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[omgitznpv]

nightfirecat start getting stricter


a lot stricter

[dore]

hi

[omgitznpv]

silly hats only

[dore]

wrecked

[omgitznpv]

****

[dore]

ing hell

[buizel8888]

Since RFpack2 is postponed, I guess I will actually have to make a file for this for real. I'm pretty sure I know what one its going to be.

PS - Kommi will laugh his ass of at it.

[Nightfirecat]

Originally Posted by omgitznpv

nightfirecat start getting stricter


a lot stricter

Yeah...

Maybe...

>.>

Batch 3 doesn't have many great files...

[moches]

Submitted All of the World.

[The Dragon Knight]

Since my mom was on vacation, I stepped like six songs. One of them I'll be submitting here =P

[EnR]

NFC, yea I know about those trills, I just kept them like that, the blue notes go with the beat that changes, red go with the other beat.

moches, can you update the list of batch 3 submissions , unless you're just going to do it after you judge, that's fine too.

[Nightfirecat]

Originally Posted by EnR

NFC, yea I know about those trills, I just kept them like that, the blue notes go with the beat that changes, red go with the other beat.

Actually, no they change like 2 beats after, like if you took it to the beat like this:

<---
-v--
<---
-v--

And moved it up one or 2 in the measure... I'll check again, but I don't think they're correct to the beat changes...

[EnR]

C'mon judges, think you can post a few notes on the files sent so far

[moches]

Originally Posted by EnR

C'mon judges, think you can post a few notes on the files sent so far

Yeah, I guess the batch is closed now.

Post notes now.

1989- ** Sorry, I still like danceguy’s better. This isn’t bad at all, but there’s a lot more that you could have done, like some stops and some bpm changes, and following the vocals some more. Also, even with the trill, it’s still closer to an 11 than a 13.

All of the World- ***1/2 My file, the best I’ve ever made. Oni’s better than Heavy imo.

Blood and Black Chocolate- ** Nice job. Still, there was a couple of things you could have done to make it more enjoyable. For example, for pitch relevancy, you could have used minifreezes to accent the notes. Also, there were some really superfast notes at times you just ignored. I can understand not wanting to make it retardedly hard, but you could have used freezes to show the notes. But it’s not bad at all, just work on those two things and you’ll be good.

Clear- ** Nice pitch relevancy and accenting chords. I think you missed some notes in there though. Look over your work a little better.

Geno’s Forest- *1/2 Sorry, didn’t really enjoy it. The layering was inconsistent, and I almost quit out at the 24ths, which should be 32nds or 48ths staggered. I quit out at the middle because it wasn’t that fun and I knew how it was going to end.

Hits You Like Thunder- **1/2 I like this. There are some consistency issues, like freeze usage and layering however. Fix it up cause it’s worth fixing.

Incorporation- ***1/2 Super cool and fun, what I’d expect from dore. Nice pitch relevancy and it’s mega fun. The jacks=ouch….

Randomness Reactor- **1/2 This isn’t bad at all. Cool drummery song, definitely more of a 10 than a 9 though, maybe even an 11. Also, some minor melodies in there you could have stepped to make it more enjoyable.

[EnR]

i've always had a problem with layering, I suck horribly at it

[omgitznpv]

oh come on moches those files weren't that great

posting notes just to be gay

Batch 3 Reviews - npv



Geno's Forest F-Zero (Coolboyrulez0)

x/xxxx

All charts:
Really bad. The PR is absolutely terrible on this; it's at a level where I can't bear it.
The hold usage is terrible. Some of it is also incorrect. Check it over.
Gap is off by 40-ish ms.

Heavy chart:
Gets repetitive. Hold at the end is what

Oni and edit chart:
Hey making random steps to nothing is a cool way to get a file accepted

Oni chart:
Lots of technical inaccuracies and you miss a ton of stuff. The mines are pointless in this.

Edit chart:
This is a gigantic dump that makes no sense and I hope you go kill yourself
Everything about it is pretty much terrible



Blood and Black Chocolate (robertsona)

xx/xxxx

WHAT IS TECHNICAL ACCURACY
Some layering problems, and the steps are also awkward at times.
Song is also pretty boring/dumb




Randomness Reactor (robertsona)

x/xxxx

again, WHAT IS TECHNICAL ACCURACY
Very lame and boring patterns (overuse of staircases/rolls)
even though they're not really "pitches," it could be more PR
Use jumps and stuff when necessary.
Bad file in general
Bad song in general



1989 (intensez)

xx/xxxx

Fun at parts, boring at others. Some parts feel really understepped.
The 32nd trill is unnecessary. It can be fine as a roll IMO.
Technical accuracy is off on a couple of parts.
Hold length (such as those in the beginning) is dumb/incorrect
Danceguy's is better anyways



Clear (intensez)

x/xxxx

Very dumb and boring file.
Technical accuracy and PR are waaaaay off on this file.
The file was actually really really really annoying for me.
Bad song choice. Makes a way too easy file.
Jump/hand placement- check it.
Strange place to songcut IMO.
The BPM is really half of that (8th notes not 4ths)




Incorporation (dore)

xx/xxxx

lmao this song
Really close to being accepted, but just a couple things I don't like it about it.
The (428)(86) hand/jump thing gets really annoying at the higher tempos.
The quads kind of were a little too much for me; tone it down.
It gets a little repetitive for me near the end
lmao this song




Hits You Like Thunder (EnR)

xx/xxxx

Fun file, but it could be even more fun and has some problems.
At the beginning, most of it is actually a 12th swing pattern. Only a couple are 16th gallops.
Play around with holds a little bit; they could be used more/improved more
u cud add a few moar arroes here and dere
^ especially applies to the end
I think this could have a few mine tricks hehe

[EnR]

my sm doesn't allow me to use mines, its gay.

[Nightfirecat]

Blood and Black Chocolate-robertsona
	**
	Steps were not great--felt too much like mashing for most of the song.

Randomness Reactor-robertsona
	**1/2
	Steps were ok, but needs resyncing. Some arrows were missing or felt placed to no beat.

Geno's Forest F-Zero-Coolboyrulez
	*1/2
	In the heavy chart, you missed the intro at about 230-240 notes in. Also, heavy chart holds could be done away with. Challenge chart was dumpy--EXTREMELY bad layering.

1989-intensez
	***1/2
	Very good steps. Some parts felt a bit copy+pasted, but not really a whole lot.

Clear (Super Smash Bros Brawl)-intensez
	**
	Too easy, not wonderful steps.

Hits You Like Thunder-EnR
	**
	Rather offsync, some steps were kinda bland. Slow section was very offsync.

Incorporation-dore
	**1/2
	Good sync, but some of the notes/patters were extremely annoying--example: opening was extremely annoying.

Lunatic Princess-omgitznpv
	***
	Beginning of the holds section felt clumsy to hit... Besides that, nothing really wrong with it... Maybe a challenge chart, rather than heavy--felt too difficult for heavy.

All of the World-moches
	*1/2
	At around 245 (on the heavy chart), there is an extra note either before or after a hold; same place on the challenge chart, it's there again. Arrows are slightly offsync before the music. Repetitive rythyms, annoying steps, WAY too many of the hold steps with a tap step at the very end of it. Overall bad use of hands.

EDIT: Npv--you didn't post about all of the world.

[EnR]

slow section was done at 0.30, might be off, though, I'll recheck.

[omgitznpv]

I didn't have time to judge. These notes are from yesterday afternoon.

EnR, .3 is not exactly optimal for a song like that, lol.

NFC your judging is kind of...weird...by the way >_>