Don't anybody tell me "hindsight is 20/20" on this one.
I knew Chardish was on the wolf team from his first post.
Originally posted by Chardish
It seems kind of weird that Kilga would be so impasse to Kefit's death; almost as if he expected it. Last game he made a big angry deal when Kefit died, this time he just posted his "funeral for a friend" image and didn't even comment on it.
I love your reasoning. Because he didn't explain an image? Nice work. That brought about my suspiciousness right from the start. Too bad I wasn't in the game to call you on it. And I figured since Tass didn't say anything about it that he was on the same side as you.
Don't anybody tell me "hindsight is 20/20" on this one.
I knew Chardish was on the wolf team from his first post.
Originally posted by Chardish
It seems kind of weird that Kilga would be so impasse to Kefit's death; almost as if he expected it. Last game he made a big angry deal when Kefit died, this time he just posted his "funeral for a friend" image and didn't even comment on it.
I love your reasoning. Because he didn't explain an image? Nice work. That brought about my suspiciousness right from the start. Too bad I wasn't in the game to call you on it.
~Squeek
I thought it was legitimate, then again, I knew all along.
He was saying he reacted differently from last game, thats all.
I know, but for a smart guy like him to base an opinion off something as trivial as that is really a signal.
And I apologize again for not being able to proofread any of your other stories. I had company here from Monday night to Saturday afternoon. I really wanted to, though.
I know, but for a smart guy like him to base an opinion off something as trivial as that is really a signal.
And I apologize again for not being able to proofread any of your other stories. I had company here from Monday night to Saturday afternoon. I really wanted to, though.
~Squeek
It's fine. If I ever host again, i'm gonna try using one of these things called a Spell Checker. Ever heard of it?
Spell checkers won't find sentence structure errors. Such as typing in the PAST TENSE when the ENTIRE STORY IS PRESENT DAY.
I even told you that the very first time. Sheesh. No "was, were, -ed" etc. All "-ing", ok? Read Chardish / Kilga's stories. Those are near flawless (Kilga, General only has 2 "e"s in it...).
Spell checkers also don't fix the fact that sentences are supposed to end with periods. They assume you've got at least enough English proficiency to realize that.
And I think I told you about 4 times that quotes always end with punctuation. Example:
RIGHT:
"I think we've been captured," said Kilga.
"Have we been captured?" asked Kilga.
"We've been captured!" proclaimed Kilga.
WRONG:
"I think we've been captured" said Kilga
"I think we've been captured." said Kilga
I spelled it right the first time. That one was just a typo. <_<
I watched clouds awobbly from the floor o' that kayak. Souls cross ages like clouds cross skies, an' tho' a cloud's shape nor hue nor size don't stay the same, it's still a cloud an' so is a soul. Who can say where the cloud's blowed from or who the soul'll be 'morrow? Only Sonmi the east an' the west an' the compass an' the atlas, yay, only the atlas o' clouds.
Tass, you know they're changing the SAT. Everybody, starting with the class of 2006, has to write essays now. Thank God I'm in CO '05 and don't have to take the new version.
And yeah, let's get TWG5 rollin'!
So I've gone completely slack-ass and haven't done any work on creating games. =(
In less-depressing news, I got a job for an online business (which sells non-electronic games, of all things!) which has taught me a lot about marketing online and all that jazz.
Boulder? What!? I live in NC and go to Middle Creek, if that's what you're asking. I don't know what Boulder is XD
So I've gone completely slack-ass and haven't done any work on creating games. =(
In less-depressing news, I got a job for an online business (which sells non-electronic games, of all things!) which has taught me a lot about marketing online and all that jazz.
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