So Peaceful (Guitar)

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  • flashpantss
    Party Hard
    • Aug 2006
    • 1310

    #1

    So Peaceful (Guitar)

    A new song that me and my stepdad have been working on. He did the playing and I recorded and cut and other stuff. Still no quite a finished song, cause the ending just isn't right. Hope you like it.

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/411694

    http://soundcloud.com/flashpantss/so-peaceful
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  • m0de
    Marble Eater
    • Jan 2006
    • 1437

    #2
    Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

    pretty cool, i liked it

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    • flashpantss
      Party Hard
      • Aug 2006
      • 1310

      #3
      Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

      Originally posted by m0de
      pretty cool, i liked it
      Thank you.
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      • DarkbearX
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        FFR Music Producer
        • Feb 2006
        • 1995

        #4
        Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

        It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound.

        Overall not bad though.
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        • flashpantss
          Party Hard
          • Aug 2006
          • 1310

          #5
          Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

          Originally posted by DarkbearX
          It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound.

          Overall not bad though.
          Yeah thats what something I was wondering, if the main melody was going to get stale to some people.

          Thanks for the feedback
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          • ~Zeta~
            Flag Master
            • Oct 2010
            • 2156

            #6
            Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

            Harmonies would be a nice addition to the melody.


            EDIT: Along with balancing.

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