So Peaceful (Guitar)

**flashpantss** · 04-6-2011, 01:08 PM

A new song that me and my stepdad have been working on. He did the playing and I recorded and cut and other stuff. Still no quite a finished song, cause the ending just isn't right. Hope you like it.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/411694

http://soundcloud.com/flashpantss/so-peaceful

**m0de** · 04-6-2011, 01:14 PM

pretty cool, i liked it

**flashpantss** · 04-6-2011, 01:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by m0de

pretty cool, i liked it

Thank you.

**DarkbearX** · 04-6-2011, 03:12 PM

It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound.

Overall not bad though. :)

**flashpantss** · 04-6-2011, 03:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkbearX

It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound.

Overall not bad though.

Yeah thats what something I was wondering, if the main melody was going to get stale to some people.

Thanks for the feedback

**~Zeta~** · 04-6-2011, 04:26 PM

Harmonies would be a nice addition to the melody.

EDIT: Along with balancing.

04-6-2011, 01:08 PM	#1
flashpantss Party Hard Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,310	So Peaceful (Guitar) A new song that me and my stepdad have been working on. He did the playing and I recorded and cut and other stuff. Still no quite a finished song, cause the ending just isn't right. Hope you like it. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/411694 http://soundcloud.com/flashpantss/so-peaceful __________________ 10th in 5th Official Tournament in D3 3RD in Dragons Fury: Custom Tournament #5 in D5A Best AAA's= Frictional Nevada (FIRST FGO) Kyrie (ONI Get), Eradication, Of Course you Need and nEed and neEd and NEED ME, Cinnamon Roll (FIRST TO AAA)

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m0de Marble Eater Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Joliet, Illinois Age: 39 Posts: 1,437	Re: So Peaceful (Guitar) pretty cool, i liked it __________________

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DarkbearX Shimose Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 1,995	Re: So Peaceful (Guitar) It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound. Overall not bad though. :) __________________ im gay SRL Page Castlevania IV, Super Metroid, and Cave Story speedruns D e e R F o r C e Leaderboards

04-6-2011, 04:26 PM	#6
~Zeta~ Flag Master Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: South Pole Age: 31 Posts: 2,156	Re: So Peaceful (Guitar) Harmonies would be a nice addition to the melody. EDIT: Along with balancing. __________________

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