Re: Loss and Gain, a short story
I too read the whole thing.
What the hell?
I too read the whole thing.
What the hell?
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Re: Loss and Gain, a short story
Makes you want to kill yourself, doesn't it?Comment
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Re: Loss and Gain, a short story
yes
in the worst way possible.Comment
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Re: Loss and Gain, a short story
Ummm... Okay... Completely unrealistic change in the character. Being Christian doesn't make you happy automatically and reading the Bible during the week doesn't, either. I go to Bible studies every week and it doesn't make me a happier person. Do your research, ask kids that have lost both of their parents what it's like, and all that jazz. I just read it because I have time on my hands... Yeah. I found it very rough and unpolished. It needs work and avoid cliches! They are bad for you!sigpic
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Re: Loss and Gain, a short story
mmk so i read it
and i want to commit suicideLast edited by .dot; 01-27-2008, 01:48 PM.
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Re: Loss and Gain, a short story
I wish I was here to insult the OP when he was still monitoring this topicHe who angers you conquers you. ~Elizabeth KennyComment
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