Superstar Freetyle

DDRBaller123 · 06-27-2008, 02:48 PM

Listen to my freestyle and tell what yall think before i uot it on my music myspace
http://www.zshare.net/audio/1430938695353c76/

**TheRapingDragon** · 06-27-2008, 02:51 PM

You freestyle so slowly, it sounds like you have a big drawl.

I had to turn it off. I know I'm bias with not liking rap but even then I tend to go into anything trying to be as neutral as possible. I didn't think that was very good, sorry.

Back to Hiromi.

**sleeplessdragn** · 06-27-2008, 07:03 PM

I didn't think it was too bad, but it definitely was not tight enough. Your synthesis needs a bit of practice I think; your mouth can spit fast enough but I feel like the words aren't quite there yet. You're definitely following the beat, albeit a little bit off, but try to enunciate a bit more clearly.

06-27-2008, 02:51 PM	#2
TheRapingDragon A car crash mind Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 36 Posts: 9,788	Re: Superstar Freetyle You freestyle so slowly, it sounds like you have a big drawl. I had to turn it off. I know I'm bias with not liking rap but even then I tend to go into anything trying to be as neutral as possible. I didn't think that was very good, sorry. Back to Hiromi.

06-27-2008, 07:03 PM	#3
sleeplessdragn ~Bang that beat Harder~ Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 2,321	Re: Superstar Freetyle I didn't think it was too bad, but it definitely was not tight enough. Your synthesis needs a bit of practice I think; your mouth can spit fast enough but I feel like the words aren't quite there yet. You're definitely following the beat, albeit a little bit off, but try to enunciate a bit more clearly. __________________

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