Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

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  • lofty rhino
    D7 Elite Keymasher
    • Dec 2014
    • 705

    #61
    Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

    @choof you need to let me know if you have intentions of finishing the collab file. If not, I'm going to have to chart the rest.
    Last edited by lofty rhino; 11-13-2016, 08:39 AM.

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    • choof
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      FFR Simfile Author
      • Nov 2013
      • 8563

      #62
      Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

      I'll work on it this week

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      • MinaciousGrace
        FFR Player
        • Dec 2007
        • 4278

        #63
        Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

        Addiction 451 (broomtheatre) - That intro oh my god dme flashbacks. I have no idea what's going on with the file or song but I'm fairly certain I found it fun.
        accepted by decree of lord loftysaurus due to my confused ambivalence

        Do You Freeze it? (hamsterdam) - Freezestream:


        From what I understand lofty is working with you on revising this and it's accepted pending said revisions. I mostly don't mind the file as-is personally however I really think you failed to capture the vocal intensity and pitch dynamic at 104.1s, other than that there's some rough stuff but nothing else that I strongly feel needs to be addressed.
        chill leisure dump for the less skilled

        Old Yeller (laffytaffy) - I'm not a huge fan of how abruptly the intro 32nds fall away into 16ths. I understand why you did it but I'd prefer to see 32nds interspersed throughout the intro. Once again great non-conventional pattern use rooted in strong technical fundamentals. Good job.
        lofty thinks the song is meh but hes dumb

        Pun-ishment (quim) - Wow you took this song in a completely different direction than I would have. There are some super nitpicky details that I want to fix (like an 8th anchor starting a note late halfway through the file). I also find myself wondering why you chose not to place a jumptrill starting at 93.2s when you had done so to the same sound everywhere else. There are some really cool things going on in the instrumentals that I think you captured well, however I also think the file would be greatly served by using 16th minitrill patterns in the section rather than minirolls.
        vocals in the song are kinda meh imo i could be dum tho

        purediarrhea (deluge) - Some of the patterning in this is excellent, but unfortunately this suffers from the same systemic issue shared by most of the other rejected files. About half the file is 5 nps and the other half is 30; the ending spikes to over 40 with mash inducing patterns reminiscent of spica. The result is an uneven play experience that almost inevitably results in frustration and a lack of satisfaction. Not what the pack is looking for.
        file isn't that bad tbh but i couldn't pass up the wordplay
        Last edited by MinaciousGrace; 11-13-2016, 01:34 PM.

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        • choof
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          FFR Simfile Author
          • Nov 2013
          • 8563

          #64
          Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

          so should I tone down the ending or make the beginning harder lol
          probably tone down the ending

          edit: lol "deluge"
          Last edited by choof; 11-13-2016, 02:31 PM.

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          • lofty rhino
            D7 Elite Keymasher
            • Dec 2014
            • 705

            #65
            Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

            The whole file would need a structural reworking given that the "song" was no longer the "song" you chose.

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            • choof
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              • Nov 2013
              • 8563

              #66
              Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

              i have no idea what that means

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              • lofty rhino
                D7 Elite Keymasher
                • Dec 2014
                • 705

                #67
                Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                It means: try again.

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                • choof
                  Banned
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Nov 2013
                  • 8563

                  #68
                  Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                  okay i tone down ending and resend 2 u

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                  • lofty rhino
                    D7 Elite Keymasher
                    • Dec 2014
                    • 705

                    #69
                    Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                    Don't do it.

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                    • Buta-san
                      FFR Player
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Jul 2013
                      • 492

                      #70
                      Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                      k buffed up the entire intro
                      le stepman blog

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                      • lofty rhino
                        D7 Elite Keymasher
                        • Dec 2014
                        • 705

                        #71
                        Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                        Got it.
                        Thanks, Porky!

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                        • choof
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                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Nov 2013
                          • 8563

                          #72
                          Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                          sent cbr's op

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                          • lofty rhino
                            D7 Elite Keymasher
                            • Dec 2014
                            • 705

                            #73
                            Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                            Yah I sent it to Mina as soon as a I received it.
                            Should have some reviews soonish

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                            • MinaciousGrace
                              FFR Player
                              • Dec 2007
                              • 4278

                              #74
                              Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                              Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation Certified Operator [CPR Op] (loafers) - Solid file. If the ending weren't so hard I'd like to see the slow section more fleshed out, but it's fine. The last few measures of the 32nds are super right hand triplet biased so if you want to fluff out the hand balance a bit that's up to you.
                              wayner

                              Stop n gimmie a lifty (squintaclemonster) - Amusing song/chart. Fun to play. There are some nitpicky as fuck things like the super close mines at 105 but I'll change them.
                              tickle dat cat

                              Hold the Line (wafles)
                              k

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                              • lofty rhino
                                D7 Elite Keymasher
                                • Dec 2014
                                • 705

                                #75
                                Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

                                Originally posted by MinaciousGrace
                                wayner
                                **DING* *DING* *DING**

                                CONGRATULATIONS CHOOBERS


                                Give me my fucking collab, bitch.
                                Last edited by lofty rhino; 11-23-2016, 03:00 PM.

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