Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 20

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-11-2009, 02:37 PM

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Originally Posted by kommisar[os]

i put it in mi sm folder. can't play it for some reason

obscure japanese symbols in the mp3 perhaps?

(07) [Veil ∞ Lia,Aoi,YU⇒KA,karuta,REI(Junksystem.),ひろな,MiKA] Don't say “lazy” －DJ Hirojack Mix－.mp3

lmfao

Forgot not every one had Eastern Language packs installed

I'll change it up and resend it ...AGAIN!

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-11-2009, 02:38 PM

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Originally Posted by icontrolyourworld

why is there only one download on my file still O.o?

this is exactly why I told you submit directly to the pack address. PM'ing us individually is useless because majority of us don't bother checking it.

**kommisar** · 11-11-2009, 02:44 PM

he only pm'd you. i didn't get anything on all 3 of my accounts lmao

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-11-2009, 02:49 PM

Resent, renamed everything from folder name to .sm and .mp3. **** better work this time.

Edit: This is ****ed up, now it doesn't seem to attach. I'll upload the zip file to mediafire and then email that to the judges if that is fine

Edit 2: Uploaded to mediafire. Sent. Should work now.

icontrolyourworld · 11-11-2009, 05:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

this is exactly why I told you submit directly to the pack address. PM'ing us individually is useless because majority of us don't bother checking it.

I sent it to the address after you told me so. It should be there, i sent it 3 days ago.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-11-2009, 05:27 PM

OK the reason we didn't receive your file was because it was listed as spam, rofl. But OK now we have it.

(Who_cares973) Crunk De Gaulle
Very cool file. Found it very enjoyable. Accepted

(CBR) Don't Say Lazy - DJ Hirojack Mix -
**** you for choosing this song even if it is a remix. Didn't like your overall freeze usage. File is pretty generic overall and isn't packworthy. I don't get why you stopped stepping as soon as the chorus kicked in either.Rejected

(Rin-Dude) Chaosmaid
Way better than Ninzaburo's dump. Reminds me a lot of Infinity, haha. Straightforward and fun. Accepted

(Jimerax) Heroic Polonaise
lol you stepped Chopin. Very colourful and accurate. Only complaint is that the trills are harder than the rest of the file and it lacks replay value TBH. Accepted

(Sargon) Minus 3
Well structured however kinda generic overall. Rejected

(SKG_Scintill) SA2B Green Forest
This would've been a good vibrajacking file but this is not packworthy here. Pretty generic overall and drags on. Rejected

(SKG_Scintill) Castle of the Guy
Well structured and enjoyable to some extent. However gets repetitive and I didn't like those 32nds at all. Rejected

(Synexi) The Dark Blowhole V2
Hmmm seems just about accurate. Only complaint is that the middle section gets all hold dumpy while the rest of the file is basically just stream. I personally find this generic but I might lightly accept. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges.

(Icyworld) Ranger Elite
Those rainbow rolls or whatever were god awful. Got too repetitive and I quit out. Rejected.

icontrolyourworld · 11-11-2009, 05:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

OK the reason we didn't receive your file was because it was listed as spam, rofl. But OK now we have it.

heh

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

(Icyworld) Ranger Elite
Those rainbow rolls or whatever were god awful. Got too repetitive and I quit out. Rejected.

so if i take out the rolls and find something else to step during that part of the song, it would have a better chance at being in the pack?Honestly i thought they were kinda fun, but whatev

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-11-2009, 05:47 PM

I quit out of the file. It dragged on and got very repetitive. Even if you do fix the rolls, I doubt I'd accept it. Find something less repetitive to step.

icontrolyourworld · 11-11-2009, 05:52 PM

submitted something

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-11-2009, 05:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

**** you for choosing this song even if it is a remix.

lol

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

Didn't like your overall freeze usage.

They obviously go to the vocals :/

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

File is pretty generic overall and isn't packworthy.

k

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

I don't get why you stopped stepping as soon as the chorus kicked in either.

Got bored lmao

**SKG_Scintill** · 11-11-2009, 06:13 PM

Yay, I got good notes even though they got rejected xD

**kommisar** · 11-11-2009, 07:38 PM

the path to a tru stepman is a long one

one day everything you step will be good

maybe.

alexdestructions · 11-11-2009, 07:44 PM

The Legend of Kommisar: The Stepman Adventures

**kommisar** · 11-11-2009, 07:45 PM

see: how to make a midare file

look it up on google it's super informative.

moches · 11-11-2009, 08:29 PM

xrosspost from Bluexoon

minus 3- really no life to the file. doesn't feel very expressive at all; almost like an FFR file. dumb mine usage.

heroic mayonnaise- yesh

chaosmaid- I guess you could cut back on the freezes on every single anime vocal but it's not a bad file otherwise. kind of reminds me of infinity haha. maybe

castle of the guy- I was wondering why this song sounded so familiar then I remembered Monty on the Run rofl. not too bad technically but wow what are those 32nds that part is straight 8th. all of the minijacks get a bit grating after a while. not terrible but seriously this song doesn't have too much potential.

hurry somebody up- I find this song itself has tons of potential but a lot of parts are done inaccurately. pretty good grasp of freeze usage there as I didn't find anything that was obnoxiously long so good job. I'd say go to Gundam or Kommisar for a list of technical errors. with fixes I'd accept this.

green forest- some parts of this are very nice (liked that pattern for the drums at the beginning) but other parts are either offsync (not all of those are straight 24th/32nds and sometimes you even got the note interval wrong) and those 32nds imo should be moved to 24ths even though I didn't check which one it actually was, it feels closer to 24ths (or just straight 16ths maybe). patternwise I'm seeing a little improvement from you and your layering methods are getting better (none of that Keelhauled syndrome here) so keep it up. you have potential.

dont say lazy- NOT STEPPING THE CHORUS IS LAZY. haha. serious review: technically not bad at all. 32nd rolls patterns at the beginning are a bit stupid to hit, vocal freezes can be cut out at some parts (just have them to longer notes because having to keep holds while hitting 16th stream is sort of weird-feeling) and put jumps to bass instead of melody at that part because those jacks don't flow too well. also triple jacks are kind of weird and break the flow of that part. geez I really don't like this song and I don't think this is packworthy but with a better song you might have a shot

icontrolyourworld · 11-11-2009, 08:38 PM

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Originally Posted by moches

hurry somebody up- I find this song itself has tons of potential but a lot of parts are done inaccurately. pretty good grasp of freeze usage there as I didn't find anything that was obnoxiously long so good job. I'd say go to Gundam or Kommisar for a list of technical errors. with fixes I'd accept this.

Gundam and/or Kommisar, can you help me with my technical errors please?

ninzaburo · 11-11-2009, 08:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

(Rin-Dude) Chaosmaid
Way better than Ninzaburo's dump. Reminds me a lot of Infinity, haha. Straightforward and fun. Accepted

Whoa, I was editing my Chaosmaid... duh.

Oh well, at least Chaosmaid it's in the pack now. Rind-Dude, Iku Acme salutes you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXu8vtu5TwQ

Anyway, I sent my last two files, Judge them.

*Crossing fingers*

buizel8888 · 11-11-2009, 08:56 PM

Oh yeah im stepping something for this. I need to finish the other half tomorrow

**Patashu** · 11-11-2009, 09:26 PM

it's not called 'castle of the guy' it's called 'monty on the run'

****ers

**kommisar** · 11-11-2009, 09:43 PM

hey i made an awesome pad file for monty on the run

if it sucks i'm banning you from submitting

ninzaburo wtfffffffff was that hahaha

ps im rin-dude

11-11-2009, 02:44 PM	#383
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open he only pm'd you. i didn't get anything on all 3 of my accounts lmao

11-11-2009, 02:49 PM	#384
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Resent, renamed everything from folder name to .sm and .mp3. ** better work this time. Edit: This is ed up, now it doesn't seem to attach. I'll upload the zip file to mediafire and then email that to the judges if that is fine Edit 2:** Uploaded to mediafire. Sent. Should work now. Last edited by Coolboyrulez0; 11-11-2009 at 03:25 PM..

11-11-2009, 05:27 PM	#386
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open OK the reason we didn't receive your file was because it was listed as spam, rofl. But OK now we have it. (Who_cares973) Crunk De Gaulle Very cool file. Found it very enjoyable. Accepted (CBR) Don't Say Lazy - DJ Hirojack Mix - ** you for choosing this song even if it is a remix. Didn't like your overall freeze usage. File is pretty generic overall and isn't packworthy. I don't get why you stopped stepping as soon as the chorus kicked in either.Rejected (Rin-Dude) Chaosmaid Way better than Ninzaburo's dump. Reminds me a lot of Infinity, haha. Straightforward and fun. Accepted (Jimerax) Heroic Polonaise lol you stepped Chopin. Very colourful and accurate. Only complaint is that the trills are harder than the rest of the file and it lacks replay value TBH. Accepted (Sargon) Minus 3 Well structured however kinda generic overall. Rejected (SKG_Scintill) SA2B Green Forest This would've been a good vibrajacking file but this is not packworthy here. Pretty generic overall and drags on. Rejected (SKG_Scintill) Castle of the Guy Well structured and enjoyable to some extent. However gets repetitive and I didn't like those 32nds at all. Rejected (Synexi) The Dark Blowhole V2 Hmmm seems just about accurate. Only complaint is that the middle section gets all hold dumpy while the rest of the file is basically just stream. I personally find this generic but I might lightly accept. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges. (Icyworld) Ranger Elite Those rainbow rolls or whatever were god awful. Got too repetitive and I quit out. Rejected. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles** (4key & 6key) Last edited by Gundam-Dude; 11-11-2009 at 08:48 PM..

11-11-2009, 05:47 PM	#388
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I quit out of the file. It dragged on and got very repetitive. Even if you do fix the rolls, I doubt I'd accept it. Find something less repetitive to step. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-11-2009, 05:52 PM	#389
icontrolyourworld Enjoy life! Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 4,182	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open submitted something __________________ http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...d.php?t=149106

11-11-2009, 07:38 PM	#392
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open the path to a tru stepman is a long one one day everything you step will be good maybe.

11-11-2009, 07:45 PM	#394
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open see: how to make a midare file look it up on google it's super informative.

11-11-2009, 08:29 PM	#395
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 29 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open xrosspost from Bluexoon minus 3- really no life to the file. doesn't feel very expressive at all; almost like an FFR file. dumb mine usage. heroic mayonnaise- yesh chaosmaid- I guess you could cut back on the freezes on every single anime vocal but it's not a bad file otherwise. kind of reminds me of infinity haha. maybe castle of the guy- I was wondering why this song sounded so familiar then I remembered Monty on the Run rofl. not too bad technically but wow what are those 32nds that part is straight 8th. all of the minijacks get a bit grating after a while. not terrible but seriously this song doesn't have too much potential. hurry somebody up- I find this song itself has tons of potential but a lot of parts are done inaccurately. pretty good grasp of freeze usage there as I didn't find anything that was obnoxiously long so good job. I'd say go to Gundam or Kommisar for a list of technical errors. with fixes I'd accept this. green forest- some parts of this are very nice (liked that pattern for the drums at the beginning) but other parts are either offsync (not all of those are straight 24th/32nds and sometimes you even got the note interval wrong) and those 32nds imo should be moved to 24ths even though I didn't check which one it actually was, it feels closer to 24ths (or just straight 16ths maybe). patternwise I'm seeing a little improvement from you and your layering methods are getting better (none of that Keelhauled syndrome here) so keep it up. you have potential. dont say lazy- NOT STEPPING THE CHORUS IS LAZY. haha. serious review: technically not bad at all. 32nd rolls patterns at the beginning are a bit stupid to hit, vocal freezes can be cut out at some parts (just have them to longer notes because having to keep holds while hitting 16th stream is sort of weird-feeling) and put jumps to bass instead of melody at that part because those jacks don't flow too well. also triple jacks are kind of weird and break the flow of that part. geez I really don't like this song and I don't think this is packworthy but with a better song you might have a shot Last edited by moches; 11-11-2009 at 08:33 PM..

11-11-2009, 08:56 PM	#398
buizel8888 FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Groton, CT USA Age: 33 Posts: 1,536	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Oh yeah im stepping something for this. I need to finish the other half tomorrow

11-11-2009, 09:26 PM	#399
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open it's not called 'castle of the guy' it's called 'monty on the run' **ers __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs:** ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

11-11-2009, 09:43 PM	#400
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open hey i made an awesome pad file for monty on the run if it sucks i'm banning you from submitting ninzaburo wtfffffffff was that hahaha ps im rin-dude

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