Music Works In Progress Thread - Page 45

**Coolboyrulez0** · 03-18-2014, 01:03 PM

yes you are :') (but it sounds better when you do it)

i dont make a lot of music anymore thus wip (mixing a bit rough but the ideas are there and arrangement can be made more interesting i feel)

**Herogashix** · 03-18-2014, 06:49 PM

In case you didn't miss me, I'm here to ruin your lives forever with my bad music wips.

https://soundcloud.com/thesapphiredragon/ashix-wish-work-in-progress

**Ohaider** · 03-18-2014, 07:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coolboyrulez0

yes you are :') (but it sounds better when you do it)

i dont make a lot of music anymore thus wip (mixing a bit rough but the ideas are there and arrangement can be made more interesting i feel)

Ty<3333
PS start producing MORE, i love this haha

lurker · 03-18-2014, 09:06 PM

I WENT PUBLIC

https://soundcloud.com/lurker/lurker-wip
WHAT THE FUCK NOW

anwar-inc · 03-19-2014, 07:40 AM

i totally wanna play sapphire now >.>

**Ohaider** · 03-19-2014, 03:10 PM

weeeeee one chilled panda (mrsuicidesheep) posted something i made a while back

V-Ormix · 03-19-2014, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lurker

I WENT PUBLIC

https://soundcloud.com/lurker/lurker-wip
WHAT THE FUCK NOW

niiice

drone

https://soundcloud.com/ormix/the-drains-dead-end

**Coolboyrulez0** · 03-20-2014, 11:29 AM

a dubstep musicial "passage" i made that im actually kinda happy with? ignore drums (or their mixing) pls

**Coolboyrulez0** · 03-22-2014, 04:41 PM

trap wip (more of a hip hop beat actually)

**Ohaider** · 03-22-2014, 07:09 PM

https://soundcloud.com/eli919/wah-what-do-i-do-now

idek soundscape

anwar-inc · 03-22-2014, 08:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ohaider

https://soundcloud.com/eli919/writers-block

idek soundscape

sick bro

V-Ormix · 03-22-2014, 10:00 PM

I haven't side chained anything in a while now, thanks for the acapellas eli

https://soundcloud.com/ormix/the-hell-with-stairs

anwar-inc · 03-22-2014, 10:35 PM

I downloaded that within 45 seconds, just saying

**ScylaX** · 03-23-2014, 09:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by V-Ormix

I haven't side chained anything in a while now, thanks for the acapellas eli

https://soundcloud.com/ormix/the-hell-with-stairs

That's like, very mesmerizing. Dissonants guitar should be more common!!

**Herogashix** · 03-23-2014, 09:45 AM

Since there's no Completed Projects thread, I'll just post this finished WIP.

https://soundcloud.com/thesapphiredragon/07-ashix-wish

**Coolboyrulez0** · 03-23-2014, 11:30 AM

aaand another one

would appreciate feedback on those 3 even if they are short im really happy with em

anwar-inc · 03-23-2014, 03:03 PM

Feedback for eric time:

Main issue in the track is the percussive section: The kick and snare are way to ditty and thin to really drive the tune enough. The snare is very soft and for that type of music, you need a snare that will pack a punch with a nice crunch to it. .
I would say possibly look into getting some stronger 808 samples in there.

The hat pattern (in my opinion) should be halved, so it's x-x-x-x- instead of xxxxxxxx as it leaves room for rolls at the end of phrases and in my opinion sounds better.

Skip to like 50 seconds in https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5USD-Smthk

See how the kick and snare cut through the rest of it (of course there is side chain involved here, but they're still rich in the lower mids). Random tip: In that Baauer remix, there's like a gated mini ride/splash in there at the beginning of every drop, that sometimes works too.

Hope I could help. . The melodic section is nice, no need to do a thing there 8)

V-Ormix · 03-23-2014, 03:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coolboyrulez0

aaand another one

would appreciate feedback on those 3 even if they are short im really happy with em

dat trap mix so clean as usual, but the ayes/heys killed me again (in a good way)

edit:My only negative comment (and it took me a moment to unleash my inner picky ness) and this is purely an opinion is that pluck thing sounds to much like a sytrus patch

edit v2: travis you got post 909, were is the 909 samples in your track 8)

**Coolboyrulez0** · 03-23-2014, 03:22 PM

Thanks duders I'll sit down quite a bit tomorrow and work on it with this extensive feedback

much appreciated and will post the new wip once its done

choof · 03-24-2014, 05:13 PM

https://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/dvn

bleeps and bloops

03-18-2014, 01:03 PM	#881
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread yes you are :') (but it sounds better when you do it) i dont make a lot of music anymore thus wip (mixing a bit rough but the ideas are there and arrangement can be made more interesting i feel) Last edited by Coolboyrulez0; 03-18-2014 at 01:06 PM..

03-18-2014, 06:49 PM	#882
Herogashix Descension from Heaven Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 2,180	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread In case you didn't miss me, I'm here to ruin your lives forever with my bad music wips. https://soundcloud.com/thesapphiredragon/ashix-wish-work-in-progress __________________

03-18-2014, 09:06 PM	#884
lurker ur worst nitemare Join Date: Jan 2003 Age: 32 Posts: 1,626	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread I WENT PUBLIC https://soundcloud.com/lurker/lurker-wip WHAT THE FUCK NOW __________________ some feathery f**k

03-19-2014, 07:40 AM	#885
anwar-inc FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 166	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread i totally wanna play sapphire now >.> __________________ Hi, I'm anwar. I make music, I listen to music, I blog every now and then and sometimes I play games on the internet. I've been on this site way too long, but sometimes I can be an ABSOLUTE BOSS.

03-19-2014, 03:10 PM	#886
Ohaider FFR Veteran Join Date: Jun 2012 Age: 28 Posts: 2,893	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread weeeeee one chilled panda (mrsuicidesheep) posted something i made a while back

03-20-2014, 11:29 AM	#888
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread a dubstep musicial "passage" i made that im actually kinda happy with? ignore drums (or their mixing) pls

03-22-2014, 04:41 PM	#889
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread trap wip (more of a hip hop beat actually)

03-22-2014, 07:09 PM	#890
Ohaider FFR Veteran Join Date: Jun 2012 Age: 28 Posts: 2,893	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread https://soundcloud.com/eli919/wah-what-do-i-do-now idek soundscape Last edited by Ohaider; 03-24-2014 at 09:40 PM..

03-22-2014, 10:00 PM	#892
V-Ormix Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,677	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread I haven't side chained anything in a while now, thanks for the acapellas eli https://soundcloud.com/ormix/the-hell-with-stairs

03-22-2014, 10:35 PM	#893
anwar-inc FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 166	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread I downloaded that within 45 seconds, just saying __________________ Hi, I'm anwar. I make music, I listen to music, I blog every now and then and sometimes I play games on the internet. I've been on this site way too long, but sometimes I can be an ABSOLUTE BOSS.

03-23-2014, 09:45 AM	#895
Herogashix Descension from Heaven Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 2,180	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread Since there's no Completed Projects thread, I'll just post this finished WIP. https://soundcloud.com/thesapphiredragon/07-ashix-wish __________________

03-23-2014, 11:30 AM	#896
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread aaand another one would appreciate feedback on those 3 even if they are short im really happy with em Last edited by Coolboyrulez0; 03-23-2014 at 11:35 AM..

03-23-2014, 03:03 PM	#897
anwar-inc FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 166	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread Feedback for eric time: Main issue in the track is the percussive section: The kick and snare are way to ditty and thin to really drive the tune enough. The snare is very soft and for that type of music, you need a snare that will pack a punch with a nice crunch to it. . I would say possibly look into getting some stronger 808 samples in there. The hat pattern (in my opinion) should be halved, so it's x-x-x-x- instead of xxxxxxxx as it leaves room for rolls at the end of phrases and in my opinion sounds better. Skip to like 50 seconds in https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5USD-Smthk See how the kick and snare cut through the rest of it (of course there is side chain involved here, but they're still rich in the lower mids). Random tip: In that Baauer remix, there's like a gated mini ride/splash in there at the beginning of every drop, that sometimes works too. Hope I could help. . The melodic section is nice, no need to do a thing there 8) __________________ Hi, I'm anwar. I make music, I listen to music, I blog every now and then and sometimes I play games on the internet. I've been on this site way too long, but sometimes I can be an ABSOLUTE BOSS.

03-23-2014, 03:22 PM	#899
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread Thanks duders I'll sit down quite a bit tomorrow and work on it with this extensive feedback much appreciated and will post the new wip once its done

03-24-2014, 05:13 PM	#900
choof Banned Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 8,563	Re: Music Works In Progress Thread https://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/dvn bleeps and bloops

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