Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) - Page 8

**Mollocephalus** · 06-8-2013, 02:59 AM

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Originally Posted by stargroup100

"fun, but rejected"

I'm PRETTY sure 16th rhythms and 8th note doubles is considered to be super easy. especially at 128 bpm.

if you're gonna reject something give constructive feedback plz, which I see none of here

i lold at that review too

yeah we'll decide with anaru about what to accept in the end but every suggestion made in the reviews should be taken in consideration for you to make a revision, especially considering most of them are minor fixes

**bmah** · 06-8-2013, 03:09 AM

Updated with a few more reviews.

FissionMailed1 · 06-8-2013, 03:11 AM

I am going to write down a list of things I noticed for each file and feel like needs improvement, not necessarily judge them. I did this for two files so far, so check those out. Will write more tomorrow and Sunday.

**ReikonKeiri** · 06-8-2013, 04:39 AM

anaru told me to put jacks in that part :[. i dont like it either because it makes it retardedly annoying to AAA at anything above 1.6 but hey they make sense musically.

**Coolboyrulez0** · 06-8-2013, 05:26 AM

lol why are there like a million judges for a pack like this

moches · 06-8-2013, 07:22 AM

responding to Antromance's notes:

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Blah Blah Blah (moches)
Heavy & Standard- It's good, however there are a few issues:

Measure 4's Gallop seems unnessecary - it's going to a slight tic in her voice when she says "zip" (plus I like that it keeps the players on their toes).

Measure 9's a little cluttered. Maybe tone down the mines and get rid of the green notes. On standard, the notes feel akward since more of them are on the left hand. - awww, I liked this part. I'll tone the green notes down on Standard. you're completely right about the mines but they're there as a visual for the word "dick" and I'm a seven-year-old baby so I wanna keep 'em D:

Measure 16's difficulty spike is the densest part of the song and it comes right before the chorus, what feels like the climax. - I don't think we agree on which part should be emphasized. the chorus opens with a quad and is far more dense than the verse section, I feel like that's enough.

The previous complaints carry over into the second loop, which makes it obvious you copy/pasted - guilty as charged. I'll switch up the patterns some in a revision, shouldn't have done this but I just got lazy.

The mines at measure 28 stick out in a section devoid of them and there's no real reason for them in the song - tbh that part's actually supposed to have overlapping freezes going to that horny "yeaaaaah" in the background but it looked sloppy so I used mines instead. I'll mess around with this, maybe there's a different way I can integrate a similar effect.

The chart could have ended at the random rapper section. - I like my color theory. also this way the chart ends with a bit of a bang, I rly like that speedup in the song that comes right before the last chorus and I'd like to keep it in.

Standard felt like a lazy edit of Heavy - it is, (though it's kinda mean to call something lazy dude...I did at least include it and all, didn't I?) I'll spend some more time toning it down before sending my revision back, seems like the notes for this are pretty much the same as Heavy anyway

great notes, man. I'll look over the file again after I get some more opinions and send it back.

**Mollocephalus** · 06-8-2013, 07:41 AM

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Originally Posted by ReikonKeiri

it makes it retardedly annoying to AAA at anything above 1.6 but hey they make sense musically.

why is this even a factor at all in making a simfile

i thought we were making good files for starters which ALSO make sense, not stuff to play on high rates for the pr0s

James May · 06-8-2013, 11:52 AM

Thanks for the feedback on Roxas guys. Fission, is it better if we get in touch on Skype later on for the PR stuff?

**ReikonKeiri** · 06-8-2013, 12:09 PM

it has nothing to do with this pack, its just something that bugs me personally lol. I'm vain so I like playing my own files and I, myself, can only enjoy it on high rates.

**Staiain** · 06-8-2013, 12:48 PM

I'm actually stepping something for this

**Mollocephalus** · 06-8-2013, 01:28 PM

!!!!! awesome!!

FissionMailed1 · 06-8-2013, 01:51 PM

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Originally Posted by James May

Thanks for the feedback on Roxas guys. Fission, is it better if we get in touch on Skype later on for the PR stuff?

Yeah, sure, that's fine.

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Originally Posted by Coolboyrulez0

lol why are there like a million judges for a pack like this

Nobody other than Marco or Ji are judging. Everybody else is just giving notes.

FissionMailed1 · 06-8-2013, 06:39 PM

Wrote a review for Melody Circus (the heavy chart), stand by for that.

**bmah** · 06-8-2013, 07:12 PM

added

**rCaliberGX** · 06-8-2013, 07:44 PM

Was my file received? I got a failure notice on my inbox.

FissionMailed1 · 06-8-2013, 08:02 PM

Don't believe it arrived, no.

**rCaliberGX** · 06-8-2013, 08:19 PM

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Originally Posted by FissionMailed1

Don't believe it arrived, no.

Heh, was wondering why there were no comments about it. I just resent the email. It's quadbait@gmail.com right?

FissionMailed1 · 06-8-2013, 09:05 PM

I see it now. I'll try to review it tonight.

rparty89 · 06-8-2013, 09:13 PM

woo sent

FissionMailed1 · 06-8-2013, 09:56 PM

Wrote a review for Mirror Mirror, stand by for that as well.

06-8-2013, 03:09 AM	#142
bmah shots FIRED Global Moderator, User Support, Judge Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Edmonton, AB Age: 36 Posts: 8,448	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) Updated with a few more reviews.

06-8-2013, 03:11 AM	#143
FissionMailed1 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Massachusetts Age: 33 Posts: 1,267	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) I am going to write down a list of things I noticed for each file and feel like needs improvement, not necessarily judge them. I did this for two files so far, so check those out. Will write more tomorrow and Sunday. __________________ YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS. MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN. YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND. YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE. THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS. I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

06-8-2013, 05:26 AM	#145
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) lol why are there like a million judges for a pack like this

06-8-2013, 11:52 AM	#148
James May FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2012 Age: 31 Posts: 3,799	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) Thanks for the feedback on Roxas guys. Fission, is it better if we get in touch on Skype later on for the PR stuff? __________________ bananas

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06-8-2013, 01:28 PM	#151
Mollocephalus Custom User Title Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Italy Age: 35 Posts: 2,601	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) !!!!! awesome!! __________________

06-8-2013, 06:39 PM	#153
FissionMailed1 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Massachusetts Age: 33 Posts: 1,267	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) Wrote a review for Melody Circus (the heavy chart), stand by for that. __________________ YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS. MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN. YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND. YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE. THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS. I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

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bmah shots FIRED Global Moderator, User Support, Judge Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Edmonton, AB Age: 36 Posts: 8,448	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) added

06-8-2013, 07:44 PM	#155
rCaliberGX D7 Elite Keymasher Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 2,337	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) Was my file received? I got a failure notice on my inbox.

06-8-2013, 08:02 PM	#156
FissionMailed1 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Massachusetts Age: 33 Posts: 1,267	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) Don't believe it arrived, no. __________________ YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS. MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN. YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND. YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE. THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS. I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

06-8-2013, 09:05 PM	#158
FissionMailed1 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Massachusetts Age: 33 Posts: 1,267	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) I see it now. I'll try to review it tonight. __________________ YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS. MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN. YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND. YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE. THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS. I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

06-8-2013, 09:13 PM	#159
rparty89 FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 618	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) woo sent __________________

06-8-2013, 09:56 PM	#160
FissionMailed1 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Massachusetts Age: 33 Posts: 1,267	Re: Stepping Stones of Stepmania (Submissions Open!) Wrote a review for Mirror Mirror, stand by for that as well. __________________ YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS. MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN. YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND. YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE. THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS. I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

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