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  • Wayward Vagabond
    Confirmed Heartbreaker
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Jul 2012
    • 5866

    #286
    Re: Show your sketching!

    Originally posted by Quigly
    if you have the head turned at an angle you have to make sure the facial features are in correspondence with that angle
    shh i know i didnt notice until -after- i finished

    i dont actually take breaks when i draw so anything thats wrong i dont find out until its too late to fix without any noticeable after marks. its a habit i need to break

    also dope minecraft head!!

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    • Nullifidian
      ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Sep 2007
      • 1837

      #287
      Re: Show your sketching!

      @ Quigly, the proportions look really flat. Especially near the chin, it looks like it's a flat mask instead of an actual chin shape.

      @ Carlos, to a lesser extent same deal. The shading doesn't really define the shapes of the face making the face and the hat look flat.
      e: also yeah what quigly said, the nose etc should be in the direction the face is in, unless she's been boxing or something :')

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      • Mahjix
        FFR Veteran
        • May 2006
        • 182

        #288
        Re: Show your sketching!

        Here's a sketch I did while riding the bus. I have no idea where this inspiration came from...

        www.InkJuse.com

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        • LongGone
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          FFR Simfile Author
          • Jul 2008
          • 1679

          #289
          Re: Show your sketching!

          Starting to learn ..
          My Solo Simfiles
          My Solo Simfiles Part 2

          Originally posted by Choofers
          people age at a rate of about 1 year per year

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          • Mahjix
            FFR Veteran
            • May 2006
            • 182

            #290
            Re: Show your sketching!

            This is accurate for the most part. The only things that are off are location of the hands and nipples:

            The wrists falls on the same line as the crotch area and the nipples falls lower where the line for the biceps are (it's about one fist lower from the armpit).
            www.InkJuse.com

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            • Nullifidian
              ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Sep 2007
              • 1837

              #291
              Re: Show your sketching!

              Something about the knees looks off as well but I can't tell if it's actually the knees that are too low down, or that the crotch area is too high up. You should also work on more confident linework.
              Last edited by Nullifidian; 12-4-2012, 03:53 PM.

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              • Wayward Vagabond
                Confirmed Heartbreaker
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Jul 2012
                • 5866

                #292
                Re: Show your sketching!

                the thighs are waaaaay too long. which is what is making the knees look off.

                nice attempt though keep at it

                also fuc da haters, self esteem issue lines all the way

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                • Mahjix
                  FFR Veteran
                  • May 2006
                  • 182

                  #293
                  Re: Show your sketching!

                  Alright so the previous sketch I did was practically begging for colors...
                  www.InkJuse.com

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                  • Frank Munoz
                    Muein
                    • Nov 2007
                    • 2047

                    #294
                    Re: Show your sketching!

                    god damn there's some talent in this thread
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                    may the good arrow guide you

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                    • Spenner
                      Forum User
                      • Nov 2006
                      • 2403

                      #295
                      Re: Show your sketching!

                      Mahjix your shit is awesome. Really solid, and groovy style. My nitpick is that the background is rather distracting, and that a sense of depth isn't very strongly portrayed with the coins (same colour palette with each coin despite the differences in perspective (at least, similar enough to not look very widespread)).

                      Also, the splattery outlines are neat but something a bit more organic and energy-looking would convey the concept a bit stronger.

                      Keep up the good work though, everything else is great.

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                      • m0de
                        Marble Eater
                        • Jan 2006
                        • 1437

                        #296
                        Re: Show your sketching!

                        Originally posted by Mahjix
                        Alright so the previous sketch I did was practically begging for colors...
                        think i saw this in darksharks portfolio.




                        just kidding this is amazing. awesome stuff my friend.

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                        • Mahjix
                          FFR Veteran
                          • May 2006
                          • 182

                          #297
                          Re: Show your sketching!

                          Originally posted by Spenner
                          Mahjix your shit is awesome. Really solid, and groovy style. My nitpick is that the background is rather distracting, and that a sense of depth isn't very strongly portrayed with the coins (same colour palette with each coin despite the differences in perspective (at least, similar enough to not look very widespread)).

                          Also, the splattery outlines are neat but something a bit more organic and energy-looking would convey the concept a bit stronger.

                          Keep up the good work though, everything else is great.
                          Spenner, you are absolutely %200 correct! I was very disappointed with how the background panned out. When I submitted this in my deviantART I thought to myself, "I don't like the green splatters... I should make it smokey instead." And YES! I do think the coins should convey some sort of depth. V2 is now in the works. Thank you sir!

                          Also, LOL m0de! I was about to say, "ALREADY!?" Hahaha Thanks!
                          www.InkJuse.com

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                          • catzeye21138
                            FFR Player
                            • Mar 2007
                            • 164

                            #298
                            Re: Show your sketching!

                            You never said it had to be good.



                            ...or orangutans apparently.



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                            • Wayward Vagabond
                              Confirmed Heartbreaker
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Jul 2012
                              • 5866

                              #299
                              Re: Show your sketching!

                              That caption rofl awesome

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                              • Mahjix
                                FFR Veteran
                                • May 2006
                                • 182

                                #300
                                Re: Show your sketching!

                                Hahaha! He looks blazed!
                                www.InkJuse.com

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