04-14-2006, 04:37 PM | #1 |
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Poem of yourself
To any poets in the FFR community:
If any of you would like to write a poem of yourself, I would enjoy reading it. I don't really write poetry, but I love reading it so much. I urge any poets to post a poem of their own that reflects themself or tells a story about themself. I don't know why but self-reflection poetry is my favorite. |
04-14-2006, 08:38 PM | #2 | |
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This is funny as I was writting a poem about how my days start. Hope you enjoy it. This peom is written in one paragraph becuase I wanted it to be like a short story sorta.
I wake and let my security wash off my body leaving me exposed to the radiation of consciousness. I can feel it sticking. I show the world my appreciation with a sigh and hide back under my blanket. Like an illness I watch my dream fade grey and leave me, angry that I left so suddenly. My brain explodes with the tasks of today and I show my response yet again with a sigh. Testing its patience until it snaps at me to get up and start another meaning mean less day. Stuck in the limbo that’s my temple I prepare for breakfast and cancer. This day shall be mine and i shall start off on the good foot and smoke a cigarette until I feel the satisfaction of my brain swim in the nicotine. Clouding my senses and spinning me around. I wonder to myself if I will find anything that’s symbolic and reassures me that I am not just someone that exists, not just a statistic. Maybe that is symbolic. Statistics
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04-15-2006, 09:39 AM | #3 | |
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04-15-2006, 07:37 PM | #4 |
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Besides the fact that it doesn't really look like a poem, it's fairly good. Were you depressed or drunk when you wrote this?
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04-15-2006, 07:49 PM | #5 |
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As I often go from house to house, when night’s drape falls;
Today I stopped atop a hill and listened for the city’s calls. And what lie beneath how I would not dare, Today is what caressed my eyes, what dropped my jaw. My pretty friend beside me nudging my seat Her eyes infer my thoughts without a beat. Her hand she waved in front of my face Whilst the golden blankets of lights form their sheet. She calls my name, her voice a distant snow Tries to pull my mind back from its clutching crow Glistening beyond beauty’s name, all but fake The black city’s lights flaunt their enticing show. This image is awe, makes my skin bubble with smiles But the night is young and I have many more miles, Loads of work and endless piles, Loads of work and endless piles. This was a class assignment response on a Robert Frost poem. |
04-16-2006, 10:36 AM | #6 | ||
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Sleepless dragon, I thought that poem was awesome. Last edited by SethSquall; 04-16-2006 at 10:44 AM.. |
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04-16-2006, 02:39 PM | #7 |
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The paragraph thing wasn't bad.
This is short but it is about myself. My first self is the last My second self the first The first self dies, crying What will become Can only be |
04-16-2006, 08:57 PM | #8 | ||
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Edit: 100th post woooo
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04-17-2006, 01:00 AM | #9 |
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Thanks, it sounds like you understood it. I was worried nobody would.
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04-18-2006, 03:41 AM | #10 |
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KIIIIIIIIING OF THE JUNGLE
AWOOOO AWOOWOOO OOOO ME MAKE FIRE ME MAKE HOT FIRE BOOURNNNNS can you smell it? that bastard, smoking on his cigarette? we'll show him a thing or two. AWOOOO WOOOWOOO OOOOO
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04-20-2006, 03:25 AM | #12 |
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you must be a bastard
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04-20-2006, 01:17 PM | #13 |
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aight
I have no life. The computer merely seals my life in it's hard secky body. **** shes hott. **** IM A DUMBASS **** IM AN IDIOT **** IM A LOWLIFE **** *****BITCH
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