im your puppet no longer

[-paexaea-]

Re: im your puppet no longer

She must be a William Shatner impersonator.

[imajrockette]

Re: im your puppet no longer

what? and plus wth is your problem though.jeez.im only 14 i hope your not expecting me to be some fuxkin poetry genius or something.

while your complaing let me see you do bettter and then you can talk all the shxt you want but until then try to back up your arguements more better.

actuality it is a poem...i cant please everyone and i will always have critcs at that so i really could care less what you think about my poetry.if you dont like it then dont complain and go read something else.

also verruckter i really appreciate your help with the critics to.my poetry will never be perfect for others but i have quite a few that actually liked it to some extent so w/e

[Tokzic]

Re: im your puppet no longer

what? and plus wth is your problem though.jeez.im only 14 i hope your not expecting me to be some fuxkin poetry genius or something.

Saying "I'm only fourteen" as an excuse for mistakes which you have been given advice on already doesn't work, sorry.

also verruckter i really appreciate your help with the critics to.my poetry will never be perfect for others but i have quite a few that actually liked it to some extent so w/e

lmfao you're oblivious

[arsonistsgetallthegirls]

Re: im your puppet no longer

One night in mid October,
I was tired of being sober,
I poured up a glass and got drunk off my ass as I imagined death of my wife.

As she sat in my room on my phone,
She realized she wasn't alone.
A short Irish man who wasn't too tan pulled a gun and threatened her life.

He asked for her goods,
My wife understood,
Yet her blood mixed with sand on the carpet.

True poetry.

[iPatcH]

Re: im your puppet no longer

uh.