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  • stargroup100
    behanjc & me are <3'ers
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    • Jul 2006
    • 2051

    #361
    Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

    i wanna see velious make more stuff
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    • stargroup100
      behanjc & me are <3'ers
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      • Jul 2006
      • 2051

      #362
      Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

      also why do I get the feeling that this pack is gonna have a fuckton of awesome marathon charts
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      • FissionMailed1
        FFR Player
        • Feb 2012
        • 1267

        #363
        Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

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        • Patashu
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          • Apr 2006
          • 8609

          #364
          Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

          I don't have anything to step

          (I think)

          (idk)
          Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker:
          http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world
          http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png
          Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1)
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          • dascookieman
            FFR Player
            • Jan 2006
            • 3248

            #365
            Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

            SUP MALICE. oh i so wish yesssss would show up too . PATASHU VIEWING THE THREAD. also kil submitted a file. if your file is not on the submitted files list, please let me know!!


            2 marathons left that i havn't played -_- fml, marathons!!!


            orbital

            measure 56 the jack can't have that leftdown jump in the middle of it, it's a lot harder than anything else in the file. i don't wanna change it for you since you might wanna change up the previous pattern as well then, change it and it's accepted


            eos
            added a few missing notes in the beginning (see screenshots), is this ok? accepted anyhow






            cirnorhtl

            made changes and sent back a file, my changes are in heavy.


            measure 9 added a missing freeze (same sound as you already have a freeze to)
            measure 10-15 the 16ths are going to the lead synth right? changed it to the way i hear it. measure 13 might be stupid though lol
            measure 18-23 kept changing lots of stuff, mostly lead 16ths. the pattern in measure 23 became stupid
            measure 29 changes the freezes but keep it the way it was if you want
            measure 55 changes to the cool sound
            measure 63 removed one 8th
            measure 64 i think there might be 24ths
            measure 85 missing 16th
            measure 96 the freeze changes pitch
            measure 98 the freeze changes pitch here too

            it might have made some of the patterns really stupid and measure 13 and measure 23 became stupid though. make changes in any way you'd like and resubmit


            apocynthian drive

            21-35 changed it to how i hear it LOL check it out lmao (heavy). accepted anyhow


            cyberstorm
            LMFAO wow. good music much? accepted if you cut out a lot of the song that is just 8ths and 4th in the file early. fun file i can't believe i'm accepting a file to that song lol but it's actually really fun and even though there are lots of speedcore files this is actually kinda unique. it's cool with all the bpm changes and it actually seemed very accurately stepped


            measure 1-9 the guitar plays a palm muted note after the 8th where you don't have an arrow reoccuringly, it should be a 16th on he left side imo.
            too much to do now to look at it in detail more but it seemed it's accurate for most part


            headphone valor

            rejected for now but could possibly have a chance after a major revision. the beginning vocals seemed off and seemed to have missing notes. the part when the guitar comes and there's 8ths just didn't feel very good, the guitar was playing almost constant 8ths i think? you should just add the bassdrum+snare drum on top of that. the next verse or whatever it was, was cooler but it relied to much on minifreezes to make it challenging and i generally think putting that much minifreezes to a sound is a bad idea (you do this throughout the file obviously)
            , it should be obvious what sound is being followed anyway because of it playing so often. the synth that the minifreezes does go to is often left out in parts as well while it is the sound that i feel always would make the file most interesting and fun. the solo part in the middle was really cool and it kind of what gives the file a chance. but the ending could be made a lot better i think, with the synth stepped more (the one you have minifreezes to), and a lot of the beginning could actually be cut out and make it a more fun file. (didn't look at it in the editor sry i have a lot to do)


            kony-yata-mina-JAPANINIWEIRDWORDS
            pretty cool file but i think too many sounds are represented by different minifreezes, i understand they all have different duration and you can tell the difference when playing, but it's taken to an extreme and i don't really like it. the end is pretty cool, the beginning is mediocre, the minijacks-part is nice, and the trillstream kinda sucked.


            measure 25 don't like the jack
            measure 30&32 missing minifreeze but the whole minifreezing of the file should be remade a bit imo
            measure 34-40 it's not easy to follow what the jumps are going to and this part just isn't that much fun to play. i think you should step the rambling vocals, the add the stream on top of that with or without the basskicks it'll be hilarious lol (the stream should be all over and not trills in that case)
            the next part is cool but i have too much to do to check it for errors now but it seems pretty awesome
            measure 52 one more minijack (before they start)
            measure 59-68 this part is messy imo. if it's supposed to be all the percussion stepped there are missing notes and probably a few ones that aren't there


            Opening underwater pokemon show

            it completly lacks any kind of flow and it's really hard to follow. don't have time for it in the editor as it would take me forever. some parts are cool, some are a lot more challenging than other, unforunately most of it is challening in a not so fun way with so much different types of color notes all the time that aren't even fast, it gets a bit tedious to play towards the end to be honest. nice try but this one needs some major revision to have a chance, but i wouldn't completly rule it out


            paradise lost

            it's really fucen cool good job dude and it was really easy to follow and tell that it was accurate. but the ending!!! wasn't there an electric piano/synth or smth like that coming in playing on all 8ths giving you a perfect opportunity for an ending climax buildup before the last drums? please look at adding this and resubmit and i will check it in the editor.

            snes princess guitars

            some parts rox but i can't follow what's going on most of the jumps are randomobob, will be accepted after revision. because of who submitted the file the notes are in kil-language


            measure 1-6 wat u doin so many missed jumpnotes
            measure 7-18 pretty much all the jumps are wrong Wat The Fack. just put jumps to the snare drum or the strings-melody?
            measure 20 missing snare snare drum and two jumps on the wrong arrows go read the manual or something
            measure 21-28 u copy-pasting ur shit when new cool instruments come in NOT OK. remake. jurs wouldv'e done this better
            measure 28-34 thanks to the advent of computers and the internet i can leave you this message: obv awesome
            measure 34-36 why are the jumps so random you're killing me. if you want lots of jumps just step the guitar+the bass drum
            measure 40-41 just step the melody, put jumps with jacks on 1 arrow to the snare drum omg and also add the bass notes!!!
            measure 42-end is so awesome at parts but the jumps need to be looked at like with the rest of the file, won't keep going with da BrEaKdOWN oF sTEpManiA SiMfilEs
            measure 43 missing vocals


            laveran no shokutaku

            i guess ill just accept this file as it cuz it's so fucking cool
            Last edited by dascookieman; 03-20-2013, 03:52 PM.

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            • Choofers
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              • Dec 2008
              • 6205

              #366
              Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

              Originally posted by Patashu
              I don't have anything to step

              (I think)

              (idk)


              step an atomhead song for me so I don't have to step two of them

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              • stargroup100
                behanjc & me are <3'ers
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                • Jul 2006
                • 2051

                #367
                Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                Originally posted by dascookieman
                pretty cool file but i think too many sounds are represented by different minifreezes, i understand they all have different duration and you can tell the difference when playing, but it's taken to an extreme and i don't really like it.
                aside from the beginning section the minifreezes only really follow one track at any given time

                Originally posted by dascookieman
                measure 25 and don't like the jack
                measure 52 one more minijack (before they start)
                fixed
                Originally posted by dascookieman
                measure 30&32 missing minifreeze but the whole minifreezing of the file should be remade a bit imo
                the layering scheme is consistent. whether or not it should be remade is another matter
                Originally posted by dascookieman
                measure 34-40 it's not easy to follow what the jumps are going to and this part just isn't that much fun to play. i think you should step the rambling vocals, the add the stream on top of that with or without the basskicks it'll be hilarious lol (the stream should be all over and not trills in that case)
                too much work I'm lazy also doing this would completely ruin the really cool buildup that I currently have. at best I'll rework patterns
                Originally posted by dascookieman
                measure 59-68 this part is messy imo. if it's supposed to be all the percussion stepped there are missing notes and probably a few ones that aren't there
                uhhhhh i guess it's messy i dunno i cant remember my layering scheme anymore but i dont think it was focused on percussion. again too lazy
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                • ilikexd
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                  • Apr 2006
                  • 3209

                  #368
                  Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                  Originally posted by dascookieman
                  eos
                  added a few missing notes in the beginning (see screenshots), is this ok? accepted anyhow
                  yea it's fine i didn't hear those

                  also, i realize these should probably be miniholds too (starting at beat 153)

                  if not, it's fine to keep them as is
                  regardless, can you e-mail me or somehow send me your edit? thanks.

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                  • kommisar
                    Dark Chancellor
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                    • Jun 2005
                    • 7328

                    #369
                    Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                    GLoVE asked me to judge a file to help him out

                    Judged in sm5 so i'll be using beat stamps instead of measures

                    Time Out (wc)
                    -right off the bat, percussions are missing within the first few notes.
                    -beat 18 the piano notes are actually 3 note flams
                    -beat 31 you've been following percussions all along so far yet here there's a hole
                    -beat 50 the piano is a 2 note flam
                    -changes between background piano and percussion are too frequent. at times it's really hard to figure out what's being followed and accented
                    -beat 66.5 I can't help but feel this little guitar sequence here could be followed
                    -beat 154 it's a 2 note piano flam instead of 3, and the next 8th note sounds like there's something else going on as well
                    -beat 156 there are more notes than just a 4th
                    -beat 178 this section here feels really empty. it'd work better if more percussion was followed to fill the gaps
                    -beat 181 the lower piano notes are missing
                    -beat 191 piano is flam notes rather than straight 4th, same with beat 201.5, 211, etc. Look over some of the piano notes
                    -beat 226 there are several sections like these throughout the file that feel ignored that could really bring out the transitions. The cymbal crashes are ignored most of the file
                    -beat 327 percussion flam here would give a nice touch.
                    -I'd add holds to the very last hand to go with the guitar's sustained notes

                    The piano accentuations are already great, and the file is super fun. Just needs consistency regarding percussion
                    Last edited by kommisar; 03-20-2013, 03:57 PM.

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                    • dascookieman
                      FFR Player
                      • Jan 2006
                      • 3248

                      #370
                      Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                      Originally posted by stargroup100
                      aside from the beginning section the minifreezes only really follow one track at any given time

                      fixed

                      the layering scheme is consistent. whether or not it should be remade is another matter

                      too much work I'm lazy also doing this would completely ruin the really cool buildup that I currently have. at best I'll rework patterns

                      uhhhhh i guess it's messy i dunno i cant remember my layering scheme anymore but i dont think it was focused on percussion. again too lazy
                      get unlazy im in sm 24/7 because of this pack. you are in no hurry. i won't accept the file without at least a harder difficulty with a remake of the trill-part. it really will be awesome with the vocals+stream. the minifreezes i pointed out that are missing you should at least look at in the editor instead of just telling me it is consistent :P, pretty sure you missed a couple there

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                      • DigitalS3r4ph
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                        • Mar 2007
                        • 984

                        #371
                        Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                        Good god are new age stepfiles crowded with mini-freezes? I think one of the reasons why I quit Stepmania is because files were becoming too technical and less fun.

                        PM me if you find the secret.

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                        • macgravel
                          Resident Poopbutt
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • May 2004
                          • 2405

                          #372
                          Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                          Originally posted by DigitalS3r4ph
                          I think one of the reasons why I quit Stepmania is because files were becoming too technical and less fun.
                          ^^

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                          • Patashu
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                            • Apr 2006
                            • 8609

                            #373
                            Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                            does anyone have a download link for ddream studio? thanks
                            Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker:
                            http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world
                            http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png
                            Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1)
                            http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

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                            • kommisar
                              Dark Chancellor
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                              • Jun 2005
                              • 7328

                              #374
                              Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                              Originally posted by DigitalS3r4ph
                              Good god are new age stepfiles crowded with mini-freezes? I think one of the reasons why I quit Stepmania is because files were becoming too technical and less fun.
                              smg2 in a nutshell

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                              • stargroup100
                                behanjc & me are <3'ers
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                                • Jul 2006
                                • 2051

                                #375
                                Re: ODIPack3 submissions (it's happening!)

                                Originally posted by dascookieman
                                get unlazy im in sm 24/7 because of this pack. you are in no hurry. i won't accept the file without at least a harder difficulty with a remake of the trill-part. it really will be awesome with the vocals+stream. the minifreezes i pointed out that are missing you should at least look at in the editor instead of just telling me it is consistent :P, pretty sure you missed a couple there
                                it's a "no motivation to fix the chart" lazy not a "i dont have time" lazy sooooo i dunno might not get around to it

                                as for the minifreezes I did take a look in the editor (I literally do everything in the editor). the minifreezes only go to yukata's moans and the last two notes or something of minami's line to highlight the panning. I can take out the panning minifreezes but I'm probably keeping the moans
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