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  • MarioNintendo
    Expect delays.
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Mar 2008
    • 4179

    #871
    Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

    Bump. I sent a balloon fight medley. I hope the judges will like it. Please understand. Sorry for the spam. Where are you Ossa.

    <3

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    • Dj_Ossa
      SMGroove
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • May 2006
      • 478

      #872
      Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

      Alright guys! I'm back for another batch of reviews! Also, sent you a PM MarioNintendo

      Let's get started, shall we?

      A Beautiful Day For Golf (MarioNintendo) - YES. WOW this file's a blast. Good job.

      Airship Stage (cedolad) - YES. AH - MAH - ZEN file holy shit. One of my favourites so far!

      Balloon Fight Medley (MarioNintendo) - YES. Again, just such a blast playing your files, man!. Awesome first submissions so far

      Battle 2 (moches) - Yes. Not only is moches one of my favourite simfile artists, but this song is absolute boss. Awesome fun file, sir. Good to see Harvard is giving you some time off to make more amazing files!

      Dark Demon's Song (MarioNintendo) - Yes. This is exactly how I would have stepped this song, and that's a good thing!

      Deku Palace (Lofty) - No. Not a big fan of the patterns and the use of color theory on this file. Repetitive, song doesn't really help. Also, I'm fairly sure that what you tried to pull off with the emphasized not in the two sections is offsync.

      Entrusted Hope (CyclopsDragon) - No. This song is amazing. That being said, I think you underutilized the song. It's a very generic streamy file, and there's nothing wrong with that. I just think this song deserves a different approach, if you're willing to resubmit; would love to see this song in the pack.

      Factory Stage (cedolad) - YES. Amazing.

      Gear Getaway (MarioNintendo) - Yes. Swing's always a good choice. Good job.

      Gopher Grove (Jose_Varela) - MAYBE. Ok, here's the thing. LOVE the effects, I think it's fresh; I think people don't use those amazing SM features nearly as much as they should. THAT BEING SAID, the file's pretty simple. Again, nothing wrong with that, this just feels like a somewhat challenging pad file. If you could make an extra difficulty targeted more towards KB players and resubmit, I'll consider it for sure, it has a LOT of potential.

      Hope & Joy Peace & Love (MarioNintendo) - YES. This, Sir, is your opus magnum. My favourite you've submitted so far. Amazing.

      Neko Atsume no Theme (Gundam-Dude) - No. Some interesting things you did but the song is boring and the file is extremely repetitive, not much going on. I just didn't enjoy it :/

      Rhythm and Balance (bmah) - Yes. Great song, solid file.

      The Mystic Caves (Lofty) - Maybe. Song's amazing. This file is definitely better than you other submission. However, same issues apply (with me). Patterns feel off, some of the stuff you stepped doesn't even follow anything (there's a couple of notes at the end that seem to be ghost notes?). Again, with the color theory, it's really cool if it's used properly, and you did use it well towards the end, but all the other parts were colored notes showed up made not sense to me, maybe I'm missing a sound? Please take a look at it and send a resubmission, I would love to have this song in the pack.

      Alright, folks, that's all! Until next time
      Last edited by Dj_Ossa; 03-23-2016, 12:00 AM.
      My FFR Stats ^_^;;

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      • jose656
        A shark that animates.
        • Jun 2011
        • 138

        #873
        Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

        Originally posted by Dj_Ossa
        Gopher Grove (Jose_Varela) - MAYBE. Ok, here's the thing. LOVE the effects, I think it's fresh; I think .people don't use those amazing SM features nearly as much as they should. THAT BEING SAID, the file's pretty simple. Again, nothing wrong with that, this just feels like a somewhat challenging pad file. If you could make an extra difficulty targeted more towards KB players and resubmit, I'll consider it for sure, it has a LOT of potential.
        Alright, I'll keep that in mind. I maybe create two levels, although, since I'm not good at KB chart mapping, this might go bad.
        A shark that animates, programs, and bunch of other things.
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        • MarioNintendo
          Expect delays.
          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Music Producer
          • Mar 2008
          • 4179

          #874
          Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

          Wow thanks for the reviews mate!

          Just a suggestion (I suck at graphics), but I think using these for inspiration would be nice for Hope & Joy Peace & Love. Especially the background. They're actual acrade marquees and posters for Gradius.



          Last edited by MarioNintendo; 03-23-2016, 09:01 AM.

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          • lofty rhino
            D7 Elite Keymasher
            • Dec 2014
            • 705

            #875
            Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

            I sent my fixes for The Mystic Caves. Please judge this new version for those who did not judge it yet.

            Thanks for the reviews Ossa.

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            • macgravel
              Resident Poopbutt
              FFR Simfile Author
              • May 2004
              • 2405

              #876
              Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

              Balloon Fight Medley (MarioNintendo) - Extremely fun file! Your files are just so much fun dude. You get me hype in my pants. YUP.

              Battle 2 (moches) - Yo, Mystic Quest! I love the soundtrack to that game. Very fun file! No complaints! Yes.

              Deku Palace (Lofty) - Okay, I need to ask you a question. When trying to step this file did it keep feeling randomly offsync? Trying to view it in the editor is a nightmare. Because of the encoding on the MP3, stepmania is having a seizure. What's with all of the 192nds sprinkled throughout the file? Is that because of the poorly encoded MP3 and Stepmania or what? Also thet entire 192nd section is off. Unless you make changes again and resubmit or something it's a no

              Gopher Grover (Jose_Varela) - I love the gimmicks! Only downside is the song/chart repeat and nothing changes. It's really easy, but that's alright, because I want this pack to have all kinds of difficulties! Yes!

              Rhythm and Balance (bmah) - SONIC ADVENTURE 2! You stepped my favorite song, too! Hard, but solid chart! No complaints! Yup!

              The Mystic Caves (Lofty) - Definitely gonna need some changes. There's some really cool ideas in here. Half the time it's hard to really hear what the notes are going to, it just feels dumped in. There's times where you step a certain sound and then 2 seconds later you completely avoid it. It's feels really hectic and all over the place. Love the jacks, but even those stretch on for a little too long (pitch changes but you stay on the same arrow). As of now, it's a no. I would love to see some changes and a resubmit though! You're close!
              Last edited by macgravel; 03-26-2016, 09:00 PM.

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              • NeonSM
                Я тебя люблю Маша
                • Jan 2014
                • 571

                #877
                Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                You judged the fix, right?

                Lofty btw
                Last edited by NeonSM; 03-26-2016, 11:21 PM.

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                • macgravel
                  Resident Poopbutt
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • May 2004
                  • 2405

                  #878
                  Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                  Originally posted by NeonSM
                  You judged the fix, right?

                  Lofty btw
                  Yup

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                  • MarioNintendo
                    Expect delays.
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    FFR Music Producer
                    • Mar 2008
                    • 4179

                    #879
                    Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                    neonsm is lofty rhino, confirmed?

                    haiyyyype. Thanks for the review mac.

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                    • lofty rhino
                      D7 Elite Keymasher
                      • Dec 2014
                      • 705

                      #880
                      Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                      Close enough.

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                      • MarioNintendo
                        Expect delays.
                        FFR Simfile Author
                        FFR Music Producer
                        • Mar 2008
                        • 4179

                        #881
                        Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                        Sent a file. Check out this cool-ass banner.

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                        • MarioNintendo
                          Expect delays.
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          FFR Music Producer
                          • Mar 2008
                          • 4179

                          #882
                          Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                          Sent a fix for that file with the cool-ass banner.

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                          • macgravel
                            Resident Poopbutt
                            FFR Simfile Author
                            • May 2004
                            • 2405

                            #883
                            Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                            u kilt the pak

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                            • hi19hi19
                              lol happy
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Oct 2005
                              • 12194

                              #884
                              Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!



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                              • MarioNintendo
                                Expect delays.
                                FFR Simfile Author
                                FFR Music Producer
                                • Mar 2008
                                • 4179

                                #885
                                Re: The VideoGame MegaPack 4 (OPEN FOR SUBMISSIONS)!

                                Now i truly kilt the pack.

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