Hello everyone!
A few months ago I had to write a creative story incorporating a skill of some sort in to a story. Well, the skill I chose was doing laundry (because I was an a lazy bastard why didn't spend time learning a skill I did not know). Anyway, as I got further into the story I started realizing that I really liked what I was writing. Eventually I got it done and got a good grade.
Well, I was thinking about my story for a while and thought, "Hey this story isn't perfect and I want to fix it up to possible send it in to somewhere that displays short stories.
So FFR please take a look and provide criticism. A warning though, it is a bit of a read so please bear through it and give your opinion after finishing it.
Thank you
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Here is the story http://pastebin.com/nppBDzNQ
A few months ago I had to write a creative story incorporating a skill of some sort in to a story. Well, the skill I chose was doing laundry (because I was an a lazy bastard why didn't spend time learning a skill I did not know). Anyway, as I got further into the story I started realizing that I really liked what I was writing. Eventually I got it done and got a good grade.
Well, I was thinking about my story for a while and thought, "Hey this story isn't perfect and I want to fix it up to possible send it in to somewhere that displays short stories.
So FFR please take a look and provide criticism. A warning though, it is a bit of a read so please bear through it and give your opinion after finishing it.
Thank you
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Here is the story http://pastebin.com/nppBDzNQ
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