[4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

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  • Kalre
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2016
    • 178

    #16
    Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

    Please someone with cold blood, review my file, need to get those stepmania learningzz goinggg
    I think Japanese should be taught because if animes have taught me anything it is that Japanese is superior. *strokes neckbeard and contemplates next cheeto*

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    • Shadow_God_10
      Somewhere, but not here
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Mar 2006
      • 2226

      #17
      Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

      Originally posted by Kalre
      Please someone with cold blood, review my file, need to get those stepmania learningzz goinggg
      Do you want a playtest review or technical review? I can do both

      Originally posted by Svaz
      more like Shad-hoe God am I right haha
      Originally posted by mellon_collie
      TIL women have breasts because of horniness
      Originally posted by bugkid666
      sunfan I fucked up
      Originally posted by MixMasterLar
      Xel claiming that I am incapable of making mistakes and using that logic to paint me as scum does things to my body that I thought only Lewdy's stash could do

      Originally posted by Funnygurl555
      your hentai collection is commendable. i am both in awe and afraid of you
      Originally posted by DaBackpack
      might quit having sex every day and focus more on shooting myself in the testicles with an elephant gun

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      • Kalre
        FFR Player
        • Jun 2016
        • 178

        #18
        Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

        w/e is fine as long as is the fixed one hehe
        I think Japanese should be taught because if animes have taught me anything it is that Japanese is superior. *strokes neckbeard and contemplates next cheeto*

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        • XelNya
          [Kaho]
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Sep 2012
          • 3369

          #19
          Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

          Originally posted by Kalre
          Please someone with cold blood, review my file, need to get those stepmania learningzz goinggg
          The 16th minijacks in the beginning don't work

          5.725 parts like this don't work here just make the jumps have a hold (just one) to them

          32nds @ 9.613 don't exist

          your hand usage is inconsistent and your patterning / layering scheme is rather atrocious and while the PR's not perfect it's at least in the right direction, tho does need some touch ups

          14.947 these 24th should be scaling up then down, not just down

          you're trying too hard to get everything in here and it ends up being an over minijacked mess, your're layering jumps in way too much in jack filled patterns.

          85.169 this part is cool and all, and if you were following the drums in specific I could give it major props, but since you're not, the notes between the hands should be scaling with the guitar pitch, at least that's what the surrounding sections lead me to think.

          95.169 (Starting from the quarter here) could be: 1 3 4 1 2 4 1 3 4 1 4 2 1 3 4 1 2 or so for PR purposes

          102.280 - WAI U SKIP MORE GRINDZ FREN there be some sick riff shit going here, oughta chart that over some drummer guy who likes to just bang shit

          There should be a 16th @109.280 and the 24ths after the 8th on 109.169 need to be deleted, think out loud: ba da da duh, duh with a pause.

          135.169 you could spice it up here with say changing it to [24] 1 4 2 3 2 4 1 3 2 4 3 [124] not a change that NEEDS to be done, but it can be fun to get a little nuts with the patterning instead of just bland rolls for drum fills, and since it's not super fast you have the liberty of being able to do so. Or you could use a spin pattern, though one doesn't pop into my head atm.

          This was a quickie, and I could go more in depth but to summarize: your layering makes sections too dense, and the file doesn't allow fun patterns to breathe, and is more focused on getting everything. I'd restructure parts based on what's most prominent, like if a guitar is doing some sick soloing riffs, there's not really a need to layer in drum snares sort of thing.
          Last edited by XelNya; 05-27-2017, 03:59 PM.

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          • Shadow_God_10
            Somewhere, but not here
            FFR Simfile Author
            • Mar 2006
            • 2226

            #20
            Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

            Dammit Xel you beat me to it. I'll review the pack as a whole sometime and post it here

            EDIT: Has anyone noticed the first and last songs in the pack are by James May LOL
            Last edited by Shadow_God_10; 05-27-2017, 06:17 PM.

            Originally posted by Svaz
            more like Shad-hoe God am I right haha
            Originally posted by mellon_collie
            TIL women have breasts because of horniness
            Originally posted by bugkid666
            sunfan I fucked up
            Originally posted by MixMasterLar
            Xel claiming that I am incapable of making mistakes and using that logic to paint me as scum does things to my body that I thought only Lewdy's stash could do

            Originally posted by Funnygurl555
            your hentai collection is commendable. i am both in awe and afraid of you
            Originally posted by DaBackpack
            might quit having sex every day and focus more on shooting myself in the testicles with an elephant gun

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            • XelNya
              [Kaho]
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Sep 2012
              • 3369

              #21
              Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

              Originally posted by Shadow_God_10
              Dammit Xel you beat me to it. I'll review the pack as a whole sometime and post it here

              EDIT: Has anyone noticed the first and last songs in the pack are by James May LOL
              Do it anyways because you'll prob focus on stuff I didn't or go more in depth

              I'm not exactly the best either.

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              • Shadow_God_10
                Somewhere, but not here
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Mar 2006
                • 2226

                #22
                Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                Originally posted by XelNya
                Do it anyways because you'll prob focus on stuff I didn't or go more in depth

                I'm not exactly the best either.
                It takes practice and trial and error to notice the small things I point out. You'll get there

                Originally posted by Svaz
                more like Shad-hoe God am I right haha
                Originally posted by mellon_collie
                TIL women have breasts because of horniness
                Originally posted by bugkid666
                sunfan I fucked up
                Originally posted by MixMasterLar
                Xel claiming that I am incapable of making mistakes and using that logic to paint me as scum does things to my body that I thought only Lewdy's stash could do

                Originally posted by Funnygurl555
                your hentai collection is commendable. i am both in awe and afraid of you
                Originally posted by DaBackpack
                might quit having sex every day and focus more on shooting myself in the testicles with an elephant gun

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                • sunn0glasses
                  FFR Player
                  • Mar 2016
                  • 209

                  #23
                  Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                  IT'S FIRST GRADE SPONGEBOB






































                  IT'S FIRST GRADE SPONGEBOB

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                  • James May
                    FFR Player
                    • Oct 2012
                    • 3817

                    #24
                    Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                    I have no regrets accepting Wumbology. I love you Xel
                    bananas


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                    • sakura080789
                      Rapture Universe
                      • Feb 2007
                      • 1751

                      #25
                      Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                      Pack is lit boys

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                      • James May
                        FFR Player
                        • Oct 2012
                        • 3817

                        #26
                        Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                        Originally posted by sakura080789
                        Pack is lit boys
                        Oh hey, I remember playing some of your old files o:
                        bananas


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                        • XelNya
                          [Kaho]
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Sep 2012
                          • 3369

                          #27
                          Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                          Originally posted by James May
                          I have no regrets accepting Wumbology. I love you Xel
                          There's gonna be more when I can be assed to sync more

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                          • sunn0glasses
                            FFR Player
                            • Mar 2016
                            • 209

                            #28
                            Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                            i am absolutely down for more spongecore in future stepmanias

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                            • Arntonach
                              Owlbears Rock!
                              • Mar 2012
                              • 2494

                              #29
                              Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                              Pack's good. My favs are Broadcast and Sushi Party. :P
                              pack of hard stuffs

                              pack of my stuffs

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                              • XelNya
                                [Kaho]
                                FFR Simfile Author
                                • Sep 2012
                                • 3369

                                #30
                                Re: [4Key] Project 0 Minipack - A Stepmania Mini-Project (IT'S OUT BOYO!)

                                Originally posted by Arntonach
                                Pack's good. My favs are Broadcast


                                which difficulty

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