Short N Sweet [Demo (Feedback Appreciated)]

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  • flashpantss
    Party Hard
    • Aug 2006
    • 1310
    #1

    Short N Sweet [Demo (Feedback Appreciated)]

    Well, This is a new DnB/Breakbeat song I'm working on. Feedback would be appreciated so I can go in the right direction. Tell me what you think please.

    http://soundcloud.com/flashpantss/epic-dnb


    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/427633
    Last edited by flashpantss; 06-16-2011, 03:21 AM.
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    • midnghtraver
      Icarus Moth
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jan 2006
      • 2064
      #2
      Re: Short N Sweet [Demo (Feedback Appreciated)]

      That transition around 0:33

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        • Nullifidian
          ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Sep 2007
          • 1837
          #3
          Re: Short N Sweet [Demo (Feedback Appreciated)]

          offsync melody, weird transition, awkward use of breaks and quite annoying instruments as well. Hardly any structure of dnb found in this, and for breakbeat this is very randomly structured as well.
          It's one big incoherent annoying mashup of breaks and synths, sorry.

          Try comparing your song to some of your favorite dnb and breakbeat songs and hear what's different between them.

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            • ScylaX
              urararararararara
              FFR Music Producer
              • Dec 2007
              • 1044
              #4
              Re: Short N Sweet [Demo (Feedback Appreciated)]

              This sounds too chaotic to be enjoyable. Is it made on purpose ? The samples used are okay though, but first think about putting your ideas out of your head instead of dealing with what you tried to do.
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                • kommisar
                  Dark Chancellor
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Jun 2005
                  • 7328
                  #5
                  Re: Short N Sweet [Demo (Feedback Appreciated)]

                  sounds like me when i was 14


                  sorry buddy. needs a lot of work.

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