Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 22

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-12-2009, 10:03 PM

stepmania

**kommisar** · 11-12-2009, 10:22 PM

that's how reviews used to be for red fraction 2 lmao

**Patashu** · 11-12-2009, 11:16 PM

I used to do this all the time why are you guys surprised. look at my ffr batch reviews sometime

moches · 11-13-2009, 12:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kommisar

that's how reviews used to be for red fraction 2 lmao

which is why it took an year to finish

moches · 11-13-2009, 12:29 AM

btw play Night <3

**jimerax** · 11-13-2009, 12:39 AM

No mainly because most of judges on rf2/dcp disappeared. yeah the delay was because of failure of judgement system anyways.

btw I don't know the song but the review says he should put hands on like every measure haha

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-13-2009, 12:57 AM

He asked for technicalities so I just named off some stuff he could layer in. He doesn't necessarily have to follow my review word for word. They're mere suggestions that would most likely make his file better if he tried it out. I'm usually not that picky about technical errors but he specifically wanted an in-depth review, haha. Ask and you shall receive.

P.S. finally working on something new.

icontrolyourworld · 11-13-2009, 01:21 AM

lol gundam dude, you're amazing

N.T.M. · 11-13-2009, 04:04 AM

My file's taken like 14 hours and it's not even done yet.

10 seconds left. lol Yeah it sounds fast, but it's not. Gimme one or two more days.

**kommisar** · 11-13-2009, 09:01 AM

thx tsuka

**samurai7694** · 11-13-2009, 01:50 PM

lol it bends

buizel8888 · 11-13-2009, 09:51 PM

Sorry kommi

manly things lean to the left

Mr. Bob · 11-13-2009, 09:58 PM

Dr Tran · 11-13-2009, 10:00 PM

in depth review on all my files thanks

xferrarix · 11-13-2009, 10:26 PM

submitted red hot skull to this

ps i want a good review if its rejected so i can fix it up and submit it to some other pack; if accepted tell me flaws in it so i can screw with it more

**kommisar** · 11-13-2009, 11:30 PM

red hot skull: auto accep

i'll play it later

moches · 11-13-2009, 11:36 PM

Babylon- wow parts of this are sort of okay but there's a bunch of really confusing layering along with unneccessary freezes, misrhythms, and wow difficulty keeps on spiking up and down randomly. At least it wasn't so boring I quit out--this is a cool song, is it something Shiki made recently?

classic 4- not too bad actually. was decently fun in an old-school way. jacks are pitch-wise correct but break the flow of this file. that triple freeze going on [123] at the beginning (twice) is better left as a jump to avoid awkwardness. actually this song has so little bombast it'd be better just to take hands out altogether. I don't see this file getting into this pack but it could be a pretty good file with some work.

DEMY- quit out of this. seriously I'm sorry but I'm getting really bored of this t+pazolite fad. some parts in the beginning were pretty fun but then it turned into something straight out of a bad Kkrusty file and I quit out.

End Time- that does it. I'm restepping this. as for this file, it's not too bad although I quit out once you put that 24th trill. mines in the beginning aren't too bad although there is one that is a little bit too close to a piano note for comfort (check that part again), otherwise they're sort of abused.

Fire Leo SYRINX- not too fun and not too great technically, but I'd rather see a file like this over something like DEMY or Untouchable Pariah. you're very solid technically usually, so this honestly feels kind of lazy because of how many blatant misrhythms and misplaced hand/jumps there are in here. I doubt even if it was going for something out of a Kil file that it really worked. that being said, this could be solid with a lot of work. ps make sure your freezes don't interfere with the rest of your layering

King Dedede Battle- it's not bad at all but probably not pack worthy. also I noted a few slight inconsistencies in layering but you really have to be paying attention to notice them.

Metal Squad- very nice reused graphics lmao. complete contrast to the other SSH file; this is great. awesome song and good file. layering is much much more easy to follow and the 10492390 freezes don't interfere much and have a cool feel to them. one small error in the final guitar solo and one small error after that with consistency on percussion layering but this is the only file I'm accepting this batch thus far.

Night- *ahem*

Red Hot Skull- make that two files I'm accepting this batch. only real complaint is that some of the short freezes going to guitar are sort of unneeded/superfluous/etc.

Ska de In Your Face trumaestro- actually, I'll go out on a limb here and say trumaestro's is better. this one isn't bad either but personally I think this doesn't really feel like I'm playing the song

there's your judgings

trumaestro · 11-14-2009, 04:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moches

Ska de In Your Face trumaestro- actually, I'll go out on a limb here and say trumaestro's is better.

lmao

xferrarix · 11-14-2009, 07:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moches

Red Hot Skull- make that two files I'm accepting this batch. only real complaint is that some of the short freezes going to guitar are sort of unneeded/superfluous/etc.

i'll fix some of the freezes since i already thought i had way too many to begin with.

**kommisar** · 11-14-2009, 07:45 AM

went through the recent files and pretty much agree with moches on most points

11-12-2009, 10:03 PM	#421
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open stepmania __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-12-2009, 10:22 PM	#422
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open that's how reviews used to be for red fraction 2 lmao

11-12-2009, 11:16 PM	#423
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I used to do this all the time why are you guys surprised. look at my ffr batch reviews sometime __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

11-13-2009, 12:29 AM	#425
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 28 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open btw play Night <3

11-13-2009, 12:39 AM	#426
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open No mainly because most of judges on rf2/dcp disappeared. yeah the delay was because of failure of judgement system anyways. btw I don't know the song but the review says he should put hands on like every measure haha

11-13-2009, 12:57 AM	#427
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open He asked for technicalities so I just named off some stuff he could layer in. He doesn't necessarily have to follow my review word for word. They're mere suggestions that would most likely make his file better if he tried it out. I'm usually not that picky about technical errors but he specifically wanted an in-depth review, haha. Ask and you shall receive. P.S. finally working on something new. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key) Last edited by Gundam-Dude; 11-13-2009 at 01:08 AM..

11-13-2009, 01:21 AM	#428
icontrolyourworld Enjoy life! Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 4,182	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open lol gundam dude, you're amazing __________________ http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...d.php?t=149106

11-13-2009, 04:04 AM	#429
N.T.M. FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Reno, NV Age: 34 Posts: 890	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open My file's taken like 14 hours and it's not even done yet. 10 seconds left. lol Yeah it sounds fast, but it's not. Gimme one or two more days. __________________ “Beware the irrational, however seductive. Shun the 'transcendent' and all who invite you to subordinate or annihilate yourself. Distrust compassion; prefer dignity for yourself and others. Don't be afraid to be thought arrogant or selfish... Suspect your own motives, and all excuses. Do not live for others any more than you would expect others to live for you.” Christopher Hitchens

11-13-2009, 09:01 AM	#430
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open thx tsuka

11-13-2009, 01:50 PM	#431
samurai7694 ❤ Join Date: Aug 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 4,638	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open lol it bends __________________

11-13-2009, 09:51 PM	#432
buizel8888 FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Groton, CT USA Age: 33 Posts: 1,536	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Sorry kommi manly things lean to the left

11-13-2009, 09:58 PM	#433
Mr. Bob FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: k Posts: 687	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open ouch

11-13-2009, 10:00 PM	#434
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open in depth review on all my files thanks

11-13-2009, 10:26 PM	#435
xferrarix FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Spring Hill Age: 31 Posts: 1,091	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open submitted red hot skull to this ps i want a good review if its rejected so i can fix it up and submit it to some other pack; if accepted tell me flaws in it so i can screw with it more

11-13-2009, 11:30 PM	#436
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open red hot skull: auto accep i'll play it later

11-13-2009, 11:36 PM	#437
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 28 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Babylon- wow parts of this are sort of okay but there's a bunch of really confusing layering along with unneccessary freezes, misrhythms, and wow difficulty keeps on spiking up and down randomly. At least it wasn't so boring I quit out--this is a cool song, is it something Shiki made recently? classic 4- not too bad actually. was decently fun in an old-school way. jacks are pitch-wise correct but break the flow of this file. that triple freeze going on [123] at the beginning (twice) is better left as a jump to avoid awkwardness. actually this song has so little bombast it'd be better just to take hands out altogether. I don't see this file getting into this pack but it could be a pretty good file with some work. DEMY- quit out of this. seriously I'm sorry but I'm getting really bored of this t+pazolite fad. some parts in the beginning were pretty fun but then it turned into something straight out of a bad Kkrusty file and I quit out. End Time- that does it. I'm restepping this. as for this file, it's not too bad although I quit out once you put that 24th trill. mines in the beginning aren't too bad although there is one that is a little bit too close to a piano note for comfort (check that part again), otherwise they're sort of abused. Fire Leo SYRINX- not too fun and not too great technically, but I'd rather see a file like this over something like DEMY or Untouchable Pariah. you're very solid technically usually, so this honestly feels kind of lazy because of how many blatant misrhythms and misplaced hand/jumps there are in here. I doubt even if it was going for something out of a Kil file that it really worked. that being said, this could be solid with a lot of work. ps make sure your freezes don't interfere with the rest of your layering King Dedede Battle- it's not bad at all but probably not pack worthy. also I noted a few slight inconsistencies in layering but you really have to be paying attention to notice them. Metal Squad- very nice reused graphics lmao. complete contrast to the other SSH file; this is great. awesome song and good file. layering is much much more easy to follow and the 10492390 freezes don't interfere much and have a cool feel to them. one small error in the final guitar solo and one small error after that with consistency on percussion layering but this is the only file I'm accepting this batch thus far. Night- ahem Red Hot Skull- make that two files I'm accepting this batch. only real complaint is that some of the short freezes going to guitar are sort of unneeded/superfluous/etc. Ska de In Your Face trumaestro- actually, I'll go out on a limb here and say trumaestro's is better. this one isn't bad either but personally I think this doesn't really feel like I'm playing the song there's your judgings

11-14-2009, 07:45 AM	#440
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open went through the recent files and pretty much agree with moches on most points

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