Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

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  • OrganisM
    FFR Player
    • Oct 2006
    • 2644
    #16
    Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

    I just wish each time you post a half-hearted mix you don't whine at me and tell me that my opinion isn't valid just because I don't like it.

    I'm not being an ass, but I've got the right to honest criticism.
    .

    Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]:
    "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
    because the venom gets into the blood stream which
    spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
    changing your genetic structure into a bee's.

    Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."

    Originally Posted by     MrRubix[link]:
    "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"

     Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
    "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."

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      • adlp
        FFR Veteran
        • Jul 2006
        • 1757
        #17
        Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

        how come thers no words

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          • Flyleef
            FFR Player
            • May 2007
            • 401
            #18
            Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

            Originally posted by OrganisM
            I just wish each time you post a half-hearted mix you don't whine at me and tell me that my opinion isn't valid just because I don't like it.

            I'm not being an ass, but I've got the right to honest criticism.
            I never did
            No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
            these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
            If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
            My heart, filled with loving radiance
            Is forever thinking of you.

            These words that we play are a pleasant melody
            All I want is to have you by my side,
            so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
            even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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              • Gorlock
                {Underground Concept}
                FFR Music Producer
                • Feb 2005
                • 98
                #19
                Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                the drums fail to impress me. the rhythm is pretty simplistic, but not the groovy kind of simplistic cuz you have busy synths in the background. there should be words or something over the beat to give it a different level of interest. definitely work on it. and work on mastering your drums just in general, they didn't seem to compliment each other. there was no sort of buildup or climax either... which makes the track dull overall.

                good luck in the future.

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                  • OrganisM
                    FFR Player
                    • Oct 2006
                    • 2644
                    #20
                    Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                    Originally posted by Flyleef
                    I never did
                    Originally posted by Flyleef
                    you didnt even listen to the song.. =
                    u cant download/listen to a 3:00 min song in two minutes
                    O rly?

                    I didn't like it so the first thing you do is say that I didn't listen to the song.
                    .

                    Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]:
                    "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
                    because the venom gets into the blood stream which
                    spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
                    changing your genetic structure into a bee's.

                    Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."

                    Originally Posted by                     MrRubix[link]:
                    "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"

                     Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
                    "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."

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                      • Flyleef
                        FFR Player
                        • May 2007
                        • 401
                        #21
                        Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                        Originally posted by OrganisM
                        O rly?

                        I didn't like it so the first thing you do is say that I didn't listen to the song.
                        No. It's because you responded too quickly.
                        No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                        these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                        If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                        My heart, filled with loving radiance
                        Is forever thinking of you.

                        These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                        All I want is to have you by my side,
                        so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                        even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                          • OrganisM
                            FFR Player
                            • Oct 2006
                            • 2644
                            #22
                            Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                            Originally posted by Flyleef
                            No. It's because you responded too quickly.
                            Though if I would've said I liked it, I'm sure you wouldn't have bothered to question it.
                            .

                            Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]:
                            "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
                            because the venom gets into the blood stream which
                            spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
                            changing your genetic structure into a bee's.

                            Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."

                            Originally Posted by                             MrRubix[link]:
                            "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"

                             Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
                            "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."

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                              • Flyleef
                                FFR Player
                                • May 2007
                                • 401
                                #23
                                Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                                Originally posted by OrganisM
                                Though if I would've said I liked it, I'm sure you wouldn't have bothered to question it.
                                I would.
                                No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                                these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                                If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                                My heart, filled with loving radiance
                                Is forever thinking of you.

                                These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                                All I want is to have you by my side,
                                so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                                even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                                  • zajac
                                    aka uAnimals
                                    FFR Music Producer
                                    • Aug 2003
                                    • 4050
                                    #24
                                    Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                                    Alright.

                                    I am no mod.

                                    But I am envoking my seniority card and hereby calling this thread 'Closed'.

                                    Flyleef. You got the feedback you wanted. You thanked the numerous people that participated. Now let this petty argument you're having with Organism stop. And Organism. You drop it too. This is a two-way street.

                                    Thread closed. ...Unofficially...
                                    Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
                                    We Rate You: Cool Motherfucer. 9/10

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                                      • Sir_Thomas
                                        FFR Veteran
                                        • Oct 2005
                                        • 848
                                        #25
                                        Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it

                                        The song was repetitive like said before but thats not why I post.
                                        I posted because someone mentioned the constant overlaying of melodies.

                                        While that can be good to an extent it can be a bad habit. It makes the song seem methodical and less organic. I love it when I hear a song that constantly switches the beat /melody up while keeping its flow and still have it sound good. Example: The Flashbulb (When it comes to the beat...).

                                        If you are going to overlay still avoid repetition unless it feels right.

                                        Example:
                                        Start off with one 5 second loop.
                                        Add on another five second loop on top.
                                        Add on another five second loop on top.
                                        And so on and so forth...

                                        That can be annoying too.

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