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Chromer
June 5th, 2005, 04:04 PM
Okay folks, this is Dj Renewman(Chromer) with another new song for the masses. Some things you need to know is that this is my 4th song I've done. This is also my longest at 5:21. IMO this is also my best. Enjoy.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/djrenewman_music.htm

Omeganitros
June 5th, 2005, 04:19 PM
I rofled at the part where it goes "3, 2, 1, CORNYEXPLOSIONSOUND!"

Not bad, I liked the instruments.

djshox
June 5th, 2005, 09:12 PM
No offense, but it sounds like you just threw in random loops and samples and called it your own. And yes I laughed too at the explosion.

Chromer
June 6th, 2005, 11:55 AM
I didn't throw in random loops. Actually everything but the 3,2,1 Explosion part was entirely made by me. I guess I'm not cut out obe a DJ huh? :(

Omeganitros
June 7th, 2005, 11:26 AM
Just work on it. Add some melody.

djshox
June 7th, 2005, 04:45 PM
I didn't throw in random loops. Actually everything but the 3,2,1 Explosion part was entirely made by me. I guess I'm not cut out obe a DJ huh? :(

Criticism is your best motivation, don't give up just because I said a few harsh words.

sleeplessdragn
June 7th, 2005, 07:01 PM
Not just the samples but the percs sounded very FL. And bass is your best friend sir. Remember that you want to fill up as much space as possible with sound, it adds complexity; unless of course the emptiness is used for tension. Reverb is good for doing this, among other things.

Chromer
June 7th, 2005, 08:04 PM
Gah! I still have much to learn! XP

Moogy
June 7th, 2005, 08:40 PM
make the mix more yellow rofl

Chromer
June 8th, 2005, 03:08 AM
What? Was it too purple? I kid , I kid.