someone step my (trance) song please

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  • itachi147
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2007
    • 8
    #1

    someone step my (trance) song please

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/408320

    It has fair reviews and a 4.43/5 score, could someone please step it for me?
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    • AsphyxZero
      Banned
      • Oct 2010
      • 1823
      #2
      Re: someone step my (trance) song please

      jesus ****ing christ what the hell is that eq

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        • SocoNhydro420
          FFR Veteran
          • Oct 2008
          • 915
          #3
          Re: someone step my (trance) song please

          by the way, i LOVE your avatar

          ill consider stepping it for you, the song sounds great! well done

          MUST... AAA...

          FMO AAAs (27): Epidermis, Exciting Hyper Highspeed Star, Rottel-da-station, Disconnected Hardkore, Melonmans OP, Battle Theme #37, Fast Asleep, Gacha Gacha Hertz Figu atto Radio, Puzzle, Midnight Dragon, Distorted God, Variations 2, Strangeprogram, Arrogant Cobbler, Kanon Medly ~Metal Wings~, Dance and Zeal, Heavenly Spores, Document 13b, The Divine Suicide of K, Yorukumoryuu Yamikaze, Summer Time Perfume, Chaosmaid, Colorful Course, O (piano version), Ambient Angels, Defection, Jeanie and Caroline

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            • 00Razor00
              FFR Player
              • Jul 2006
              • 3530
              #4
              Re: someone step my (trance) song please

              Originally posted by itachi147
              It has fair reviews and a 4.43/5 score, could someone please step it for me?
              Current Score
              4.32 / 5.00 (- 0.11)


              Originally posted by t-rogdor
              hey buddy are you looking for a good song to step because if so i really recommend you step In Front Of A Bus

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                • Plan_Bsk81127
                  snooches
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Aug 2007
                  • 6420
                  #5
                  Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                  Originally posted by 00Razor00
                  Current Score
                  4.32 / 5.00 (- 0.11)
                  Current Score
                  4.29 / 5.00 (- 0.025)

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                    • AsphyxZero
                      Banned
                      • Oct 2010
                      • 1823
                      #6
                      Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                      4.25 / 5.00 (- 0.048)

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                        • Shikari
                          FFR Player
                          • Oct 2010
                          • 2055
                          #7
                          Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                          Current Score
                          4.22 / 5.00 (- 0.024)

                          Originally posted by gold stinger
                          Shikari for resident profile artist

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                            • who_cares973
                              FFR Player
                              • Aug 2006
                              • 15407
                              #8
                              Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                              lets all jump on the dick in ass bandwagon yeah

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                                • AsphyxZero
                                  Banned
                                  • Oct 2010
                                  • 1823
                                  #9
                                  Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                  Originally posted by who_cares973
                                  dick in trance
                                  oic

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                                    • Shikari
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Oct 2010
                                      • 2055
                                      #10
                                      Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                      To be quite honest, I wasn't bandwagoning. EQ, as mentioned before, was quite bad, synth usage was too generic and I wouldn't play it if it was on FFR, but that's just me

                                      Originally posted by gold stinger
                                      Shikari for resident profile artist

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                                        • 00Razor00
                                          FFR Player
                                          • Jul 2006
                                          • 3530
                                          #11
                                          Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                          Originally posted by who_cares973
                                          lets all jump on the dick in ass bandwagon yeah
                                          Uh, I zero bombed it to begin with because, in my opinion, it wasn't all that great. As others mentioned previously, bad EQ, it clips, generic synths/beat, etc.


                                          Originally posted by t-rogdor
                                          hey buddy are you looking for a good song to step because if so i really recommend you step In Front Of A Bus

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                                            • justin_ator
                                              🥓<strong><span style="col
                                              • Mar 2007
                                              • 7648
                                              #12
                                              Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                              Not too bad. I dunno how exactly it would be as a simfile, but it's nice to listen to. And lawl EQ, work on that a little.

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                                                • TC_Halogen
                                                  Rhythm game specialist.
                                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                                  FFR Music Producer
                                                  • Feb 2008
                                                  • 19376
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                                  Go back and try to fix some of the equalizing in the song. The structure of the song doesn't seem bad, but the synth is way too strong, which is giving the song a muddy sound. It's a shame because the melody sounds pretty nice.

                                                  Try adding some compression to your synth -- the abrasive sound of the synth itself is a problem, but putting it at full volume makes it even more of a problem.

                                                  Everyone has to start somewhere -- don't let people get to you.

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                                                    • SocoNhydro420
                                                      FFR Veteran
                                                      • Oct 2008
                                                      • 915
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                                      I agree with TC about the critisism. FFR isnt the best place for public constructive critisism, just public critisism thats borderline trolling haha. Dont be discouraged. Keep at it!

                                                      MUST... AAA...

                                                      FMO AAAs (27): Epidermis, Exciting Hyper Highspeed Star, Rottel-da-station, Disconnected Hardkore, Melonmans OP, Battle Theme #37, Fast Asleep, Gacha Gacha Hertz Figu atto Radio, Puzzle, Midnight Dragon, Distorted God, Variations 2, Strangeprogram, Arrogant Cobbler, Kanon Medly ~Metal Wings~, Dance and Zeal, Heavenly Spores, Document 13b, The Divine Suicide of K, Yorukumoryuu Yamikaze, Summer Time Perfume, Chaosmaid, Colorful Course, O (piano version), Ambient Angels, Defection, Jeanie and Caroline

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                                                        • itachi147
                                                          FFR Player
                                                          • Feb 2007
                                                          • 8
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: someone step my (trance) song please

                                                          thanks guys, i actually noticed the EQ problem before anyone responded and i fixed it for the most part on my computer, i haven't updated it yet though and yeah the trolling here is nothing compared to on that site. to be honest i wasn't expecting many responses to begin with.

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