Eight Minutes (A short story)

[alainbryden]

Mal, all technicalities aside I just enjoyed it and thought it was a great idea very profesionally undertaken. Well done.

[esupin]

You know, you could probably submit these types of things to your school (or even some small publication) somehow. My school has an annual literary magazine...
Congrats on the story. It takes much more skill to craft a story than it is to write an essay.

[Fatal_Flame]

i read this story a week before spring break on the same thread... you guys are just now reading it and posting?... well, whatever, it's a cool story, kudos to Mal...

[tcpb513]

we havent even had spring break yet lol
anyways nice work

[NightSonnett]

Honestly, I've read other things by you that have been better. It's a really good idea, though. I enjoyed it. Maybe i would have enjoyed it more if i wouldn't have guessed the ending/direction of the story from the title...