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  • robertsona
    missa in h-moll
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Dec 2006
    • 4000

    #136
    Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

    Viva La Vida: Suck/10
    Completely offbeat, wrong notes.

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    • foilman8805
      smoke wheat hail satin
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Sep 2006
      • 5704

      #137
      Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

      First sim. Song is by Bury Your Dead (metal). Seeking constructive criticism.

      http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=28044

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      • Sterlingmagi
        FFR Player
        • Jun 2008
        • 4

        #138
        Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

        I don't know how to get simfiles. i need help

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        • moches
          FFR Player
          • Aug 2005
          • 3996

          #139
          Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

          someone:

          _
          V see sig.

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          • sasukekun997
            FFR Player
            • Jul 2007
            • 101

            #140
            Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

            http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...u=sasukekun997

            Comment and rate... in your spare time
            Last edited by sasukekun997; 06-27-2008, 07:55 PM.
            Originally posted by Beethovens mask
            ...I could jack off and fc this song at the same time
            Originally posted by ninjaKIWI
            Suck Zaghurims penis and oops out comes simfiles
            I love you Cherokee!!

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            • Shadowcliff
              FFR Veteran
              • Jan 2008
              • 695

              #141
              Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

              Moches,

              I tried your simfile. And I have to say; For someone of my skill level, that was a little confusing. I think the steps were extremely difficult, and I couldn't really pass it. I think it was a bit jumpy. Most of my opinion is base on my skill level, which isn't as high as some people.

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              • kommisar[os]
                Banned
                • Apr 2006
                • 4097

                #142
                Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                Originally posted by foilman8805
                First sim. Song is by Bury Your Dead (metal). Seeking constructive criticism.

                http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=28044
                first of all, NEVER EVER PUT A ****ING FOLDER INSIDE ANOTHER ****ING FOLDER. WASTES TIME YOU'RE PULLING A LEGACY JESUS CHRIST


                anyways



                year one : besides the song being horrible and repetitive, you missed alot of things. You missed too many jumps and didn't layer correctly. very inconsistent sorry chum

                2/5



                also someone play my file

                http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=28197

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                • foilman8805
                  smoke wheat hail satin
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Sep 2006
                  • 5704

                  #143
                  Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                  That's some good advice, man. Thanks for your time.

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                  • Darkslave
                    :D
                    • Jan 2008
                    • 140

                    #144
                    Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                    I'm looking for someone to give my newly made simfile a look, and offer some constructive criticism about it, as I'm rather new to stepping, I suppose I chose an impossible song to start out with (a piano version of fots), but my impression is that it's coming along very nice so far!
                    I could of course be wrong, so that's why I need some advice on it.
                    *removed sim for now*
                    Last edited by Darkslave; 07-4-2008, 06:31 AM.

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                    • jimerax
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Nov 2003
                      • 8185

                      #145
                      Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                      >> Villiex

                      Reviews in this thread aren't supposed to be limited to detailed judgement (although they
                      are preferable in most cases).

                      You can demand "constructive" critiques, but can't force someone to do it.
                      Quite simple feedback comments like "good file" "fun" "don't like it" "5/10" are also ok.

                      Considering there are still way more submitters than reviewers in this thread, I would
                      appreciate any feedback comments unless they are obvious flaming or something.

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                      • Villiex
                        FFR Player
                        • Apr 2008
                        • 327

                        #146
                        Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                        Sorry. Removed. Hit a nerve on a bad day, but still no excuse.
                        Originally posted by knuckles2224
                        What's does a mental block look like? Is it a bear?

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                        • keitii
                          FFR Player
                          • Jul 2008
                          • 4

                          #147
                          Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                          clicky!
                          Please download in Stepmania. The video in it is pretty awesome (and the BPM is correct ). Since it's my first one, please critique as harsh as you waaant :{D

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                          • kommisar[os]
                            Banned
                            • Apr 2006
                            • 4097

                            #148
                            Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                            videos are a bad idea

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                            • trumaestro
                              I don't get no respect
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Jun 2006
                              • 1332

                              #149
                              Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread

                              k


                              Statutory Ape (darph fluffy) 0.1/5
                              -Quit out
                              -Please learn how to layer. It was really boring, especially with all those sounds and no steps to them. Maybe choose a better and/or easier song to step so that you can get down the basics of layering before you go for metal.
                              -Bonus 0.1 for not obviously recording.

                              Listen to your Heart (DDR125) 0.5/5
                              (Heavy Chart)
                              -If this is supposed to be for pad, go through the entire simfile and correct patterns like crossovers.
                              -There are sounds on the piano that you missed and even some vocal inconsistencies.
                              -During one of the last left freezes, you step the piano as a jack when it should be a rising pattern because the piano changes pitch, so the steps should do the same.

                              Viva La Vida (darph fluffy) 0/5
                              -Quit out after 2 seconds. Offsync. Learn to use Beat 0 Offset.

                              Heart Attack (RB_IcePh0enix) 0.5/5
                              -Really repetitive. Difficulty is inconsistent, yet fits kind of with the song. Pick a better song next time.
                              -16ths that go on forever aren't fun, neither are the never ending 8ths in between.

                              Year One (foilman8805) 2/5
                              -More freezes in the beginning would probably have been better. Also more arrows during the freezes you did put in.
                              -Inconsistent layering.
                              -Repetitive as ****. Try something easier to step like some techno to get the basics of stepping down before you try metal. Try to get better at song selection, as well. Pick a song that's unique enough throughout and doesn't repeat itself 64 times in a row.
                              -If I could get over the repetitiveness of the file, I'd say it was somewhat fun, though used a lot of generic patterns with odd layering throughout. Also try pitch relevancy.


                              Love Cheat! (moches) 3/5
                              (Heavy Chart) (First reviewed file with a cdtitle, or any kind of graphics, lol)
                              -Short version <3
                              -Stepped it </3
                              -Best file so far, but still meh. Jacks are kind of awkward and stuff.
                              -bg is :ver distraction:


                              My Name is Jonas (sasukekun997) 0/5
                              -Quit out.
                              -Pick a song that actually has stuff to step in it.


                              Perfect Blue (kommisar) Still awesome/5
                              -Probably the only file I'll keep out of all these.
                              -Will probably play this almost everyday, it's just that ****ing awesome.


                              Fury of the Storm Pianer (Darkslave) 0.1/5
                              -oh god
                              -This is just too facepalming to take seriously.
                              -Unreasonable trills are unreasonable
                              -Making every arrow a jump is not called layering.

                              Good Eats Theme Song (keiti) 0/5
                              -wtflol
                              -Recorded crap with mines at wherever you feel like does not a good file make. Try actually stepping the song next time.
                              Last edited by trumaestro; 07-3-2008, 05:04 PM.

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                              • foilman8805
                                smoke wheat hail satin
                                FFR Simfile Author
                                • Sep 2006
                                • 5704

                                #150
                                Re: &quot;Play/Test/Judge my simfile&quot; thread

                                Thanks for going through all of those songs, trumaestro.

                                EDIT: Alright. I hear what you're saying. Once again, thanks for taking the time to review and help me out. The next file will be much better, trust me.
                                Last edited by foilman8805; 07-3-2008, 04:38 PM.

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