Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

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  • Mans0n
    Sun and Stars
    FFR Music Producer
    • Sep 2006
    • 2907

    #1

    Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/420015

    My first actual DnB track! so please comments, advice, criticism please! I would like to improve it some if i can.

    Made with FL 8 XXL just in case.

    Thanks FFR.

    UPDATED! clear cache and delete cookies to listen to changes made.
    Last edited by Mans0n; 05-13-2011, 01:31 AM.
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  • ScylaX
    urararararararara
    FFR Music Producer
    • Dec 2007
    • 1044

    #2
    Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

    Hey that's pretty original for a first try. The snare is too dry at some moments though and it tends to get too much repetitive after the half of the song.
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    • SpookG
      (For Great Justice!)
      FFR Music Producer
      • Dec 2002
      • 829

      #3
      Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

      Snare is great, love the sound of the kit. It's got drums, but it's missing bass, if you get what I mean.

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      • Mans0n
        Sun and Stars
        FFR Music Producer
        • Sep 2006
        • 2907

        #4
        Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

        Definitely know what you mean Spook, And am still adding stuff to improve the quality.
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        • SKG_Scintill
          Spun a twirly fruitcake,
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Feb 2009
          • 3876

          #5
          Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

          This isn't a jive!





          Originally posted by bluguerilla
          So Sexy Robotnik (SKG_Scintill) {.0001/10} [--]
          ___
          . RHYTHMS PR LAYERING
          . ZOMG I HAD TO QUIT OUT TERRIBLE
          .

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          • jakeyjake7
            FFR Player
            • Jul 2006
            • 343

            #6
            Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

            Drums need some EQ work. The super-upper highs are REALLY piercing, and the mids seem a bit muffled. Sounds almost as if there's a band reject filter on the drums. This is really, really good for a first try though. Keep at it.
            Originally posted by tuv
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            • Mans0n
              Sun and Stars
              FFR Music Producer
              • Sep 2006
              • 2907

              #7
              Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

              thanks, definitely will do!
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              • behanjc
                stargroup & me are <3'ers
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Jun 2006
                • 1546

                #8
                Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

                I like the atmosphere a lot overall. Don't really know much about producing dnb, but I like what comes in at 1:01. The bass kinda hurts my ears at the very beginning, and when the higher frequencies cut off, but that's probably just my headphone setup :P I do like how the bass stays while the other instruments cutoff/soften though. It's cool overall, a lot better than my first dnb track would probably be.

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                • customstuff
                  ♥C.S. + A.M.♥
                  • Nov 2006
                  • 4892

                  #9
                  Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)

                  That was pretty good... did you fruity slice loops? (random question)

                  The highs are just a littttle much, and I agree that the mids are muffled. It gets somewhat disorganized but that could clear up when the EQ changes the sound a bit.

                  Pretty decent for a first try.

                  Originally posted by MrMagic5239
                  Placements are final, custom will not be moved to D6, just because he is good at jacks, and mediocre at just about every other FMO in the game.
                  Originally posted by customstuff
                  Originally posted by MrMagic5239
                  welcome to D6

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