3rd tune of my album

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  • MBurns
    FFR Player
    FFR Music Producer
    • Mar 2007
    • 194
    #1

    3rd tune of my album

    Which also happens to be my first classic jazz.

    Quite proud of this one. I have a MUCH easier time composing jazz and I feel I did a good job. Hopefully you enjoy it.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_lP_-RRQSg
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    • who_cares973
      FFR Player
      • Aug 2006
      • 15407
      #2
      Re: 3rd tune of my album

      why is your music so good

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        • MBurns
          FFR Player
          FFR Music Producer
          • Mar 2007
          • 194
          #3
          Re: 3rd tune of my album

          It must have something to do with my testosterone level :P

          lol Thanks

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            • SpookG
              (For Great Justice!)
              FFR Music Producer
              • Dec 2002
              • 829
              #4
              Re: 3rd tune of my album

              That was fantastic. I'd love to play bass with you.

              Royal For Great Justice! Electronic Music est. 1999
              .
              kerBLAM



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                • MBurns
                  FFR Player
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Mar 2007
                  • 194
                  #5
                  Re: 3rd tune of my album

                  Originally posted by KgZ
                  Quite refreshing to hear jazz music in the forum, especially a complex piano solo transcription.

                  The A section was very nice, but seemed a bit too repetitive as it progressed. You should add some luscious harmonics using a wide range of tensions or scales that stay away from the diatonic feeling.

                  The B section was much much more enjoyable- a lot more progressive, and melodic. The classical vibe created a nice contrast to the original theme.

                  You have some really interesting ideas in your piece. Try making it a bit less linear and more dynamic and I think you have a real winner. I've listened to a couple of your songs and they're really well done. Good job sir.
                  Thanks alot! I wanted a classic/jazz fusion that was dark-ish lounge, hence some repetition. More ambient so to speak.

                  I usually try not to repeat anything, tho it gets difficult to break 2:30 of music time without any repetition. I'm no Chopin yet lol

                  Maybe one day I can compose my own scherzo!

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