when they find out the girl is pregnant. You can't put all the blame on our shoulders. Other than that it's good and you made a point. =) |
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