Old 11-25-2012, 09:35 PM   #1
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Old 11-25-2012, 09:41 PM   #2
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sounds great so far, unexpectedly.

what's this genre called?
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Old 11-25-2012, 09:45 PM   #3
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Man i have no idea, subgenre of hip hop i suppose
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Old 11-26-2012, 02:41 PM   #4
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Updated, probably won't do much more with it haha
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Old 11-27-2012, 12:43 AM   #5
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"file has never existed or has been deleted"

it's a conspiracy
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Old 11-27-2012, 02:16 AM   #6
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"file has never existed or has been deleted"

it's a conspiracy
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The file you're looking for either never existed or has been deleted.
It still seems to be an issue with me.
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Old 11-27-2012, 05:34 PM   #8
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It still seems to be an issue with me.
arghhh yeah **** tindeck
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Old 11-27-2012, 06:30 PM   #9
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It seems to work now.

I like this. I don't know if you used a sample for the melodic section, but it seems to work very well and it was a very nice groove you have in there. The drum/percussive section seemed a little weak for me but that's probably because I've been hooked on artists such as Flying Lotus and TOKiMONSTA who in their style tend to use harder drums.

Did you use sidechain in your work? I don't know if I can hear it or not. A little bit of a sidechain added would give the tune some more rhythmic value if you're interested in that, though it really isn't needed.

Nice work. I enjoyed.

A little example of what I listen to and where I'm coming from.
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A little example of what I listen to and where I'm coming from.
Yeah that was unbelievably cool, wasn't going for drums as hard as that though heh just basic commodities

And yes i do side chain, not too much though in this song :-)

thanks for the feedback and showing me that sick ass song

Edit: Oh yeah and the melody at the end wasn't sampled

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Old 11-27-2012, 09:32 PM   #11
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It's a pretty neat beat, I miss this style of music.

Everything sounds pretty mono at the moment. I would definitely try widening your mix a couple of ways. You could add an extra instrument that spreads on both sides left and right on the pan pot. Or you could sample delay your original jazz sample clip so that you create the illusion of stereo imaging.

Also, I think the vinyl effect is cool, but I think it's a bit overbearing in the mix as well.

Keep it up guy! Love this sound you got going on.
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this is so sick ~_~
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It's a pretty neat beat, I miss this style of music.

Everything sounds pretty mono at the moment. I would definitely try widening your mix a couple of ways. You could add an extra instrument that spreads on both sides left and right on the pan pot. Or you could sample delay your original jazz sample clip so that you create the illusion of stereo imaging.

Also, I think the vinyl effect is cool, but I think it's a bit overbearing in the mix as well.

Keep it up guy! Love this sound you got going on.
Ahhh very useful feedback ty
Vinyl effect is pretty loud white noise layered with scratches which explains why it's prolly overbearing, as well as the fact i raised the db a tiny bit above 15 khz hahah, fixed that up though. Thank you!

Kept it mono to give the hip hop feel, no vocalists though :[ might see what i can do unless someone wants to rap about downs syndrome or something for the track

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