Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

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  • Akarin
    FFR Player
    • Nov 2011
    • 9

    #1

    Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

    It's this fake guitar-ish song I worked on about a year ago. Never really did much with it.

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  • who_cares973
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2006
    • 15407

    #2
    Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

    wow that was great

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    • tofurox
      Them arrows.
      • May 2006
      • 2263

      #3
      Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

      SICK DUDE! I like it.

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      • Coolboyrulez0
        VICES
        FFR Simfile Author
        FFR Music Producer
        • Aug 2006
        • 10042

        #4
        Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

        Sounds like virt meets SSH

        sexy song

        Only suggestion maybe make the drums sound a little less muddy and more crisp? Not a biggie though.
        They seem to be somewhat burried under the mix, with an exception to the tomtom (I believe thats what they are) solos.
        Last edited by Coolboyrulez0; 12-13-2011, 08:22 PM.
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        • cornmaker
          FFR Player
          • Dec 2011
          • 25

          #5
          Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

          WOW! good job! i love the bass line! it somehow reminds me of a game

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          • Cavernio
            sunshine and rainbows
            • Feb 2006
            • 1987

            #6
            Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

            Yeppers, very cool! I really like it, love that jazzy, rockish, video-game vibe. Love the melody and the chords.

            I agree thought that something about the drums is...off. I think maybe they just need to be louder, because I think I really like their timbre. They definitely should be more poignant during their 'solos' near the end. Perhaps the slightest tempo slow-down would do the trick.

            Maybe it's just the metal guitar that sounds like it was taken from Doom that I don't like though, because I know if I were making this song, I wouldn't be happy with that instrument sounding like it does in there. Maybe the drums are acting like a bridge or something between that metal feel and the super-synth melody instruments, and so it ends up being them that sound 'off'.

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            • MarioNintendo
              Expect delays.
              FFR Simfile Author
              FFR Music Producer
              • Mar 2008
              • 4177

              #7
              Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

              The synths are so cool. Maybe you cool experiment with the riffs and drums and bass to balance their sounds, but you just achieved musical perfection with those synths. :')

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