Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

[ChaosMaster1]

Originally Posted by TD_Project

He was just trying to write something. Leave the poor 14 year old kid alone. Besides if he doesn't have the right writing techniques or abilities, maybe just suggest to him what he has done wrong, then he can go and fix it instead of bluntly insulting him.

"Also, this has to be the lamest attempt at satirical literature that I have ever seen, this is horrible."

Very smooth.

the first person to ever stand up for me....in my life...=)

[TD_Project]

It's all good. When you write literature make sure your punctuation and grammar is good. Logically plan your sentences, etc. Besides I know your post wasn't 100% deadly serious so a bit of error isn't a bad thing.

Just practice though, otherwise you'll keep getting randomly insulted from people during your stay on FFR.

[BLAZZE-]

What a team!










































Just leave.

[TD_Project]

Originally Posted by BLAZZE-

What a team!










































Just leave.

I lol'd

[Silver_Brian]

Originally Posted by ChaosMaster1

You are 19, While I am 5 years younger than you, Do you expect a masterpiece from me or something?

You did post in the Literature forum.

[Nikkis]

It'd probably be better to LEARN the story of FFR first...then learn how to grammatically enhance your writing. What you wrote did NOT happen. Which contributes to more failure in your attempt to write a story.

[mead1]

Originally Posted by ChaosMaster1

the first person to ever stand up for me....in my life...=)

Cry about it on the internet.

[ReikonKeiri]

Originally Posted by BLAZZE-

What a team!

Just leave.

Leaving large amounts of empty lines in your posts is hilarious.

[BLAZZE-]

Originally Posted by ReikonKeiri

Leaving large amounts of empty lines in your posts is hilarious.

Because you're a really funny poster.




























NOT

[ReikonKeiri]

Originally Posted by BLAZZE-

I'm a ***.

***.

[TheRapingDragon]

Originally Posted by TD_Project

Besides if he doesn't have the right writing techniques or abilities, maybe just suggest to him what he has done wrong, then he can go and fix it instead of bluntly insulting him.

Originally Posted by Myself

Perhaps take some lessons on how to write correctly, then learn how to spell and how to use proper sentence structure.

Then learn how to turn a decent thought process into logical and legible writing.

Then start to create a story focusing around your main point (which in this case would be the bible style of writing).

Way to read the thread.