So Peaceful (Guitar)

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  • flashpantss
    Party Hard
    • Aug 2006
    • 1310
    #1

    So Peaceful (Guitar)

    A new song that me and my stepdad have been working on. He did the playing and I recorded and cut and other stuff. Still no quite a finished song, cause the ending just isn't right. Hope you like it.

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/411694

    http://soundcloud.com/flashpantss/so-peaceful
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    • m0de
      Marble Eater
      • Jan 2006
      • 1437
      #2
      Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

      pretty cool, i liked it

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        • flashpantss
          Party Hard
          • Aug 2006
          • 1310
          #3
          Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

          Originally posted by m0de
          pretty cool, i liked it
          Thank you.
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            • DarkbearX
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              • Feb 2006
              • 1995
              #4
              Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

              It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound.

              Overall not bad though.
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                • flashpantss
                  Party Hard
                  • Aug 2006
                  • 1310
                  #5
                  Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

                  Originally posted by DarkbearX
                  It's a bit funny how you can see the gaps in the waveform of where the samples end/are supposed to loop. That means you need to make them more seamless, basically. The playing is alright though, gets a little stale hearing that Eb over and over and over, could use a bit of variation. I don't like the melody that's brought in at ~:55, there's some dissonance and it has a really muddy sound.

                  Overall not bad though.
                  Yeah thats what something I was wondering, if the main melody was going to get stale to some people.

                  Thanks for the feedback
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                    • ~Zeta~
                      Flag Master
                      • Oct 2010
                      • 2156
                      #6
                      Re: So Peaceful (Guitar)

                      Harmonies would be a nice addition to the melody.


                      EDIT: Along with balancing.

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