.Hack/Signs (Yasha Shii Yoake) requesting!

[PhoenixWEI]

I am new to song editor, but today I made up my mind and take a shot of my 1st edit song. this song from .Hack/Signs show (ending theme). I dont think its good but I do tried my best to create a part of the song... but I dont know what do for the continue of the song. Please few free try the song, and if you are a GOOD editor, could you also please, continue for the song have a good ending?

Email me for the (incomplete trial) simfile of the song
My Email: Phoenix-Remind@hotmail.com
(I'll reply bak to everyones who interesting in it)

Much appreciated!!!
Please leave me some common on my mailbox.
I am lots happy to read all the experience editors gave me.
(sorry, I sux at ENG >.<)

You're all have a nice day!
Wei Wei Lu