Rita walked outside and hailed a cab, and got in. She told the man to take her to somewhere nice, and dozed off as the cab got further and further out into nowhere.
Rita awoke with a start to the sound of amen blasts in her ears, making her instantly awake and startled by a massive headache. To her suprise, the cab driver was gone. All that was left was a pool of blood and his underoo's, particularly filthy from his last moments of life. Rita looked to her left to find Mr. Aaron Funk eating the cab driver. He seemed to be talking, but instead of words all that came out were the boom-chops of a heavily distrorted breakbeat. She tried to scream but all that came out were beautiful soundscapes and rainbows shot from her eyes, bringing thousands of children to the scene who all attacked Mr. Funk as Rita flew off on a unicorn from Jursey. Eventually the breakbeats turned into ambient drum programming of Richardo James and he disappeared forever into Cuba.
Rita was now faced with a problem, the unicorn had not eaten any moonbeams in 3 days and was very tired. She started spiraling southward at a startleing rate and he breating became very staggered as her stance on the unicorn slipped and she fell into a massive pit.
In this pit Rita found two things. A mirror, and the lion Bobby West. How will she ever make it out alive?!?!!
How about everything after 8.5 gets deleted and the topic locked? It was brilliant at first, but... well, the story just sucks now.
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Originally posted by Squeek
My mind says "GOGOGOG" and my hands go "wut no scru u ***"
I'm concerned about the quality of the story. mead's story wasn't spectacular, but it was very acceptable as it was. Now, it has just gone to ****.
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Originally posted by Squeek
My mind says "GOGOGOG" and my hands go "wut no scru u ***"
Well, I guess I could claim it's officially over after mead's chapter as he said it was, and just ingnore you guys. But that would be the easy thing to do.
I don't really care.
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Originally posted by Squeek
My mind says "GOGOGOG" and my hands go "wut no scru u ***"
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