A poem: Rain

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  • Litodude
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2006
    • 4548
    #16
    Re: A poem: Rain

    Originally posted by Fission
    is this a poem for lito
    i love you so much oh my god
    Originally posted by t-rogdor
    i finally got a weed hookup again and i texted the dude asking where to meet him tomorrow and the dude just said "out west"

    dude
    out west?
    the fuck kinda location is west?
    am i buying weed off a gotdamn pirate


    Originally posted by lurker
    remind everyone that i am an outed racist neo-nazi who no one in their right mind should ever interact with in any way whatsoever

    http://imgur.com/a/Ww9g3

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      • evanescence_death4ever
        where'sTHEdrain?!
        • Jun 2007
        • 616
        #17
        Re: A poem: Rain

        Originally posted by Fission
        is this a poem for lito
        Why is there no 'like' button on FFR?

        Oh wait, I'm very glad there is not one. Fission, you are epic.
        #charu4president2016

        "Life is always downhill, everyone is heading towards death every day. It's up to you to look for the hills you can climb up instead
        Or something
        I just made that up but it sounds good" ~alloyus~

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          • Litodude
            FFR Player
            • Feb 2006
            • 4548
            #18
            Re: A poem: Rain

            Originally posted by Charlotte Kelly
            Boyfriend's name is Ryan I call him Rain.
            Whoever lito is can definitely say I wrote it for them. Nothing like a creepy stalker to get the conversation started .
            Not meant to be lewd "reels me in and releases" I figured some would think this is but no sometimes he's not that affectionate and sometimes he is. Didn't want to reuse the "hot and cold"
            "A 10 on the Richter scale" yeeeeeah that kind of is. Thought I was asexual before I met him then everything got shook up.
            sup babe
            Originally posted by t-rogdor
            i finally got a weed hookup again and i texted the dude asking where to meet him tomorrow and the dude just said "out west"

            dude
            out west?
            the fuck kinda location is west?
            am i buying weed off a gotdamn pirate


            Originally posted by lurker
            remind everyone that i am an outed racist neo-nazi who no one in their right mind should ever interact with in any way whatsoever

            http://imgur.com/a/Ww9g3

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              • alloyus
                ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Oct 2006
                • 3269
                #19
                Re: A poem: Rain

                To me the structure should've been reworked a bit so some of the ideas actually stay together so it seems more coherent (or maybe you were going for something a little sporadic because that's the way you feel about him? Dunno if you'd think of it that deeply or not I dunno you. Also would've liked to see some punctuation but it's whatevs. Content/metaphor-wise was good to me. Richter scale thing was cool

                ^FFP_D0pey btw

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