08-3-2012, 07:12 AM | #1 |
Descension from Heaven
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I Don't Even Care Anymore
http://soundcloud.com/thezeitgeistproject/lolidgaf-tzp
You probably thought this was a rant thread about how the FFR community is a bunch of ******s. Nope. The beginning sounds like it started in the middle of a song, and the ending has no meaning to it at all. Happy listening.
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08-3-2012, 12:53 PM | #2 |
Vophie
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
omfg xD
0:58 I lost it just lolf. anyways, The beginning beat was incredibly interesting and had tons more potential. The note choices weren't that gr9 though/o/ But really, if you weren't scared to go out of that little Major 2nd interval, and actually made a melodic line, or even a small motif, this could have really taken off in a whole new direction.
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08-3-2012, 01:35 PM | #3 |
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
the beat is nice, it's just repetitive as **** after the first 30 seconds.
You should learn how to switch things up and test out different methods of making the main sections of the song stand out. |
08-3-2012, 01:42 PM | #4 |
soleil ardent
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
chuck testa
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08-4-2012, 02:00 AM | #5 |
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
0:58 - I don't even care anymore.
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08-4-2012, 12:38 PM | #6 |
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
holy **** gg Herogashix, KgZ actually gave you advice.
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08-4-2012, 03:56 PM | #7 |
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
You need to have more confidence in your music...
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08-4-2012, 04:03 PM | #8 |
lol happy
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Re: I Don't Even Care Anymore
lmfao I want to step 0:58 really badly
One Minutes Herogashix ver p.s. gay part aside this has a really interesting beat. you know what it reminds me of for some reason? Hamsin by makou you should turn it into a 2:00 rhythm game song, expand and vary your beat a little and it'd be great to step. seriously.
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