Random series i started called "LaLa The Kitty Cat"

[Stewie7Griffin]

ban me then... call me a rebel...

[Archelos]

You know what, ****in... whatever. This isn't about banning you and never was, it was a simple suggestion that you blew out of proportion. I said you need to use the enter key more often (I was not the first) and you flamed me for it. Totally uncalled for, you did this to yourself, and I'm outta here. Wasted enough time on somebody who doesn't understand the difference between a language and a religion.

[Stewie7Griffin]

Originally Posted by Archelos

and I'm outta here.

that's not proper english... and never did i once say english was a religion O.O maybe if you understood analogies better

[NFD]

Originally Posted by Stewie7Griffin

lolz okay people it's not supposed to be a good story damn... >.< it's just a bunch of random **** i wrote down O.O the first one i wrote for my girlfriend because if you met us... HOLY **** we laugh at the most random ****ing stupid things ever and this cracked her up... if you want to know me and my girlfriend, read this story and it sums our life up perfectly... if you can understand it, who cares about grammar and errors, if i really wanted to publish this then i would actualy take my time to correct the grammar and errors and what not but i really don't care... i wrote chapter 2 because people loved the first chapter and wanted more... and i plan on writing more for those who actually enjoyed it... don't take it seriously and stop criticizing me on my errors whereas i really don't care.... if you don't like it then don't post here... why not go criticize the movies such as.... epic movie, disaster movie, meet the spartans, super heroes movie, and space balls, whereas it's all pretty much the same thing... it's not meant to be serious, it's meant to be funny at how horribly bad it is..

*edit* ADHD is a proven disorder, as to Dissociative Identity Disorder is also... it's all chemical misbalances in the brain... study psychology in the fields of mental disorders and you will get to know your things

*edit** if you wonder why i'd write such stories.... just look at my avatar

Why would anybody criticize Spaceballs, it's hilarious. Unlike your story of course.

[mead1]

holy hell this thread just got intense

Anyway, Stewie, if you don't want your writing to be judged by people who sort of know their ****, don't post it. That's your own decision. If you post it on a public forum, the rest of us can read and critique the **** out of it.

I know you have ADHD and can't follow that whole thought, so I'll make a tl;dr version for you:

gtfo

[dore]

i just find it hilarious that the only stuff that gets beyond page 1 in this forum is stories like lala the kitty cat

[MalReynolds]

Okay, so, here's this:

This isn't literature. I don't know why someone didn't point this thread out to me. This is post-whoring. If you want to make a random thread about random stuff, do it somewhere else.

Stewie: This is a place for posting your stories, getting feedback on improving the story, criticism, all that kind of stuff. Some of the time, if you're good, it's to garner praise - but even the best threads still have people that come in and go, "Well, you might change this and this around".

Nothing. Is. Perfect.

Please put more care into your posts.

Locked.