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Old 12-31-2019, 03:43 PM   #7
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Default Re: 2019 September/October Set 7

Flight of the Bumble Bee (Psychotik) [5.0/10]
*> Starting sync is correct. Sync adjustment at [00:13.082] is required. Please change BPM from 92.500, to 93.000. Current settings makes the rest of the song outside of the intro, off-sync. These changes will reflect the timestamps of notes for this file.
> No issues found within simfile properties. No issues found within simfile folder contents.
-[0:16.474, 0:17.771] Unsure of exactly why these jumps are here, but patterning works. Creates some real awkward patterning, like the one at 0:21.663. If they’ve got a good reason for existing, then you’re missing one at 0:19.069. Otherwise, can probably do without.
-[0:21.177] Missing 4th jump.
-[0:31.879] I’m all good for omitting 4ths, but now it’s just 8ths and the major 4ths?
-Overall charting structure up until this point is a little wonky. There’s a decent handful of anchors that don’t really play a role in pitch relevance, and don’t follow much of a rhyme or reason to the song progression. Might require some cleaning up.
-[00:26.041 -> 00:31.231] This is pretty good.
-[00:31.879] Missing 4th jump. Again on following similar 4th @ 00:33.177.
-[00:35.447] Missing 4th jump.
-The issue with missing 4th jumps similar to the one at 00:31.879, and at 00:33.177 is pervasive throughout the majority of the file after the transition 30 seconds in.
-[00:36.744] Missing 4th jump (same as the one at 0:35.447, doesn’t seem to be any real reason to drop the jumps here other than favor of transitioning in and out of initial song verse transitions).
-[00:38.041] Missing 4th jump.
-[00:38.366] Repeat missing 4th jump, going to omit these particular ones here on out.
-[00:39.339] Missing 4th jump.
-[00:40.636] ^ same issue.
-[00:42.014] Missing 16th jump.
-[00:52.312] Similar missing 4th jump. Repeat issue for future missing 4ths.
-[01:05.771] Pretty sure the 8th here should be a jump given the structure of the chart, but aite.
-[01:07.069] Definitely some room to improve on the introduction of wubs and dubstep features of the file, like grace notes and burst rolls to accent the harsh wubs.
-[01:08.528 -> 01:08.852] Jumptrill here travels right up to the 4th here.
-[01:09.014 & 01:09.339] Same suggested 8th jumps as the one earlier at 01:05.771.
-[01:09.825 -> 01:10.150] Same Jumptrill situation as the one earlier, but doesn’t match up.
-[01:11.123 -> 01:11.447] Jumptrill. Same as all future similar-sounding spots.
-[01:15:339 -> 01:24.420] This entire section is pretty messy, and doesn’t really follow anything in-place that hasn’t been portionally or marginally already set elsewhere in the file. Needs fixing.

*PERSONAL NOTES*
File attacks a tricky modern take on Flight of the Bumble Bee, but is falling short in more than a few places both consistency-wise, and pattern relevance-wise. Also needs sync fixes (albeit minor), but the first 2 drawbacks will put it under the bar for me unfortunately. Needs a fair amount of work.


This should close out this set, as there are no conditional queues in this set.
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