Another Random Artwork

FalcoLombardi · 06-17-2007, 03:48 AM

Here's another little somehing I've whipped up

I drew the crocodile entirely with graphite pencils and added the background and foreground effects in PS

any feedback would be appreciated =]

AriesMalvis · 06-17-2007, 04:24 AM

it's absolutely gorgeous
best work i've seen from you =]
i like the colouring of the croc

noodleroxs · 06-17-2007, 11:43 AM

That's awesome. The texture is the best part if the croc.

g4z33b0 · 06-17-2007, 01:28 PM

The text doesn't really match, but other then that it looks nice.

EvilBunnies · 06-17-2007, 02:40 PM

Oh. That's really pretty. I like the croc's face. Lol.

**Adamaja456** · 06-17-2007, 02:51 PM

you've got some talent, very nice =]

DarkVampiress21 · 06-17-2007, 08:43 PM

I like it. =] The rock thing though or whatever it's on shouldn't be white though..

RB_IcePh0enix · 06-17-2007, 08:49 PM

That's awesome, looks realy realistic too. Good job, keep up the good work and you might make a profession out of it someday

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FalcoLombardi · 06-18-2007, 03:20 AM

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Originally Posted by DarkVampiress21

I like it. =] The rock thing though or whatever it's on shouldn't be white though..

lol, it's an egg, it's hatching...they tend to be white ya know

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Originally Posted by RB_IcePh0enix

That's awesome, looks realy realistic too. Good job, keep up the good work and you might make a profession out of it someday

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cheers, i have no clue of what i wanna do when i'm older career wise...other stuff is all worked out

**darkshark** · 06-18-2007, 08:55 AM

You can color way better than I can, but work on your shading. Also with the moon in the background like that it puts the light source in the wrong spot casting a shadow in the wrong direction, and under moonlight which is a much more dim light, the shadow should be more diffused, not as crisp as it is.

The photoshop stuff ruins it for me. GJ nonetheless.

obie32one · 06-18-2007, 09:00 AM

That's creative Falco...

Draw some other stuff too while you're at it.

~HentaiXXX~ · 06-18-2007, 09:15 AM

that's really good, I come nowhere near that. You're going to become one of the finest artists evar =)

jchinzilla · 06-18-2007, 09:23 AM

yeah i like the coloring and it has nice texture.

btw this is chitchat.

EvilBunnies · 06-18-2007, 04:01 PM

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Originally Posted by obie32one

That's creative Falco...

Draw some other stuff too while you're at it.

Yeah you should draw other stuff.. Wonder what your new drawing is gonna be?

**Nightfirecat** · 06-18-2007, 04:31 PM

GJ on that

It's an improvement from the last one that I saw

BTW.. to anyone who remotely cares.. 400 posts for me now..

FalcoLombardi · 06-19-2007, 06:35 AM

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Originally Posted by darkshark

You can color way better than I can, but work on your shading. Also with the moon in the background like that it puts the light source in the wrong spot casting a shadow in the wrong direction, and under moonlight which is a much more dim light, the shadow should be more diffused, not as crisp as it is.

The photoshop stuff ruins it for me. GJ nonetheless.

funnily enough i was correcting that earlier today at school, i have a much better copy now with more realistic lighting effects

platinum_gold · 06-19-2007, 02:42 PM

jamuko · 06-19-2007, 02:59 PM

I agree with Darkshark; I think the pencil drawing is nice but the PS background kinda spoils it. Mind posting your updated one?

Aside from the moon thing that was mentioned, the grass could also be improved. I know I thought that brush was awesome too when I first found it, but anyone who knows Photoshop can recognize that default brush easily, which makes it look kinda cheesy.

I'd recommend either doing the background in pencil to go with your drawing, or playing with the lighting and effects in Photoshop a lot more. Give it the same attention you gave your croc, and it should turn out nice. =)

FalcoLombardi · 06-20-2007, 01:27 AM

lol i guess i just wanted to dress it up, had a spare 10 minutes on my hand so i whipped the brush out...if you want i could post the original when i get it back
cheers

06-17-2007, 03:48 AM	#1
FalcoLombardi FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 360	Another Random Artwork Here's another little somehing I've whipped up I drew the crocodile entirely with graphite pencils and added the background and foreground effects in PS any feedback would be appreciated =] __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] "Perfection is not attainable, but if we chase perfection we can catch excellence..." - Vince Lombardi

06-17-2007, 04:24 AM	#2
AriesMalvis FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,345	Re: Another Random Artwork it's absolutely gorgeous best work i've seen from you =] i like the colouring of the croc __________________

06-17-2007, 11:43 AM	#3
noodleroxs FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Smoke Age: 30 Posts: 50	Re: Another Random Artwork That's awesome. The texture is the best part if the croc. __________________ Fawsome! Fawsome! Fawsome! Do you keep saying Fawsome? Yeah. Fexcellent.

06-17-2007, 01:28 PM	#4
g4z33b0 Banned Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Apex, NC Age: 33 Posts: 2,618	Re: Another Random Artwork The text doesn't really match, but other then that it looks nice.

06-17-2007, 02:40 PM	#5
EvilBunnies FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: :D Age: 31 Posts: 88	Re: Another Random Artwork Oh. That's really pretty. I like the croc's face. Lol. __________________ Ta-da! The edit button! Isn't that a smart idea???

06-17-2007, 02:51 PM	#6
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06-17-2007, 08:43 PM	#7
DarkVampiress21 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 218	Re: Another Random Artwork I like it. =] The rock thing though or whatever it's on shouldn't be white though.. __________________

06-17-2007, 08:49 PM	#8
RB_IcePh0enix FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Virginia Age: 30 Posts: 709	Re: Another Random Artwork That's awesome, looks realy realistic too. Good job, keep up the good work and you might make a profession out of it someday .

06-18-2007, 08:55 AM	#10
darkshark Nothing. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: The Pacific Ocean Posts: 4,189	Re: Another Random Artwork You can color way better than I can, but work on your shading. Also with the moon in the background like that it puts the light source in the wrong spot casting a shadow in the wrong direction, and under moonlight which is a much more dim light, the shadow should be more diffused, not as crisp as it is. The photoshop stuff ruins it for me. GJ nonetheless. Last edited by darkshark; 06-18-2007 at 08:58 AM..

06-18-2007, 09:00 AM	#11
obie32one FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Age: 33 Posts: 906	Re: Another Random Artwork That's creative Falco... Draw some other stuff too while you're at it. __________________

06-18-2007, 09:15 AM	#12
~HentaiXXX~ Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Spalding, Nebraska, USA Age: 31 Posts: 2,955	Re: Another Random Artwork that's really good, I come nowhere near that. You're going to become one of the finest artists evar =)

06-18-2007, 09:23 AM	#13
jchinzilla i like cheese Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Virginia Age: 26 Posts: 2,106	Re: Another Random Artwork yeah i like the coloring and it has nice texture. btw this is chitchat. __________________

06-18-2007, 04:31 PM	#15
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06-19-2007, 02:42 PM	#17
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06-19-2007, 02:59 PM	#18
jamuko FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: あｓｄｆ。 Posts: 1,083	Re: Another Random Artwork I agree with Darkshark; I think the pencil drawing is nice but the PS background kinda spoils it. Mind posting your updated one? Aside from the moon thing that was mentioned, the grass could also be improved. I know I thought that brush was awesome too when I first found it, but anyone who knows Photoshop can recognize that default brush easily, which makes it look kinda cheesy. I'd recommend either doing the background in pencil to go with your drawing, or playing with the lighting and effects in Photoshop a lot more. Give it the same attention you gave your croc, and it should turn out nice. =) __________________ ♪~ Always Happy! Smile! Hello! I like delicious things I shoot eye beams at the things I hate and make them explode! (Yay!) So Happy! Smile! Hello! It's a picnic every day There's lots of happiness in my pocket So let's play forever~

06-20-2007, 01:27 AM	#19
FalcoLombardi FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 360	Re: Another Random Artwork lol i guess i just wanted to dress it up, had a spare 10 minutes on my hand so i whipped the brush out...if you want i could post the original when i get it back cheers __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] "Perfection is not attainable, but if we chase perfection we can catch excellence..." - Vince Lombardi

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